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Im_Broken · 01-10-2006, 04:22 PM

Great poems. Nice writing too. You do a very nice job of writing. Keep up the great work!!

kather · 03-24-2006, 12:00 PM

Ok let me apologise again...wow its been really long since i last posted...
My excuse last time was that i have no inspirations. I've written quite a lot actually since then but why i havent posted them is because i was just really busy with school and i can predict that i still will be very busy soon. Ahh...such is the life of a typical hardworking student in Malaysia

Ok lets cut all that crap. I know i like to post all these nonsense which i'm not sure if anyone would read. Ok skip this part and lets read the poems -->

Here's a random rhyme:

I long for your love
But you left me here alone
Yes, I'm still hurt
But I still have to go on

I will remember you
And all the things you do
This departure is not forever
One day, we'll be together

------------------------------------------------------------------------

I walk these empty streets
I try to fall asleep
And forget these dreams
I don't live in reality
My fantasy is destroying me
Slowly fom within

I remember the look in your eyes
Under the moonlit night
Before you said goodbye
Your voice reverberates in my mind
Haunting me everytime
Forcing me to end my life
The tears that I cry
Will not save me tonight
My only choice is suicide

------------------------------------------------------------------------

I have regrets and doubts
Some words never seem to come out of my mouth
I have hopes and dreams
But they never seem to come close to reality
So I asked myself
What am I doing here?
At this moment, at this time
I've wasted already half of my life
I looked in the mirror
To find some explanations
I saw something so horror
Consequences of my actions
Opportunities disappeared like vapour
People's feelings that I've hurt
But I can't turn back time
Erase the mistakes I've made
So I look to the future
And take everything that comes my way

------------------------------------------------------------------------

Okay. This is a song that i wrote. Verse 1 and 2 are kinda like a rap verse. Others are sung. Its about being a teenager and constantly being controlled by everyone. So, its called "Puppet". Its one of my fave, own piece of werk but its kinda long so skip this one if you don't want to read the whole thing...

PUPPET
Verse 1
It is so hard to be me
People just don't see what I see
They don't know what I want to be
Maybe cuz I don't do things clearly
Like written letters in black and white
Instead I try to do what I think is right
At least in my own mind
Sometimes I try too hard to change their mind
Change their negative perception of myself
But do I really care about everyone else?
And I have with me no one else but me
So I do really believe only in me
And i tried to be independant
I told myself to be confident
But I fall to the ground
I failed again
They can laugh at me now
Cuz I lost again
In my own game

Chorus:
So I,
Let them control me
And I,
Let them toy me
And I,
Have no authority
To live my life the way i want it to be
So I,
Let them take everything
And I,
Let them again do it
And I,
I am nothing
Except a puppet with these strings attached on me

Verse 2
There were so many times
When I'd wish I'd just die
My troubles that were troubling me
Ain't keeping me alive
So I shut myself down socially
Live life in loneliness basically
But yet they pushed me around
Thinking I was weak they pushed me down
I still let them do so to me now
I will never have the strenght to fight them back
I am weak and I do admit that
A part of me did also accept the fact that
I will only feel happy when I'm actually sad
And I let them turn me
Into what they want me to be
So bad that I as well believe
That I am not me really
I just do not exist
And right now i perceive
I am no longer ME

Repeat chorus

Verse 3
Hurt me again, hurt me again
I've gotten used to this pain
So why don't you hurt me again, hurt me again
Everything hurts anyway
Blame me again, blame me again
I know I'm guilty for everything
Blame me again, please just blame me again
I'm so useless in everyway
Break me again, break me again
You know I wanted it this way
Break me again, go on and break me again
You just love to see me in pain
Rape me again, rape me again
You can rape me of who I am
Rape me again, I want you to rape me again
I really think I've lost my sane
So I'll just let myself be your puppet again...

Repeat chorus

I don't think I'll live after today.

Huh... ok now comments please... Good or bad i will accept

Edit: Lo0okie! I found the link to me old thread! but almost ALL of it had been deleted when they upgraded the site

Black&Red · 03-24-2006, 01:44 PM

Hey I love it, the frist ones are ok but the more you post get more and more deeper in your soul. Thats way coool and I can feel your pain in them. Very coool. Look for mine today or tommarrow I wanna know what you think of mine. Very nice.

Im_Broken · 03-30-2006, 11:16 AM

Sorry for the late reply, but everything sounds great I read thru all the new stuff that you posted. It's all amazing. Great job wording everything, and the flow is great. The song is awesome. Nice job with everything. Keep up the great work.

kather · 06-30-2006, 03:43 AM

Hey guys!
I know i havent been posting anything for like more than four months! I'm sorry....well i had been real busy with school and all and also some stupid examinations, then my pc broke down(now i'm using the public pc) so i'll probably still have to wait some time until i'm able to post my poems again. sorry to be so inactive... hope you guys will come back and check back for more poems later.... For the moment, just be patient

Lots of apologies,
ME

01-10-2006, 04:22 PM	#21 (permalink)
Im_Broken Fledgling Post Monkey Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Illinois Posts: 1,397 Points: 470.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 470.00 Donate	Great poems. Nice writing too. You do a very nice job of writing. Keep up the great work!! __________________ -Rach- ((Check out my stuff)) when it starts to rain break out the slip and slide

