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Old 01-08-2009, 05:41 PM   Ballad of the Severed Head Post #1
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Ballad of the Severed Head

I write songs, poems, sonnets, i also make drawings, but i'll try to post one by one.

SONGS :written by Catalina Muñoz.

Wandering Soul

"Who ye live commiting sin and being tormented by a guilty conscience, their souls shall wander in little pieces as a child spirit.
When they open their eyes, seeing themselves, wandering, lost, playing their souls to live again, waiting for some mercy from above/Would i have some time to clean myself and let me pass and say the last farthing is paid ?
And say do not pray for my soul ?"

Chorus:

Come for me
It's better if i go right to the fire than waiting for someone to judge me
From above.

I want to leave alone what i've despoiled.

(Come to play with us )

Who ye live commiting sin shall keep commiting sin and we'll born, yeas, we'll born again.

Come to play, come with us, come to play, you liar innocent.

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Old 01-12-2009, 03:40 PM   Ballad of the Severed Head Post #2
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Horses

(They go wandering without cease)
Compos sui..

Swiftly hipnotized
By the footman's craft
With no lies standing in the crowd
The black horse it's around the halo
Becoming crooked and twisted the thorn

Chorus:

But you're too weak to say no
To stay away from the one who searchs for the lost
And the horses are making of you
A feast where the reason is the last thing you'll ever know.

Horses are making you feel so hungry
And ashamed
Horses of anger, soiling the tongues
Thirtsty for souls
Crashing and raping manes of females
Of thirst and guilt
You will spin forevermore
In the hellish waterspout... chorus

They submitted the reason, as you're taking the lessons, to die
Wandering without ceasing, wrapped in the whirlwind of screams
repeating once more.
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Old 01-19-2009, 01:37 PM   Ballad of the Severed Head Post #3
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You have some good stuff here. The formatting is a bit different, however that just adds to the substance of your mystical, unique work.
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Old 01-20-2009, 04:48 PM   Ballad of the Severed Head Post #4
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Thank u, i was feeling alone. It seems that i'm different, very different, you're not the first person that says that.
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Old 01-20-2009, 05:00 PM   Ballad of the Severed Head Post #5
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What Lies Beyond

Of the eternal rain
Of the damned, cold and thick rain
A soft whip, a premonition
Keeps sinking your feets on the mud.

Finds you standing in a frozen dream with all cups filled,
Wrapped in a dress of thousand years
And still wet for tasting a hot blood cup
How tasty it feels when the blood is yours ?

Chorus:

With the hunger inside me
I'm building, i'm waiting for you
I'm going right through you
Like this is the last time to hide what lies beyond
The hunger, the emptiness , inside.

Seems not to make you happy, the hunger
Eating your will, to escape from the aching.

Dry your thirst, wrapp yourself in the juice that it's burning your skin

Chorus...

As this rain it's drawing sores in my hands....

A soft whip, keeps growing the sense of emptiness
When you already get what you wanted...

(What lies, beyond, the emptiness inside)
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Old 01-26-2009, 05:02 PM   Ballad of the Severed Head Post #6
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Poems:

The Gift


Prankish child of golden hair.
Plays with blazing fire
One cup in every step
So hard to satisfy her
Keeps the building on fire.

Jump off, is not safe in there
I'm waiting when the sky would fall
In times of endless age
A maiden wrapped in pearls and teardrops
From above mercyless pain
Only in dreams i can touch you
I see how your anxious heart beats for another one.

Hills with streams of honey
Drawing your body down to the borders
I live in the bridge with a black sea
Trapt in a "waiting fo a kiss"
Between the lips and the voice
Something it's dying
Singing in the twilight.

If you cannot sleep tonight
The stars will convence the moon
To make a cradle in your heart.

The kindest heart, i've found
A thinker that makes me smile
Rides a black horse through the oasis
Jewel among the hopeless land
A dream come true.

Trapt in the bright of your eyes
Useless flight to ever be a butterfly
Rosebud, do not stumble
Under the wine-bag
Near of the poison
Endless friendship, the biggest gift you could ever gave me
Nimbus of the seven seas.

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Old 01-26-2009, 05:18 PM   Ballad of the Severed Head Post #7
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Spotless

Pours wisedom among tears of happiness
A fragile soul becomes a victim of nothingness
The beasts around her are waiting for the final judgement
So sensitive in her dress
She breaks the old clotes to born again.

Why are you crying, my sweet innocent ?
The waves are singing among whispers
And is for you when the wind blows
I speak and dance for you.

Separated by the olden lands
But bound in a passionate love for the witness
Of a calling, in soothing music
Of a big little boy, the fate of playing in hell
Who would it be a devil to be your shoulder ?
Rediming of our sins, spotless.

I'll stand by this SISTERHOOD
Forget this not
Wither and die the violet
I'll wait 'til the sun dies.

I can feel you
Pure, new, as the first bread of the morning
Spotless as the child of the nature
Saying hi to all the hidden bliss
And a cold goodbye the ocean home that was your womb.
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Old 01-26-2009, 05:25 PM   Ballad of the Severed Head Post #8
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Nymph

The darkest violin
In hands of the youngest lady
Incertainties from pandora's box
Nothing more than a haunting sound from afar
Seducing the sailor
One more of your darkest deeds.

Slow down curious female
Are you in love wtih someone ?
Am i thinking wit the wrong filter ?

Leave your own garden without flowers
Walk barefoot over the sand
Enjoy every year of your life
Slow down youngest maiden.

I say beautiful by nature
Muse of mistery
With unique name among the nymphs
Make me your disciple
I follow you through the seas.

Convert the bitter songs into the sweet
The tears you've cried into the bliss
The things you've learned into a seed
And see how it grows strong and fructiferous
The oak with a new dream
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Old 01-26-2009, 09:45 PM   Ballad of the Severed Head Post #9
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Welcome. Man, you need more commentors!
Each of your poems has a chilling effect, and I can't say that about many writers out there.
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Old 01-30-2009, 03:33 PM   Ballad of the Severed Head Post #10
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Honey, you know how to make me feel good. My self-esteem is low, but you are rising it again, thank u !!!!!!!
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