06-17-2006, 10:50 PM
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Originally Posted by Shawn8888
Endless noise in your mind
As the knife slides across the wall
Can you remember the night sky?
Does the rhythm play in your mind?
Can you forget what I’ve done?
How my life had no meaning compared to hers
As your hear the metal against concrete
Its just so much that your still alive
I feel her holding me saying you suffered enough
Is it true have you learned what you’ve done was so wrong
Or all the lives you have taken to heavens above have no meaning to any one any more
Can you stop to think if I do it again to you would you stop
Or will the death still spill to the ground all over again
Taking your life might just be the better route
I will always protect her in the end
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That was amazing. I love the story that this poem portrays. That was very simple and short, but I'd honestly have to say it's one of my favorite things I have ever read on this board. I feel like I can relate to it a lot.
Do you have anything else you could post?
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