In light of the new Ev album, I've been really inspired and have written three songs in three days. I call them songs because they are songy and I like to put music to them with my keyboard sometimes. Anyway, please tell me what you think. Good or Bad, just be constructive with your criticizm please.

Hurt Me
Hurt me again
I dare you to
Hurt me again
I can do worse to you

Laying by your side
Where I'd slept so soundly
But you never felt me there
Tearing out my eyes
Bleeding so profoundly
And I know that you don't care

Hurt me again
I dare you to
Taste of my sin
I'm colder than you
Hurt me again
I can do worse to you
Cry for your lost friend
She's gone, and you're through

I'm already broken
Try and crush me
You'll cut yourself up
I'm already fallen
Try and push me
I can't fall far enough

Hurt me again
I dare you to
Taste of my sin
I'm colder than you
Hurt me again
I can do worse to you
Cry for your lost friend
She's gone, and you're through

Make me hurt
I like the pain
Cut me up
Let the blood stain
Make me hurt
I like the pain
Dose me up
With hatred in my veins

Hurt me again


Dark Beauty
In the back of my mind
She won't go away
Whispering her constant lies
When will I be free
When will she let go of me
She's waiting

She's taking over me
This dark beauty
The siren of my fears
You don't remember her name
But we're one in the same
Existing within my tears

Scratching at the edge of my mind
She wants to get away
And form my life into her lies
She longs to break free
She's trying to destroy me
She's waiting

She'll take my life from me
This dark beauty
The fury of my past
She's digging my grave
For in death I'm her slave
I'd be trapped behind the mirror's glass

She knows me better than I know myself
She screams over me as I cry for help

She is only me
This dark beauty
I hold the goddess of hell
She's making me insane
I'm dizzy from the game
I won't give her my farewell

She is only me
Hiding in my mind
Please set me free
From this dark beauty


Selflessly Incomplete
I'm never good enough for you
Make me better, I'm trying to be better
Take away my soul of who I was before
For it seems I cannot be her
Self-Loathing
Empty Hoping
Selflessly Incomplete

All your thoughts are made to haunt
Making me into what I should be
This is nothing that I want
But I don't live for me

Tell me what you want me to do
How high do I have to fly to reach the stars
Let them burn through me in my sacrifice
So I know that smile is all you are
Self-Hating
Degrading
Selflessly Incomplete

All your thoughts are made to haunt
Making me into what I should be
This is nothing that I want
But I don't live for me

Make the chains tighter
Feast on the life you drain from me
For you I am a liar
So the truth will never sink too deep
What do you want me to be
I live for you, not for me

All your thoughts are made to haunt
Making me into what I should be
This is nothing that I want
But I don't live for me

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"I think I am in Hell, therefore I am there." - The Poet Jean-Nicholas Arthur Rimbaud
"I always knew I would look back on my crying and laugh, but I never thought I would look back on my laughter and cry." - Author Unknown