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Old 09-03-2006, 01:35 PM   #4 (permalink)
Darko
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I really like it! It sounded a little busy with the "I would give the very breath from my chest..." part. Maybe to an audience that didn't know the song... they wouldn't notice it - I was probably focusing on the lyrics too much.

It kinda gave the song a new meaning... like the person on the otherside felt exactly the same way. I cried a little.
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