cheers.. that one took me about 10 mins to write..with a brush up (as i call it) after about a week, where i edit out all the crppy parts, or i replace words that sound better..

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thanks for the comment Nadine.. i appreciate anythin said! Ill be putting many more up over the next few days..cuz i have many stashed away in my room.. the 1st one 'Trick of the mind' and 'worst of the week' were the 1st two full length songs/poems i wrote.. i call them poems cuz i not yet written music to them.. iv tried but it never sounds right to me, so i leave them as they are..

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I do that sometimes too. It helps to make everything sound better, and have a better flow.

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i've read some of yours..( i think i replied to your thread) they're great!!! I love them! you right way better than moi!

I have a few more that i'll type up, i actually wrote two whole ones y-day./..after havin 2weeks in a country without a pen or paper..i have alot of stuff stored in my brain waiting to be penned out..soo...beware!!!

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Yes, I think I saw you around. I'm glad you like what I write.

I can't wait to read more.

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I'm type them up tomorrow when i have more time

does anyone know how to change the title of your thread? I looked at yours (Im_Broken) and saw you have put photography in yours.. i am quite a photographer too and would love to show all of you my stuff.. I mite just put it in this thread dispite it only saying lyrics...

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Ok..double post here..but i think its worth it..here goes...


Wasted Time

You messed me around,
You screwed me up,
Just 'cause you knew I liked you.

you scratched my heart,
And screwed me around,
Tell me, why did i like you?

But my mind still showed signs,
Of my heart beating strong,
When your name is mentioned to me,
And although i hate you for all the pain,
I can't forget our past.

You never really liked me did you?
Well you say you never knew,
Your confused mind just played along,
So that i didn't know too.

Wll don't worry now,
All is not lost of my heart,
Its been given to someone who cares,
Someone who knows who I am,
Someone who tells me who they are.

You messed me around,
You screwed me up,
But I know longer like you!


Your Song

You're not here and I'm all alone,
I just want you to come home,
2 weeks have past since you went,
I'll miss you, wasn't what I ment.

I'd die without you in my arms,
And I'd cry a thousand tears,
I only knew you a few months,
But I have loved you for years.

Get back home to me,
With me is where you belong,
I still love you more as these days go by,
So i wrote you this song.

Why didn't I let you in at first?
Why did I take so long?
I'm writing this down, my apology,
Of our time wasted, in this song.

Your smile, your eyes, your soul,
Your perfect in every way,
And all of this time,
That's all I needed to say.

Please here my song, your song, our song,
Come back to me where you belong.

Two completely contrasting songs..but hey!! They are about two different people!

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lol You can tell they're about different people... well I can at least. I think the first one flowed well, though I think it could of been a tiny bit more creative but I liked the slightly angry feel to it. I loved the second one because it made me think about how it was thought up and human emotions and needs. Over all I think you got some skill and you need to keep writing!

Btw, the mods are slightly less strict on double posting in the "your stuff" forum. I don't think they'll be mad in this case.

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If you ask one of the mods to change it, they should be able to do that for you. I need to have more pictures in my thread though.

Anyways, I really love the song Wasted Time. That one is very well written. I love both that you have up right now, but Wasted Time is something I can relate to.

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