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Old 07-23-2006, 09:48 AM   #13 (permalink)
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First things first.... "Secret Garden" is an incredible poem! I loved the descriptions and imagery... just the whole thing. I also enjoyed "Used" (especially that first stanza) and Girl in a Glass Box. Once again, great imagery - and how you made the girl feel isolated and vulnerable. Keep up the great work!

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