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Old 09-08-2006, 03:01 AM   #50 (permalink)
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Cool! i love it! i love how It's like a song, very lyrical. I love how in ways you repeat the imagery the whole way through but by changing words slightly each stanza is still new. Its kinda angry yet hopeless.

I must have Super germs.... hehe!
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