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Sweet Tigger · 03-04-2008, 03:59 PM

Darkness

The feeling I feel, can sometimes be so
overwhelming and so unreal.
Its like feeling so trapped, like I'm in the deepest hole.
Being so uncertin what the next day will bring, not
understanding why I keep having to go through the exact
same things.
Everything feels so gloomy and dark, just wishing for a
way I can just break myself free, and not having to feel
like nothing is real.
Being trapped inside my very own soul, all these feelings
and emotions remain untold.
Feeling like I am falling inside the deepesr well,
no light, and no more energy for the will to fight.
The hurt and pain becoming unbarable, its like being
stabbed with the sharpest knife.
Trying to call out, but there is no one to hear me,
I have to pull all my power I have left, for the will to fight
so I can set myself free.
I think to myself, I know this isn't the way it has to be.
I know in the end, the light will once again,
Shine On Me.

~river~ · 03-04-2008, 05:28 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sweet Tigger

Darkness

Being trapped inside my very own soul, all these feelings
and emotions remain untold.
Feeling like I am falling inside the deepesr well,
no light, and no more energy for the will to fight.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sweet Tigger

Trying to call out, but there is no one to hear me,
I have to pull all my power I have left, for the will to fight
so I can set myself free.
I think to myself, I know this isn't the way it has to be.
I know in the end, the light will once again,
Shine On Me.

i love these parts trina, and i love the turn around in it, from despair to a fighting attitude, i very much like

Sweet Tigger · 03-08-2008, 01:37 AM

Sorrow

I feel my whole world just crashing down
Everything around me stands so silent, not even a sound.

Its like I'm in a world all alone, standing very still,
feeling paralized, and no longer having the will.

I feel like I'm falling, I can't see a single thing...
never knowing what later will bring

I'm so tired, of always feeling so much pain... I
don't know, if things will ever be the same again.

My heart and soul beyond repair,
a dark haunted evil stare.

Trapped inside myself, never being able to exscape.
falling into a thousand peices, never able to be fixed.

Tears all come crashing down, like in a worst storm
forever feeling ever so torn.

Needing to force myself, just to be strong, the will
needed to get through all of this, seems so far gone.

Not knowing if I can ever be the same, finding that path,
too take me in the right direction, I know I must take.
And once again, find all that faith.

Sweet Tigger · 03-09-2008, 12:49 AM

Broken Heart

A broken heart, full of hurt and pain
Never seeing the time of day.

Wondering if things will ever be okay....
Darkness will always be here to stay.

Like a very cold winters day,
Never icecles melting away.

Frozen ground, all around..
nowhere to hear a single sound.

Feeling never to be free,
never finding any peace....
Always wanting to stay asleep.

But one day to come around
waking up to hear a very sweet sound
Of the summer's day, now I know things will
be okay.

I can now set myself free, I can find my true self
Its like seeing a beautiful angels wings.

~river~ · 03-09-2008, 12:57 AM

trina i love "broken heart"
so many lines and verus there were just beautfil and very touching

Sweet Tigger · 03-28-2008, 11:20 PM

Lost Inside Me

Feeling like apart me me
Is now gone
Everything stops,
not hearing a single sound

Like a frozen heart, waiting to melt
to have the feeling of love
once again

Feeling this emptyness
comes on apon me
Like a sharp pain
that jolts me
running through my body

Like being lost, no one
to hear, or to find me
not being able to find a way out

Every beat of my heart
sheds a tear
your not hear....
has only become my
worst fear

Knowing all the things you
have always said to me,
Chin up, and always keep
that smile

All I can do right now is frown
missing that certin part of me
Nowhere too be found.

Feeling like apart of me
is now gone.

Sweet Tigger · 04-08-2008, 08:58 PM

What Lies Benieth

A cold heart
Never would have thought.
So much pain
Will never forget.
Just the thought that flashes through my mind
never want to relive, that place and time.
All the hate that flows through my vains,
can never earse all that pain.
Feeling like being jailed, finding my escape
always failed.
Feeling like there was nothing left...
feeling in dispare taking a last breath.
Through all those years, that we were one...
regret is only what it has all become.

