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Old 01-21-2008, 08:40 AM   #1 (permalink)
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'Death of me' dedicated to Ev.

I hope this isn't embarrassing for anyone to read. This is the first meaningful song I've ever written.
When I wrote this song, I was having a real difficult time trying to convince my parents that I wasn't taking my obsession with Evanescence too far. But I had. Ev used to be the only thing I'd think about until my parents snapped my out of my dream-world and threw away and deleted all of my stuff to do with Ev. Anyway, this piece shows how much Ev has affected me personally!


Death of me
(Dedicated to Evanescence, whose music is my escape or dream)


Lying awake, I cannot sleep.
I need you. I pine for you.
Come to me, my love
and sing to me your song
with your angelic voice
and long raven hair,
lying with me until the morning
when dreams do part.


Was any of it real?
The passion in my heart says so.
Thumping wildly,
you caused my heart to explode.
You surely are the death of me.


Obsession driven to compulsion.
You're the sweetest drug I've ever taken.
Streams of you, instead of blood.
You're running me out,
but I love you too much.
So stay with me, my love,
until death do us part,
or fantasy caves-in.


Do you even care?
I'd like to think so.
Adolescent nativity,
swaying me to and fro.
You surely are the death of me.


You drive me into doing things
that at first I thought were wrong.
Whenever they pull me away from you
I lay wounded without your song.


Can you see what you do...
controlling my thoughts
confusing my emotions
creeping and crawling through my deepest anxieties
your spell-binding beauty making me dream it all away
until I awake to clean up this mess you've made.
You surely are the death of me.
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Old 01-21-2008, 11:33 AM   #2 (permalink)
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You have got alot of talent there!!!
I love they way you created the words, and the way you put them all
together.
Thats pretty deep, and has so many different emotions!!
Awesomely well done!!!
I would love to read more of your stuff, If you decide to post up more!!!
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