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Im_Broken · 08-01-2005, 04:48 PM

I really like that. Great job. I can't wait to read more.

martinbq · 08-01-2005, 07:12 PM

very good poems, you write very well, congratulations

kather · 08-03-2005, 06:19 AM

Thanks. I'll be sitting for my trial exam soon! I'm scared. Ok. That has nothing to do with this. Here's a rhyme. Errr. It's my real feelings and I'm glad i wrote it down or else i would've have blown up!

HAHA! B*TCH!

Look man
I don’t really give a damn
You don’t know who I really am
I don’t have to show it to you too
Cuz all my peeps knows that I stay true
And I’m for real
I show exactly how I feel
Who are you to talk to me
You ain’t got no class cuz you’re b*tchy
I ain’t angry
I’m just telling fact as it is
You can’t discriminate me
You f**king racist
I’m not like you really
I look at people and their personality
I am proud to say my best friend is a Malay girl
What a contrast between you and her
And here goes all of my anger
No apologies and no sorrys
No doubt of what I’m saying
You’re damn right it’s all facts and truth
You’re damn right I f**king hate you!

Im_Broken · 08-03-2005, 10:20 AM

I really like that. It's cool. You could bust out a rap to that.

kather · 10-17-2005, 11:21 AM

Hey guys! Sorry! I know i had been really inactive for the past months! I've just been busy preparing for my year end exams and now that it's over, i hope i can have more time posting messages again. Please do come over and read some of the nonsense i got here. Then tell me what you think of them and how i can improve myself. Thanks

Here's a song i wrote while i was gone...

Yesterdays Are Gone

Looking in your eyes
I see bright lights
Fill my soul
From within this cold
Empty core

They fill me up with hope
That left after everything was gone
Then I knew that I am home
I found an angel
An angel from nothing at all

Chorus:
Can you feel, feel my energy
Can you see, see that I am changing
I left my old self behind
Started a new life
And moved on
Before you know
Yesterdays are gone

Touching your lips
I can see the colours in me
My life was filled with nothing
But now I am happy

You gave me something I never had
True love I am never forget
Until I die
To know that I am alive

Chorus: repeat
I want to let everybody know
That I am different from before
I wasted my life, my time, my love
Just to learn that I’m numb all this while
I learn my mistakes
I took the chances I should have taken
If I stayed longer I’ll break
I never regretted the decisions I make then…

Chorus: repeat

Im_Broken · 11-19-2005, 11:32 AM

I like the song. You did a great job writting it. I hope to read more soon.

kather · 12-19-2005, 05:50 AM

Ok. Seems like i havent post anything in the last century. Not that a lot of people are reading my poems... Anyway, I've just been busy with school and recently myself

. I didnt wrote much in the last month but i do have a few others that i wrote in the past two months. They might not sound exactly like the ones I've written before but i still like them very much

. And i want to thank all of you who took the time to read some simple rhymes by a 15 year old who day dreams too much

. Keep the comments comming!

My Confession

Janie held my hand
And told me a secret
She shot her boyfriend
With a loaded gun
That she’s still keeping
In his apartment
No one was there
No one saw it
As their argument
Slowly heated
She got angry
And she pulled it
The trigger went off
And knocked him unconscious
He laid motionless
In his own pool
Of blood
As Janie watched
In disgust
She locked the door
And ran away
And in my arms she stayed
She cried in sadness
“But he was a jerk”,
she said
I couldn’t do anything
But comfort her that day
For I know
I will be the one
To turn her in
And she will be sorry
For the rest of her life
For killing my fiancé
She shot him and he died
I won’t forgive you, Janie
For I almost became his wife
Now you will regret it
For the rest of your life
Repent dear Janie
Goodbye!

