A poem that I wrote - Page 2 - EvBoard

Jaded_Whisper · 08-08-2006, 01:44 PM

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Crying
Screaming
Dying
And dreaming

I really liked that part of the poem for some odd reason.

I really do like your poems buy why are all of them about suicide and cutting theirselves? Try writing about something different. It get's old when your reading peoples poems and all it's about is somebody cutting themself. Do you know what I mean? Otherwise your awesome at writing just you gotta change the theme up a bit.

If you ever want me to help you with your poems you can just pm me.

<3 Michelle

just_lies · 08-10-2006, 01:53 PM

Silence becomes you as my terror rises
You hold the cure to my illness
And you will not let go
I lay lifeless on the ground
Can you hear me screaming your name
Let go of my cure
I want to breathe again
Let go of my love
I want to sing again
Let him free
I cannot go on without him
You hold my cold lifeless body
As if it were nothing at all
You give me life once again
And I’m with my love once more

08-10-2006, 01:53 PM	#12 (permalink)
just_lies n00blet Join Date: Jul 2006 Age: 16 Posts: 13 Points: 212.75 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 212.75 Donate	Silence becomes you as my terror rises You hold the cure to my illness And you will not let go I lay lifeless on the ground Can you hear me screaming your name Let go of my cure I want to breathe again Let go of my love I want to sing again Let him free I cannot go on without him You hold my cold lifeless body As if it were nothing at all You give me life once again And I’m with my love once more Last edited by just_lies : 08-11-2006 at 03:45 PM.

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