03-24-2006, 12:00 PM	#22 (permalink)
kather Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Malaysia Age: 18 Posts: 57 Points: 3,578.36 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 3,578.36 Donate	Ok let me apologise again...wow its been really long since i last posted... My excuse last time was that i have no inspirations. I've written quite a lot actually since then but why i havent posted them is because i was just really busy with school and i can predict that i still will be very busy soon. Ahh...such is the life of a typical hardworking student in Malaysia Ok lets cut all that crap. I know i like to post all these nonsense which i'm not sure if anyone would read. Ok skip this part and lets read the poems --> Here's a random rhyme: I long for your love But you left me here alone Yes, I'm still hurt But I still have to go on I will remember you And all the things you do This departure is not forever One day, we'll be together ------------------------------------------------------------------------ I walk these empty streets I try to fall asleep And forget these dreams I don't live in reality My fantasy is destroying me Slowly fom within I remember the look in your eyes Under the moonlit night Before you said goodbye Your voice reverberates in my mind Haunting me everytime Forcing me to end my life The tears that I cry Will not save me tonight My only choice is suicide ------------------------------------------------------------------------ I have regrets and doubts Some words never seem to come out of my mouth I have hopes and dreams But they never seem to come close to reality So I asked myself What am I doing here? At this moment, at this time I've wasted already half of my life I looked in the mirror To find some explanations I saw something so horror Consequences of my actions Opportunities disappeared like vapour People's feelings that I've hurt But I can't turn back time Erase the mistakes I've made So I look to the future And take everything that comes my way ------------------------------------------------------------------------ Okay. This is a song that i wrote. Verse 1 and 2 are kinda like a rap verse. Others are sung. Its about being a teenager and constantly being controlled by everyone. So, its called "Puppet". Its one of my fave, own piece of werk but its kinda long so skip this one if you don't want to read the whole thing... PUPPET Verse 1 It is so hard to be me People just don't see what I see They don't know what I want to be Maybe cuz I don't do things clearly Like written letters in black and white Instead I try to do what I think is right At least in my own mind Sometimes I try too hard to change their mind Change their negative perception of myself But do I really care about everyone else? And I have with me no one else but me So I do really believe only in me And i tried to be independant I told myself to be confident But I fall to the ground I failed again They can laugh at me now Cuz I lost again In my own game Chorus: So I, Let them control me And I, Let them toy me And I, Have no authority To live my life the way i want it to be So I, Let them take everything And I, Let them again do it And I, I am nothing Except a puppet with these strings attached on me Verse 2 There were so many times When I'd wish I'd just die My troubles that were troubling me Ain't keeping me alive So I shut myself down socially Live life in loneliness basically But yet they pushed me around Thinking I was weak they pushed me down I still let them do so to me now I will never have the strenght to fight them back I am weak and I do admit that A part of me did also accept the fact that I will only feel happy when I'm actually sad And I let them turn me Into what they want me to be So bad that I as well believe That I am not me really I just do not exist And right now i perceive I am no longer ME Repeat chorus Verse 3 Hurt me again, hurt me again I've gotten used to this pain So why don't you hurt me again, hurt me again Everything hurts anyway Blame me again, blame me again I know I'm guilty for everything Blame me again, please just blame me again I'm so useless in everyway Break me again, break me again You know I wanted it this way Break me again, go on and break me again You just love to see me in pain Rape me again, rape me again You can rape me of who I am Rape me again, I want you to rape me again I really think I've lost my sane So I'll just let myself be your puppet again... Repeat chorus I don't think I'll live after today. Huh... ok now comments please... Good or bad i will accept Edit: Lo0okie! I found the link to me old thread! but almost ALL of it had been deleted when they upgraded the site __________________ A place where animals roam freely Last edited by kather : 03-24-2006 at 12:12 PM.

03-30-2006, 11:16 AM	#24 (permalink)
Im_Broken Fledgling Post Monkey Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Illinois Posts: 1,397 Points: 470.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 470.00 Donate	Sorry for the late reply, but everything sounds great I read thru all the new stuff that you posted. It's all amazing. Great job wording everything, and the flow is great. The song is awesome. Nice job with everything. Keep up the great work. __________________ -Rach- ((Check out my stuff)) when it starts to rain break out the slip and slide

06-30-2006, 03:43 AM	#25 (permalink)
kather Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Malaysia Age: 18 Posts: 57 Points: 3,578.36 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 3,578.36 Donate	Sorry! No poems! Boohooo :( Hey guys! I know i havent been posting anything for like more than four months! I'm sorry....well i had been real busy with school and all and also some stupid examinations, then my pc broke down(now i'm using the public pc) so i'll probably still have to wait some time until i'm able to post my poems again. sorry to be so inactive... hope you guys will come back and check back for more poems later.... For the moment, just be patient Lots of apologies, ME __________________ A place where animals roam freely

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03-24-2006, 01:44 PM	#23 (permalink)
Black&Red Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Brea, Ca Age: 21 Posts: 160 Points: 857.44 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 857.44 Donate	Hey I love it, the frist ones are ok but the more you post get more and more deeper in your soul. Thats way coool and I can feel your pain in them. Very coool. Look for mine today or tommarrow I wanna know what you think of mine. Very nice.

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