My Suicide

Jamie said he fell in love
With this amazing girl
He praised her beauty
And her wonderful attitude
He said she was lovely
And I should meet her one day
I just nodded to agree
But regretted in dismay
He said they are going on a date
Maybe on this Friday
“Why so soon?” I simply said
He replied, “I miss her so much, I’d die!”
I walked back home from school alone
Ever since Jamie fell deeply in love
I was lonely with all my friends
Even if Jamie was really there
But with his new girlfriend by his side
I felt jealousy boiling inside
Why was I so stupid all this while?
Having a crush on my best friend in silence
I should have told him from the start
But I was afraid of falling apart
If he wanted to end our friendship
Because I demanded another kind of friendship
Now it’s too late for me
Jamie’s heart is no longer with me
He is now flying freely like a bird
Yet, I’m not letting myself move forward
Because I’m so deeply hurt
I lost my one and only love
The true meaning of my life
Now I’m not worth anything
So maybe I should die
As I sit in my little room
In solitude I cry
And I hold tightly the sharp knife
I think of the pain Jamie gave me
Thinking it’s greater than if I die in pain
I place the knife on my neck and press it
My blood is pouring down like rain
I’m not sure if I’m conscious as I lay on the floor
I listen as there is a faint knock on the door
“Janet, I love you!” are the last words before
I can breathe no more.

Evvy_shies · 12-19-2005, 10:16 AM

I really really love your writing. Its very good, your songs and poems. I liked fool, and my suicide...heck I loved them all.

Very nice work.

Im_Broken · 12-20-2005, 11:48 PM

Awesome. Loving the newest stuff.

kather · 01-09-2006, 08:38 AM

Ok. Seems like im being a really lazy person. A really slow evboarder... how sad...Ok. Erm. Here is a few other poems or whatever you call it, that i wrote not too long ago. And thanks to yall who had read my my writtings

. It means a lot to me that yall would drop me a comment even in really nice simple words. Thanks again! And im just really sorry my progress is just so slow because at the moment my "inspirations" aren't really coming my way...hhehe

. If yall can't understand any of them just complain to me. Im still learning and im glad to learn from yall who are more experienced in doing this. Well actually i got another thread on this board and i abandoned it after the "renewing" or whatever you called it, happened. Is it ok to do that? Unfortunately im too lazy to track down the link and post it here. So yall just read all the new stuff

To You

She was shy

She always cried

She was weak

But she was lovely

She admired you from a distance

She comprehend your every action

She understood you more than your friends

She was in love with you then

But she kept quiet for she was shy

You didn’t notice but she was always by your side

She knew your every move and why

Yet she told herself, “I will never be with that guy,”

She loved you for your every weakness

In you she never saw a flaw

Only perfection made by the hands of God

She knew whenever you felt sad

She knew why you felt like that

She felt your pain as if it were her own

She drank for you your poison

Yet you didn’t know

She wanted all the happiness for you

She gave all of her joy to you

She gave you all the best things in the world

She had never been you girl

You were blinded by your own ego

You knew her then but you let her go

She’d sacrifice everything just to let you know

That true love comes and never will go

But still you couldn’t see

How pure her sincerity

“You will regret forever after this

For true love, you will miss,”

She wrote to you

But in the paper bin you threw

Her letter, her heart

She knew it was a stupid mistake you made

She had wanted love but sadness you gave

She sat in a corner and cried in pain

Weakly she wiped her tears away

She know now that you are the fool

For you always try to act so cool

And let true love slip away

You will never get that chance again

She was once very shy

She so often cry

She was really very lovely

She is still very lovely

But she is now no longer shy

She will now never ever cry

Never again will she be weak

Truth is, she is ME.

Evanescent

How weird an emotion

When you’re all alone

But surrounded by all these people

Who don’t pay no attention

You are standing there, forsaken

You look for a familiar face

But you do know all these people

Yet your soul is not with them

It is in another time, another place

You look at your friends in the eye

But you are looking through each of them

To the person who has always been invisible

To each person that passes by

She is only visible to you and no one else

But you are invisible to her

And everybody else.

08-01-2005, 04:48 PM	#11 (permalink)
Im_Broken Fledgling Post Monkey Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Illinois Posts: 1,397 Points: 470.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 470.00 Donate	I really like that. Great job. I can't wait to read more. __________________ -Rach- ((Check out my stuff)) when it starts to rain break out the slip and slide

08-01-2005, 07:12 PM	#12 (permalink)
martinbq Member Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: peru Age: 19 Posts: 445 Points: 1,343.01 Bank: 1,684.05 Total Points: 3,027.05 Donate	very good poems, you write very well, congratulations __________________ Y a pesar de todo Me pregunto qué no di, Y al vivir me oculto Mis defectos para poder dormir.

