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10-16-2005, 11:37 PM
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Pura Vida
 Join Date: Dec 2004
Location: Costa Rica
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well... about your songs... r very nice... congratulations!....
when u have more post please!....
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10-17-2005, 09:31 AM
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Join Date: Sep 2005
Location: The island of lost sunglasses
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EDIT: Here is a poem I wrote last year: (God I'm so emo.....) The second of December I had made up my mind. I decided I was left way too far behind All I wanted was to end my life with the cut of a blade So I did it at a quarter ‘till eight Yes, the plan worked and I had died But where I went was a big surprise It was far from heaven and far from hell “I must be in a Gothic Paradise.” I thought to myself I had dreamed of this place since I was a child But I had dreamed of it tender and mild. For this place were certainly not any of those Unlike anything you would ever find in Vogue. Welcoming me were fallen angels from the sky And they asked me “What brought you to your suicide?” I tell them “I was unhappy. I am a fallen angel, just like you.” “Oh, young girl, you were far from us. You had so much left to do!” “The world rejected me, all the time I was oh so blue!” “Very well, one day, in this realm you will be a fallen angel, too” I walk around and find that I am dressed differently than before my death. My dark, raven hair curly and teased high And a black corseted dress that is pulled tight. Black ballet shoes grace my feet Wrapped until the ribbon meets my knee “I look beautiful for once in my life!” And then I remember I’m no longer alive I sit in the field of Midnight Blue daisies Everything here seems a little hazy Suddenly, a voice I hear. He says “The end is near”. I see the man who speaks these words His face is hidden by a dark black hood. He holds out his hand wanting me to hold As I grip it I feel deep pains within my soul. Roses bleeding the blood of torment and hate But I fear, it’s far too late Stabbed with the thorns of the bleeding roses, I look to the clouds that the purple sky composes. Ravens flying through the air screaming “Nevermore! Nevermore!” And nevermore is right I close my eyes and say goodnight Last edited by Courtnee : 10-17-2005 at 02:13 PM. |
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10-26-2005, 05:14 PM
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Mega Post Monkey
Join Date: Dec 2003
Location: London
Age: 21
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Critiquing as requested
 Your singing isn't bad. It could use some improvement though. It sounds like you're not supporting your air when you go higher; that's why you went flat and died out when you reached the high notes in the BMTL intro. Don't try to reach for the notes, stretch out your neck/tilt your head up, or think that you're going catastrophically high. All of the above will make you go flat and/or choke up. Support yourself by pulling your diaphragm (i.e. stomach muscles) in as you go higher. Stand on two feet, don't sit. (And seriously? Think down. Like you're sitting on the pitch, not reaching for it) Then you'll have better support. Support = more strength, less flat notes, and more accuracy. I would check out the Advice for Fellow Singers thread in the Completely Off-Topic forum; there's LOADS of good advice in there. You're off to a good start. Every singer needs to aspire to be better than she is now; work at it, and you'll get better and better before you know it.
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11-01-2005, 08:18 PM
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11-14-2005, 04:44 PM
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So I really want to hear some of your songs...but it keeps saying it can't find the URL. I both clicked on the links and copied and pasted them into my browser...I don't know if it's my comp that's the problem, of the website itself, but I just thought I'd let you know...
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11-14-2005, 08:52 PM
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11-25-2005, 10:32 PM
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Pura Vida
Join Date: Dec 2004
Location: Costa Rica
Age: 20
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hello guy!
Congratulations for your nice work!
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