Being able to now finally escape, all that
hurt and pain....
And now being the stronger person I am today.

Dragoknight · 04-17-2008, 03:53 PM

There seems to be one thing which shows itself in most of these poems. They all give me the impression of someone searching for freedom. Someone trying to find strength through hard times and release themself from the struggle. It seems like finding freedom is a major influence in your poems.

Sweet Tigger · 04-17-2008, 07:52 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dragoknight

There seems to be one thing which shows itself in most of these poems. They all give me the impression of someone searching for freedom. Someone trying to find strength through hard times and release themself from the struggle. It seems like finding freedom is a major influence in your poems.

I never had, anyone really look at them in that aspect.
But yes, it is about finding that freedom, from what I have been through,
and finding that strength, and knowing that I have beat the challenges.
Its like taking a deep breath of very fresh air.
Overcoming everything in ones life.
Proving that, deep down if you look hard enough, Everyone does have
that will, power, and courage, and strength, you just have to know when
to use it, and find it.

Dragoknight · 04-19-2008, 04:35 PM

yeah, it's true, everyone does have that strength inside them, but a lot of people can't find it, or they don't try to find it. I've found it, I found it a few years ago when I was the victim of constant bullying. I see that strength is an important aspect. Freedom is something else I regard highly...and I'm almost always searching for it too.

03-04-2008, 03:59 PM	#11 (permalink)
Sweet Tigger Pure Hearted Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Over The Rainbow Age: 31 Posts: 2,590 Points: 2,941.30 Bank: 95,521.95 Total Points: 98,463.25 Donate $PIE. \m/ Heh, you're awesome. :D - CrownlessAgain$	Darkness The feeling I feel, can sometimes be so overwhelming and so unreal. Its like feeling so trapped, like I'm in the deepest hole. Being so uncertin what the next day will bring, not understanding why I keep having to go through the exact same things. Everything feels so gloomy and dark, just wishing for a way I can just break myself free, and not having to feel like nothing is real. Being trapped inside my very own soul, all these feelings and emotions remain untold. Feeling like I am falling inside the deepesr well, no light, and no more energy for the will to fight. The hurt and pain becoming unbarable, its like being stabbed with the sharpest knife. Trying to call out, but there is no one to hear me, I have to pull all my power I have left, for the will to fight so I can set myself free. I think to myself, I know this isn't the way it has to be. I know in the end, the light will once again, Shine On Me. __________________ Always Believe In Your Self!!! Last edited by Sweet Tigger : 03-04-2008 at 04:02 PM.

03-08-2008, 01:37 AM	#13 (permalink)
Sweet Tigger Pure Hearted Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Over The Rainbow Age: 31 Posts: 2,590 Points: 2,941.30 Bank: 95,521.95 Total Points: 98,463.25 Donate $PIE. \m/ Heh, you're awesome. :D - CrownlessAgain$	Sorrow I feel my whole world just crashing down Everything around me stands so silent, not even a sound. Its like I'm in a world all alone, standing very still, feeling paralized, and no longer having the will. I feel like I'm falling, I can't see a single thing... never knowing what later will bring I'm so tired, of always feeling so much pain... I don't know, if things will ever be the same again. My heart and soul beyond repair, a dark haunted evil stare. Trapped inside myself, never being able to exscape. falling into a thousand peices, never able to be fixed. Tears all come crashing down, like in a worst storm forever feeling ever so torn. Needing to force myself, just to be strong, the will needed to get through all of this, seems so far gone. Not knowing if I can ever be the same, finding that path, too take me in the right direction, I know I must take. And once again, find all that faith. __________________ Always Believe In Your Self!!!