08-03-2005, 10:20 AM	#14 (permalink)
Im_Broken Fledgling Post Monkey Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Illinois Posts: 1,397 Points: 470.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 470.00 Donate	I really like that. It's cool. You could bust out a rap to that. __________________ -Rach- ((Check out my stuff)) when it starts to rain break out the slip and slide

10-17-2005, 11:21 AM	#15 (permalink)
kather Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Malaysia Age: 18 Posts: 57 Points: 3,828.36 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 3,828.36 Donate	Updates! Hey guys! Sorry! I know i had been really inactive for the past months! I've just been busy preparing for my year end exams and now that it's over, i hope i can have more time posting messages again. Please do come over and read some of the nonsense i got here. Then tell me what you think of them and how i can improve myself. Thanks Here's a song i wrote while i was gone... Yesterdays Are Gone Looking in your eyes I see bright lights Fill my soul From within this cold Empty core They fill me up with hope That left after everything was gone Then I knew that I am home I found an angel An angel from nothing at all Chorus: Can you feel, feel my energy Can you see, see that I am changing I left my old self behind Started a new life And moved on Before you know Yesterdays are gone Touching your lips I can see the colours in me My life was filled with nothing But now I am happy You gave me something I never had True love I am never forget Until I die To know that I am alive Chorus: repeat I want to let everybody know That I am different from before I wasted my life, my time, my love Just to learn that I’m numb all this while I learn my mistakes I took the chances I should have taken If I stayed longer I’ll break I never regretted the decisions I make then… Chorus: repeat

12-19-2005, 05:50 AM	#17 (permalink)
kather Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Malaysia Age: 18 Posts: 57 Points: 3,828.36 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 3,828.36 Donate	Still Alive... Ok. Seems like i havent post anything in the last century. Not that a lot of people are reading my poems... Anyway, I've just been busy with school and recently myself . I didnt wrote much in the last month but i do have a few others that i wrote in the past two months. They might not sound exactly like the ones I've written before but i still like them very much . And i want to thank all of you who took the time to read some simple rhymes by a 15 year old who day dreams too much. Keep the comments comming! My Confession Janie held my hand And told me a secret She shot her boyfriend With a loaded gun That she’s still keeping In his apartment No one was there No one saw it As their argument Slowly heated She got angry And she pulled it The trigger went off And knocked him unconscious He laid motionless In his own pool Of blood As Janie watched In disgust She locked the door And ran away And in my arms she stayed She cried in sadness “But he was a jerk”, she said I couldn’t do anything But comfort her that day For I know I will be the one To turn her in And she will be sorry For the rest of her life For killing my fiancé She shot him and he died I won’t forgive you, Janie For I almost became his wife Now you will regret it For the rest of your life Repent dear Janie Goodbye! My Suicide Jamie said he fell in love With this amazing girl He praised her beauty And her wonderful attitude He said she was lovely And I should meet her one day I just nodded to agree But regretted in dismay He said they are going on a date Maybe on this Friday “Why so soon?” I simply said He replied, “I miss her so much, I’d die!” I walked back home from school alone Ever since Jamie fell deeply in love I was lonely with all my friends Even if Jamie was really there But with his new girlfriend by his side I felt jealousy boiling inside Why was I so stupid all this while? Having a crush on my best friend in silence I should have told him from the start But I was afraid of falling apart If he wanted to end our friendship Because I demanded another kind of friendship Now it’s too late for me Jamie’s heart is no longer with me He is now flying freely like a bird Yet, I’m not letting myself move forward Because I’m so deeply hurt I lost my one and only love The true meaning of my life Now I’m not worth anything So maybe I should die As I sit in my little room In solitude I cry And I hold tightly the sharp knife I think of the pain Jamie gave me Thinking it’s greater than if I die in pain I place the knife on my neck and press it My blood is pouring down like rain I’m not sure if I’m conscious as I lay on the floor I listen as there is a faint knock on the door “Janet, I love you!” are the last words before I can breathe no more. __________________ A place where animals roam freely Last edited by kather : 12-19-2005 at 06:25 AM.

