Originally Posted by fallacy1901

Hey thanks you guys. Well heres another poem its really short but here it is.

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My suicide, your homicide, you drove me into this, I'm taking me out. Goodbye, I'm sorry for what you've done but I must leave you now, for I'm dying I'm crying, read my tear stained suicide note in my white room splattered with my beautiful blood, its all for you my friend cause its my world and your lie, you made me attempt the suicide...

Once again you may tell me if I need to work on something in it or if its good.