Crooning to Covers and Genuine Confusion - EvBoard

MsSchizophrenia · 07-23-2006, 10:55 AM

Alright. So I'm a novice guitar player, and I'm currently writing a song. Once it's completed, I will post it here, but for now, here's a rather cheesy cover of my singing "The Rose" by Bette Midler. Be honest. Nothing is worse than telling someone he or she is great when really he or she is worthy of Simon's chainsaw.

http://depositfiles.com/en/files/542..._Rose.mp3.html

bubble_gum · 07-23-2006, 01:43 PM

Wow. Kristine. Niiiiice vibrato. It's steady. =]
Deep voice too, sooo unexpected from a tiny young girl.
Brilliant.

I like it.

MsSchizophrenia · 07-26-2006, 09:05 PM

Thanks, again, Desiree. Your support is priceless.

Lost November Rain
You wander, soaked in the acid
Of the stillborn joy that came your way
Droplet toxic; your charms become rusted
On your wrists taut with grayness; thin like your face
Waiting, fading, keeping your watch
You count down time in a telephone booth
The Canadian dime won’t do what you ask it
For it’s partial towards the boy up the street

Chorus:
“Come down now, November rain
Are you there like you were last year?
I hear you, dry and weak
Profaned, never wanting to see me again
Be the hand that always lives
The penance that needs to stay
Be the truth that gives me a vision
Saying you’ll be the same.”

You’re breathing that Terrible Trouble
In the sky so dark that has bloodied your eyes
Untouched wonders, needy they seem
Won’t take a ride beneath those dead dimming lights
Thinking, shaking, losing your care
And love for everything of yearly life
How shortly will it be before
We run without our weakened dream?

Chorus:
“Come down now, November rain
Are you there like you were last year?
I hear you, dry and weak
Profaned, never wanting to see me again
Be the hand that always lives
The penance that needs to stay
Be the truth that gives me a vision
Saying you’ll be the same.”

(Repeat Chorus one more time)

Be the words, so simple, still trying
To help me find my faith
Be the feeling that leaves me to rest
My lost November rain

*^These are lyrics I wrote a while back. I decided to mess around today and record myself singing it. Now, I know I may not blow you away, 'cause I'm not a Mariah Carey, Christina Aguilera, Whitney Houston, etc. However, I am trying to find my own unique voice, one that showcases my personality, so tell me if you like what you hear! Note that I also tweaked the words up, but bare with me. Also pardon me on my awkward timing, but at the same time, just be honest about what you hear. Thanks.

***So I decided to edit this, because I was not satisfied with the recording I posted yesterday. I felt that this song could be altered into an... acapella interlude, kind of like Tori Amos' "Wampum Prayer". And my voice isn't feeling so good, so I didn't feel like pushing myself. Well, enjoy. If you think it's sh!t, tell me so. Again, I want to find my own voice. I don't care about sounding mega-diva amazing, if that's what they call it nowadays.

***Whoops. I edited it again. This time, I'm truly satisfied. "Enjoy". Honesty, please.

http://www.purevolume.com/kittyscherbatsky

hostcord · 07-26-2006, 09:12 PM

Very beautiful voice...

Envyway · 07-27-2006, 06:09 PM

You have a brilliant vibrato in your voice, i would love to acheive a sound like that someday and I loved the intro, is it an original song that you wrote? It reminds me of a lullaby i heared when I was younger, however that was in Spanish.

MsSchizophrenia · 07-27-2006, 06:11 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Envyway

You have a brilliant vibrato in your voice, i would love to acheive a sound like that someday and I loved the intro, is it an original song that you wrote? It reminds me of a lullaby i heared when I was younger, however that was in Spanish.

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Thank you so much, Envyway! Yes, it's an original song I wrote. Ahh... a Spanish lullaby, eh? Sounds elegant. Glad you like it!

chii_chan · 08-22-2006, 12:56 PM

Wow!! You have a great voice, I love it *wants more*

07-23-2006, 10:55 AM	#1 (permalink)
MsSchizophrenia Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: In the back of a murky Chevy van with a loofa named George. Age: 17 Posts: 77 Points: 144.87 Bank: 47.85 Total Points: 192.72 Donate	Crooning to Covers and Genuine Confusion Alright. So I'm a novice guitar player, and I'm currently writing a song. Once it's completed, I will post it here, but for now, here's a rather cheesy cover of my singing "The Rose" by Bette Midler. Be honest. Nothing is worse than telling someone he or she is great when really he or she is worthy of Simon's chainsaw. http://depositfiles.com/en/files/542..._Rose.mp3.html Last edited by MsSchizophrenia : 07-23-2006 at 01:15 PM.

07-23-2006, 01:43 PM	#2 (permalink)
bubble_gum Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Texas Age: 17 Posts: 62 Points: 197.41 Bank: 141.87 Total Points: 339.28 Donate	Wow. Kristine. Niiiiice vibrato. It's steady. =] Deep voice too, sooo unexpected from a tiny young girl. Brilliant. I like it. __________________ Johnny Depp=love.

07-26-2006, 09:05 PM	#3 (permalink)
MsSchizophrenia Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: In the back of a murky Chevy van with a loofa named George. Age: 17 Posts: 77 Points: 144.87 Bank: 47.85 Total Points: 192.72 Donate	Singing an Original Song Thanks, again, Desiree. Your support is priceless. Lost November Rain You wander, soaked in the acid Of the stillborn joy that came your way Droplet toxic; your charms become rusted On your wrists taut with grayness; thin like your face Waiting, fading, keeping your watch You count down time in a telephone booth The Canadian dime won’t do what you ask it For it’s partial towards the boy up the street Chorus: “Come down now, November rain Are you there like you were last year? I hear you, dry and weak Profaned, never wanting to see me again Be the hand that always lives The penance that needs to stay Be the truth that gives me a vision Saying you’ll be the same.” You’re breathing that Terrible Trouble In the sky so dark that has bloodied your eyes Untouched wonders, needy they seem Won’t take a ride beneath those dead dimming lights Thinking, shaking, losing your care And love for everything of yearly life How shortly will it be before We run without our weakened dream? Chorus: “Come down now, November rain Are you there like you were last year? I hear you, dry and weak Profaned, never wanting to see me again Be the hand that always lives The penance that needs to stay Be the truth that gives me a vision Saying you’ll be the same.” (Repeat Chorus one more time) Be the words, so simple, still trying To help me find my faith Be the feeling that leaves me to rest My lost November rain ^These are lyrics I wrote a while back. I decided to mess around today and record myself singing it. Now, I know I may not blow you away, 'cause I'm not a Mariah Carey, Christina Aguilera, Whitney Houston, etc. However, I am trying to find my own unique voice, one that showcases my personality, so tell me if you like what you hear! Note that I also tweaked the words up, but bare with me. Also pardon me on my awkward timing, but at the same time, just be honest about what you hear. Thanks. So I decided to edit this, because I was not satisfied with the recording I posted yesterday. I felt that this song could be altered into an... acapella interlude, kind of like Tori Amos' "Wampum Prayer". And my voice isn't feeling so good, so I didn't feel like pushing myself. Well, enjoy. If you think it's sh!t, tell me so. Again, I want to find my own voice. I don't care about sounding mega-diva amazing, if that's what they call it nowadays. Whoops. I edited it again. This time, I'm truly satisfied. "Enjoy". Honesty, please. http://www.purevolume.com/kittyscherbatsky __________________ Princess Kitty Alexandrovna Scherbatsky - Nostalgia Last edited by MsSchizophrenia : 07-27-2006 at 05:25 PM.*

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