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Old 12-02-2007, 05:53 PM   #1 (permalink)
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A Poem

I write poetry here and there whenever I can. I hope to post some more soon and I'm looking forward to hearing what you guys have to say about them. Both positive/negative feedback would be nice. I want to get better from here so feel free to sya what you think about it.

Somber Ways

Dark and Dull
Wretched and Null
Farther Away
Beyond the cold...

Stairway high,
Hallways within
Far from the end,
A journey begins...

Walking into the unknown,
Afraid of the dismays
Someone please lead me,
And someone show me the ways...

Somberness come forth,
Run into diverge,
Into the light,
Free from the purge

Stairway high,
Hallways within
Far from the end,
My journey begins...
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Old 12-03-2007, 10:50 AM   #2 (permalink)
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it sounds good, can you elaborate on what it means, or what message these word are giving, i also like the slickness and intertwinning of your words.
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