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Old 03-14-2006, 03:41 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Daniel's Stuff-Poems and so

I decided to make a Thread containing every of my stuff. I will edit it and all later on, Mostly witih poems or songs.

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This one's about someone whom his friend has gone, thinking of why he suffers so much more than anybody else.



{[UnBlessed]}

So much time has gone since then
So many words have been told, And
When I look up, out of my window to see
all I can think of..
Those wounds, The ones that have caused
This pain, this turture still feels so Close
Though I know it's been so much time ago,
It won't go awayy..

[Chorus]
Why isn't the time Erasing it
Why isn't the waiting Fading it
Tell me what I've done wrong
Tell my how you're so strong
These feelings just will not be Gone..

Tell me how to be, Tell me how to stand
Tell me what you do that makes it End..

Since you've left I can barely breath
Since I'm alone I can't even sleep
Waiting, Wondering why's god so Heartless
Thinking about them, Them, That got blessed
Why can't I be happy for once,
Happy with what I have?

Tell me how to be, Tell me how to stand
Tell me what you do that makes it End;
Tell me how to act, what Shall I even do?
Tell me how to Help the bless to break through..

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Old 03-14-2006, 05:51 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I really like the structure to that song. You made everything so meaningful, and you described everything very well, and you got the message across. Great job with the song. I hope to see more of your stuff soon.
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Old 03-15-2006, 12:58 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Main post's been edited :}

Im broken, thank you, I do apreciate it ;]

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