I remember you Arcane.
I can't give criticism either, I just pretend I can. xP So try, it's ok. Just give 1 point you like, and one point you don't. And if you can't go ahead and say "I like it" or "I don't like it."
Ok psycho_fish:
It's pretty good. It's easy to relate to, and that's good. It's also very straightfoward. I think you could add a little imagery to make it more interesting though.