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Daniel's Stuff-Poems and so
I decided to make a Thread containing every of my stuff. I will edit it and all later on, Mostly witih poems or songs.
Well, This one's about someone whom his friend has gone, thinking of why he suffers so much more than anybody else. {[UnBlessed]} So much time has gone since then So many words have been told, And When I look up, out of my window to see all I can think of.. Those wounds, The ones that have caused This pain, this turture still feels so Close Though I know it's been so much time ago, It won't go awayy.. [Chorus] Why isn't the time Erasing it Why isn't the waiting Fading it Tell me what I've done wrong Tell my how you're so strong These feelings just will not be Gone.. Tell me how to be, Tell me how to stand Tell me what you do that makes it End.. Since you've left I can barely breath Since I'm alone I can't even sleep Waiting, Wondering why's god so Heartless Thinking about them, Them, That got blessed Why can't I be happy for once, Happy with what I have? Tell me how to be, Tell me how to stand Tell me what you do that makes it End; Tell me how to act, what Shall I even do? Tell me how to Help the bless to break through.. Last edited by Pixelized : 03-15-2006 at 09:23 AM. |
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Fledgling Post Monkey
Join Date: Jan 2005
Location: Illinois
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I really like the structure to that song. You made everything so meaningful, and you described everything very well, and you got the message across. Great job with the song. I hope to see more of your stuff soon.
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-Rach- ((Check out my stuff)) when it starts to rain break out the slip and slide
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