Heya! This is the first time I have ever posted my stuff, so people..only contrustive critisism!! lol

Trick of the Mind

In too deep,
So Confused,
Answers I'm longing to find,
Ideas, solutions,
Aims and Goals,
But only possible in my mind.

I'm just frightened,
scared,
worried for you,
secrets, so sacred,
If only you knew,


you don't understand,
You didn't deserve any of this,
But don't let this shit take control,
Release your power,
You take the reigns,
Before your life takes its toll.

I'm just frightened,
scared,
worried for you,
secrets, so sacred,
If only you knew,
All I want is to see you back,
Next to me where you belong.

The hell, ache and fear,
No more to come,
The end it just so near,
but your heart is worn down, numb.

I'm just frightened,
scared,
worried for you,
If only you knew,

The answers you seek,
All you need to find,
Never did belong.

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Hey. I was like not gonna reply cuz I'm really freaking lazy but everyone should get at least one reply to their first post of their stuff. (If that makes sence)

But yeah I found I related to this alot. I enjoyed the metaphors involved and loved the way it ended. :-( sorry I kinda suck at this stuff.

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Anger. The emotion of change.
Kill for me.

wow that was deep. I think the stuff I write is generally simple. It's good to see what the other side looks like. Anyways its good stuff. Ciao.

cheers you guys... Il add more stuff later when Im more awake... just got back from holidays... on a long LONG flight!!

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That's very well written. You did a great job with that. I like it a lot.

I can't wait to see more of what you have.

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-Rach- ((Check out my stuff))

wow!! thanks all of you for the nice comments! means alot.. ok, as promised... although most of the lyrics n poems are complete.. i usually write some bit n pieces and then go back to it at a later date to finish it off.. wierd i know!

Fall

Spiritual Changes
Instant fazes
Long stares through my eyes
glistening ice
life to sufice
my situation holds no lies

Heavenly whispers
Musicians and singers
All with our silent cries
No hidden paths
or treasure maps
go smarm among the flies

I forgot it all
This perfect place
with such sweetness taste
Now that i awake
I jump and fall

Worst of the Week

Falling Forever
With nothing to catch me
plummit to the end

Falling forever
Silence around me
you didnt want to offend

But you did,
cause you betrayed a friend
and you now
finally got what you wanted
(at the cost of me)

This is the worst week
where im falling forever
because those i entrusted
didnt want to offend

did all that lying really help your battered conscience?

But you did,
cause you betrayed a friend
and you now
finally got what you wanted
(at the cost of me)

Beating Heart

Beating Heart that don't let go
Mind that wont listen when you say no
Feelings that luster and love you so
I've never given up

Beating hearts that wont back down
please make a smile from this frown
You;re around again and i pound
I'll never give up on you.

Beating heart that now is broken
mind that now understood all that was spoken
I found someone better that listens to me
I've finally given up on you.

More coming in a few...

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I really like "Fall", and "Worst of the Week." Those two are awesome. I love "Beating Heart" also. You write very well. Keep up the great work. You do such a nice job.

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thank you!!!!! mm, i feel better now... some of the songs.. (that ill type up later) i have writen years ago.. and iv kept them in a little box lol... i feels nice to finally release them...

here's a poem.. witch i guess could be a song too.. here goes,.

Let Me Go

When the angels fall from heaven
when the hell's flames burn out
when my heart turns blue with coldness
the earth no longer round

when i give up on creation
when the magic fades to cease
when sunlight and darkness merge
them my heart will fail to pound

the monsters deep inside me
everlasting and cursed
my soul will cleanse on the last day
clarify my new beginning

i anger in my sadness
i'm fighting my resistance
im crying within my fears
let the pain end

the mystic of warfare
and dream-like cries
wierd illusions i see in the night
my mind is full of these crazy emotions
but i wont give up the fight

Just promise me something,
If the choice was left for you,
Save my soul,
Take the risk,
let me go.

Let me go.

Let me go.

Recently edited, decided to change the ending..and correct spelling

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No problem.

I love "Let Me Go." It's a great poem/song. Awesome job once again.

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