Reaaallly hard to find crit with some of these, but...here I go.

I am- Great imagery, great metaphors, love the way you don't come outright with the message. Awesomeness. Although if I had to say one thing, it might be word choice. However, I don't think there's musch you need to change.

Portals To The Soul- Once again, great desccriptiveness. However, some of the phrases are a little choppy, although besides that, not much. Yoy take ajn old idea and make it yours.

...awesomeness.