08-03-2005, 06:19 AM	#13 (permalink)
kather Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Malaysia Age: 18 Posts: 57 Points: 3,828.36 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 3,828.36 Donate	Thanks. I'll be sitting for my trial exam soon! I'm scared. Ok. That has nothing to do with this. Here's a rhyme. Errr. It's my real feelings and I'm glad i wrote it down or else i would've have blown up! HAHA! BTCH! Look man I don’t really give a damn You don’t know who I really am I don’t have to show it to you too Cuz all my peeps knows that I stay true And I’m for real I show exactly how I feel Who are you to talk to me You ain’t got no class cuz you’re btchy I ain’t angry I’m just telling fact as it is You can’t discriminate me You fking racist I’m not like you really I look at people and their personality I am proud to say my best friend is a Malay girl What a contrast between you and her And here goes all of my anger No apologies and no sorrys No doubt of what I’m saying You’re damn right it’s all facts and truth You’re damn right I fking hate you!

11-19-2005, 11:32 AM	#16 (permalink)
Im_Broken Fledgling Post Monkey Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Illinois Posts: 1,397 Points: 470.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 470.00 Donate	I like the song. You did a great job writting it. I hope to read more soon.

12-19-2005, 10:16 AM	#18 (permalink)
Evvy_shies Member Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Illinois Posts: 431 Points: 18,537.88 Bank: 284.64 Total Points: 18,822.52 Donate	I really really love your writing. Its very good, your songs and poems. I liked fool, and my suicide...heck I loved them all. Very nice work. __________________

12-20-2005, 11:48 PM	#19 (permalink)
Im_Broken Fledgling Post Monkey Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Illinois Posts: 1,397 Points: 470.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 470.00 Donate	Awesome. Loving the newest stuff. __________________ -Rach- ((Check out my stuff)) when it starts to rain break out the slip and slide

01-09-2006, 08:38 AM	#20 (permalink)
kather Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Malaysia Age: 18 Posts: 57 Points: 3,828.36 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 3,828.36 Donate	Imma back... Ok. Seems like im being a really lazy person. A really slow evboarder... how sad...Ok. Erm. Here is a few other poems or whatever you call it, that i wrote not too long ago. And thanks to yall who had read my my writtings . It means a lot to me that yall would drop me a comment even in really nice simple words. Thanks again! And im just really sorry my progress is just so slow because at the moment my "inspirations" aren't really coming my way...hhehe . If yall can't understand any of them just complain to me. Im still learning and im glad to learn from yall who are more experienced in doing this. Well actually i got another thread on this board and i abandoned it after the "renewing" or whatever you called it, happened. Is it ok to do that? Unfortunately im too lazy to track down the link and post it here. So yall just read all the new stuff To You She was shy She always cried She was weak But she was lovely She admired you from a distance She comprehend your every action She understood you more than your friends She was in love with you then But she kept quiet for she was shy You didn’t notice but she was always by your side She knew your every move and why Yet she told herself, “I will never be with that guy,” She loved you for your every weakness In you she never saw a flaw Only perfection made by the hands of God She knew whenever you felt sad She knew why you felt like that She felt your pain as if it were her own She drank for you your poison Yet you didn’t know She wanted all the happiness for you She gave all of her joy to you She gave you all the best things in the world She had never been you girl You were blinded by your own ego You knew her then but you let her go She’d sacrifice everything just to let you know That true love comes and never will go But still you couldn’t see How pure her sincerity “You will regret forever after this For true love, you will miss,” She wrote to you But in the paper bin you threw Her letter, her heart She knew it was a stupid mistake you made She had wanted love but sadness you gave She sat in a corner and cried in pain Weakly she wiped her tears away She know now that you are the fool For you always try to act so cool And let true love slip away You will never get that chance again She was once very shy She so often cry She was really very lovely She is still very lovely But she is now no longer shy She will now never ever cry Never again will she be weak Truth is, she is ME. Evanescent How weird an emotion When you’re all alone But surrounded by all these people Who don’t pay no attention You are standing there, forsaken You look for a familiar face But you do know all these people Yet your soul is not with them It is in another time, another place You look at your friends in the eye But you are looking through each of them To the person who has always been invisible To each person that passes by She is only visible to you and no one else But you are invisible to her And everybody else. __________________ A place where animals roam freely

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