03-09-2008, 12:49 AM	#14 (permalink)
Sweet Tigger Pure Hearted Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Over The Rainbow Age: 31 Posts: 2,590 Points: 2,941.30 Bank: 95,521.95 Total Points: 98,463.25 Donate $PIE. \m/ Heh, you're awesome. :D - CrownlessAgain$	Broken Heart A broken heart, full of hurt and pain Never seeing the time of day. Wondering if things will ever be okay.... Darkness will always be here to stay. Like a very cold winters day, Never icecles melting away. Frozen ground, all around.. nowhere to hear a single sound. Feeling never to be free, never finding any peace.... Always wanting to stay asleep. But one day to come around waking up to hear a very sweet sound Of the summer's day, now I know things will be okay. I can now set myself free, I can find my true self Its like seeing a beautiful angels wings. __________________ Always Believe In Your Self!!!

03-09-2008, 12:57 AM	#15 (permalink)
~river~ Likes Stilts! Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: at the heart of your darkest nightmares and deepest desires Age: 20 Posts: 1,785 Points: 860.85 Bank: 113,665.59 Total Points: 114,526.44 Donate	trina i love "broken heart" so many lines and verus there were just beautfil and very touching __________________ There's no aphrodisiac like loneliness, truth, beauty and a picture of you. Words are flying out like endless rain into a paper cup They slither while they pass They slip away across the universe Pools of sorrow waves of Joy are drifting thorough my open mind

03-28-2008, 11:20 PM	#16 (permalink)
Sweet Tigger Pure Hearted Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Over The Rainbow Age: 31 Posts: 2,590 Points: 2,941.30 Bank: 95,521.95 Total Points: 98,463.25 Donate $PIE. \m/ Heh, you're awesome. :D - CrownlessAgain$	Lost Inside Me Feeling like apart me me Is now gone Everything stops, not hearing a single sound Like a frozen heart, waiting to melt to have the feeling of love once again Feeling this emptyness comes on apon me Like a sharp pain that jolts me running through my body Like being lost, no one to hear, or to find me not being able to find a way out Every beat of my heart sheds a tear your not hear.... has only become my worst fear Knowing all the things you have always said to me, Chin up, and always keep that smile All I can do right now is frown missing that certin part of me Nowhere too be found. Feeling like apart of me is now gone. __________________ Always Believe In Your Self!!!

04-08-2008, 08:58 PM	#17 (permalink)
Sweet Tigger Pure Hearted Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Over The Rainbow Age: 31 Posts: 2,590 Points: 2,941.30 Bank: 95,521.95 Total Points: 98,463.25 Donate $PIE. \m/ Heh, you're awesome. :D - CrownlessAgain$	What Lies Benieth A cold heart Never would have thought. So much pain Will never forget. Just the thought that flashes through my mind never want to relive, that place and time. All the hate that flows through my vains, can never earse all that pain. Feeling like being jailed, finding my escape always failed. Feeling like there was nothing left... feeling in dispare taking a last breath. Through all those years, that we were one... regret is only what it has all become. Being able to now finally escape, all that hurt and pain.... And now being the stronger person I am today. __________________ Always Believe In Your Self!!!

04-17-2008, 03:53 PM	#18 (permalink)
Dragoknight The Trusted One Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: England Posts: 94 Points: 25,445.35 Bank: 90,088.02 Total Points: 115,533.37 Donate	There seems to be one thing which shows itself in most of these poems. They all give me the impression of someone searching for freedom. Someone trying to find strength through hard times and release themself from the struggle. It seems like finding freedom is a major influence in your poems. __________________ This is my life! And there is nothing you can do about it! To think that life is enough, is to be killed by your own existence.

04-19-2008, 04:35 PM	#20 (permalink)
Dragoknight The Trusted One Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: England Posts: 94 Points: 25,445.35 Bank: 90,088.02 Total Points: 115,533.37 Donate	yeah, it's true, everyone does have that strength inside them, but a lot of people can't find it, or they don't try to find it. I've found it, I found it a few years ago when I was the victim of constant bullying. I see that strength is an important aspect. Freedom is something else I regard highly...and I'm almost always searching for it too. __________________ This is my life! And there is nothing you can do about it! To think that life is enough, is to be killed by your own existence.