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Ellen · 08-26-2006, 07:20 PM

Thanks Ana! That's my favorite part, too.

Ashlee · 08-26-2006, 07:22 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ellen

Winter's winds chap and redden faces
Children hope to be in Santa's good graces
Building snowmen with your everlasting love
It's almost time to remove those gloves

I really love this stanza, it reminds me of children's innocence at christmas time.

well done
<3

Aerdna · 08-26-2006, 08:00 PM

WOW! You are the exact opposite of me when it comes to poetry: Really, really, REALLY good! I agree with everyone else, you have an interesting way of describing things. It all just flows...very beautiful!

Would you like to do my homework when I have to write a poem?

Haha, just kidding!

Keep up the good work!

Ellen · 08-26-2006, 08:38 PM

Ashlee: Thanks. Yes, I meant it to be sort of ironic. Summer, Fall, and Winter were supposed to seem innocent, and Spring, which is supposed to be one of the most innocent seasons of the year, is harsher than the others. I dunno...I'm weird when it comes to writing...

Andrea: Aw, thank you. I bet you have some poetic talent. Sorry, I dunno if I'd have enough time out of my own homework to do yours! I would if I could.

Ashlee · 08-26-2006, 09:31 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ellen

Ashlee: Thanks. Yes, I meant it to be sort of ironic. Summer, Fall, and Winter were supposed to seem innocent, and Spring, which is supposed to be one of the most innocent seasons of the year, is harsher than the others. I dunno...I'm weird when it comes to writing...

I totally got that connection. I think it was awesome how you ended the poem with

So much for the season's peaceful doves

sort of like a harsh truth.

Ellen · 08-27-2006, 05:42 PM

Exactly. =) Last night I found a poem I wrote in 6th grade, tweaked it a bit, and I'm going to try to post it soon.

Miss Match · 08-28-2006, 12:17 AM

Can't wait for it

Ellen · 08-28-2006, 05:20 PM

Me neither! *hehe* I have it in my folder but people keep walking behind me and it's kinda long so it'll take a while to type and I get paranoid about people reading behind my shoulder so I'll try to post it...maybe tomorrow or Wednesday!

Miss Match · 08-29-2006, 09:23 AM

Oh, don't worry, I understand about that.

Ellen · 08-29-2006, 08:24 PM

Yup, it's pretty annoying...I'll post it tomorrow.

08-26-2006, 07:20 PM	#21 (permalink)
Ellen Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: At the computer =) Age: 16 Posts: 372 Points: 223.60 Bank: 2,103.84 Total Points: 2,327.44 Donate	Thanks Ana! That's my favorite part, too. __________________ "You are who you are and there's no one like you. To try to be someone else is just a lie." -Amy Lee

08-26-2006, 08:38 PM	#24 (permalink)
Ellen Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: At the computer =) Age: 16 Posts: 372 Points: 223.60 Bank: 2,103.84 Total Points: 2,327.44 Donate	Ashlee: Thanks. Yes, I meant it to be sort of ironic. Summer, Fall, and Winter were supposed to seem innocent, and Spring, which is supposed to be one of the most innocent seasons of the year, is harsher than the others. I dunno...I'm weird when it comes to writing... Andrea: Aw, thank you. I bet you have some poetic talent. Sorry, I dunno if I'd have enough time out of my own homework to do yours! I would if I could. __________________ "You are who you are and there's no one like you. To try to be someone else is just a lie." -Amy Lee

08-27-2006, 05:42 PM	#26 (permalink)
Ellen Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: At the computer =) Age: 16 Posts: 372 Points: 223.60 Bank: 2,103.84 Total Points: 2,327.44 Donate	Exactly. =) Last night I found a poem I wrote in 6th grade, tweaked it a bit, and I'm going to try to post it soon. __________________ "You are who you are and there's no one like you. To try to be someone else is just a lie." -Amy Lee

08-28-2006, 12:17 AM	#27 (permalink)
Miss Match Gator Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Cali Age: 15 Posts: 58 Points: 1,848.43 Bank: 58.05 Total Points: 1,906.48 Donate	Can't wait for it __________________

08-28-2006, 05:20 PM	#28 (permalink)
Ellen Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: At the computer =) Age: 16 Posts: 372 Points: 223.60 Bank: 2,103.84 Total Points: 2,327.44 Donate	Me neither! hehe I have it in my folder but people keep walking behind me and it's kinda long so it'll take a while to type and I get paranoid about people reading behind my shoulder so I'll try to post it...maybe tomorrow or Wednesday! __________________ "You are who you are and there's no one like you. To try to be someone else is just a lie." -Amy Lee

08-26-2006, 08:00 PM	#23 (permalink)
Aerdna Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: New York Age: 17 Posts: 951 Points: 1,704.92 Bank: 2,089.42 Total Points: 3,794.34 Donate	WOW! You are the exact opposite of me when it comes to poetry: Really, really, REALLY good! I agree with everyone else, you have an interesting way of describing things. It all just flows...very beautiful! Would you like to do my homework when I have to write a poem? Haha, just kidding! Keep up the good work!

08-29-2006, 09:23 AM	#29 (permalink)
Miss Match Gator Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Cali Age: 15 Posts: 58 Points: 1,848.43 Bank: 58.05 Total Points: 1,906.48 Donate	Oh, don't worry, I understand about that. __________________

08-29-2006, 08:24 PM	#30 (permalink)
Ellen Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: At the computer =) Age: 16 Posts: 372 Points: 223.60 Bank: 2,103.84 Total Points: 2,327.44 Donate	Yup, it's pretty annoying...I'll post it tomorrow. __________________ "You are who you are and there's no one like you. To try to be someone else is just a lie." -Amy Lee

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