Cheers for the compliment I love photography.. capturing the moment

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Exactly! Kind of afraid it's going to slip away.

yeah.. i personally hate digital cameras at the moment.. i prefer getting photos developed. they're more personal.. and although having digital photos are possibly easier.. i.e, editing them, or storing, and being able to put them on the net for all your nosy friends haha.. and sometimes theres trub with that (EG WT photos haha) but.. proper film photos, just look nicer on a wall, or in an album e.t.c i just prefer them.... not sure what made me go off on this tangent.. but im in a ranting mood lol

so.. im over-run with inspiration for songs atm... notice the two songs I just added seems quite similar??! that's because they were written within two minutes of each other lol. .. they're similar in the way that they're written about teh same person... or not so much as a person.. an idol / peer..

im a jewel in the rough again!

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However, you can print out photos off of a digicam on "photopaper", looks just like a developed pic! But I understand your point. I do love my digicam though haha.

yeah.. we have photo paper.. still isnt the same though.. i like the excitement of not knowing what the photos are like until you get them developed.. although i sometimes get upset with the quality of them.. I supose digital is cheaper..you can delete the crappy ones

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Your use of commas and pauses/rests in your poems and songs is very effective, and you do it really well in most of them. My only regret is that on some of them, I'm sure I lose the rhythm that you've intended. ::Sigh:: thus is the complication with just the words on the page.

In your most recent ones (I can't remember what they were called, or the titles... prolly wrecked something, and something else?)... anyway, in those two, I noticed a very prominent lack of flow. I wasn't able to just keep going and going, like I could with all of your others and pick up on some kind of natural rhythm. I think you said you were crying when you wrote one of them, and that might have had something to do with it.

It's probably something with the syllables, I'd imagination... or that your assonance is off. I'm sure it was just because you were upset, and threw caution to the wind. Something to help you in making sure that everyone on the board will read your writing in the way that you're thinking it, is to read it out loud to yourself, before posting. Only pause at your commas, and the ends of the lines... try not to read it in the way that you think it should sound, but read it just by the way it looks, because that's all we have to go off of here.

Anyway, your ability to make the rhymes come together is just very graceful... I really enjoyed it; especially in the song in your very first post - heh, that's what got me to keep reading 'em. So you're doing great, lol... keep it up - and keep posting more of your stuff!

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WOW especially the mountain ones are GORGEOUS. And I know you know, but you're such a cute girl!

ha.. thanks..
Im the one holding the Apple Of Life!

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