Well first of all. How sad i am to know that all my other poems in the board are gone! every single one of it. So i gotta still keep posting new stuff and maybe some old ones. Right now i got lots of ideas on songs. So here's one of them.


I’M ALONE

I try to hear
As you speak those words
But I know that you’re not there
And somehow you are here
Yet your soul’s somewhere else

I’m afraid
So afraid of the darkness falling
Suddenly upon me
What’s happening?
I realize

C/O:
That I’m alone
In this empty room
So cold
I’m alone
In this forbidden town
Where no one’s around
I’m so alone
In this planet
That no one’s living
Im all alone.

I touched your face
Felt your skin underneath my skin
I felt no warmth
No love, no hope
Where have you gone?

Cuz I’m afraid
So afraid of the darkness crawling
Nearer to me
What is this?
Then I realize
C/O:
That I’m alone
In this empty room
So cold
I’m alone
In this forbidden town
Where no one’s around
I’m so alone
In this planet
And no one’s living
Im all al…..


I can’t breathe
I can’t sleep
I can’t live
Without you
I’m so weak
I’m so sick
It is me
That’s leaving you
But I…

C/O:
I’m alone
In this empty room
So cold (I’m so cold)
I’m alone
In this forbidden town
Where no one’s around(I’m not found)
I’m so alone
In this planet
That no one’s leaving(I am searching)
I’m alone…..

Now I’m Home.

That's a very nice song that you have written. It's very nice and I love the way it goes. You did a very nice job with it. I hope to read more of what you have.

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Thanks guys! I see i made some mistakes there. "In this planet". I've got plenty more. If i have the time I'll post them here. Its just sad now that i'm a lurker again... Here's another song.


FOOL

It’s been six months since you left me here
And I am yet to shed a tear
You went away and disappear
All the loneliness I am yet to bear

It’s been a day since I realize
That you are gone from my life
But why didn’t you say goodbye
I’m left clueless like a child

C/O:
Maybe you didn’t know love me that much
Or maybe you didn’t care at all
You should have told me from the start
And I just realize I’ve been fooled

It’s been a minute since I write this this song
I am yet to sing along
You are now in Kuala Lumpur
And I am bleeding on the floor

It’s been six seconds since I think about you
About the the way you look too
Then I thought it wasn’t a clue
A sign to say “I love you”

C/O:
Maybe you didn’t love me that much
Maybe you didn’t care at all
You should have told me from the start
And I just realized I’ve been fooled

Maybe you did really fall in love
Maybe you just loved me too much
I should have told you from the start
That I loved you with all my heart

So maybe we’ll meet again
Would you remember then
So before I fall again
Say the goodbye you really meant to say…

C/O:
Maybe you didn’t love me that much
Maybe you didn’t care at all
You should have told me from the start
And I just realized I’ve been fooled

wow!!! they're very good!!!! pure talent there! keep it up!!

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Thanks chloe! I really appreciate you guys reading my songs and poems. Here's another one of my poems.


SHE

I’ve been looking in the mirror
Found myself looking at a stranger
She cried her eyes out
She wanted to scream and shout

Her heart was torn open
She was alone, forsaken
No one to heal her
No one to love her

She opened her eyes and said to me
“Bring me away from the cruelty,
Bring me to a world of fantasy,
Bring me to life for eternity”

I tried to touch her hand
I tried to feel her pain
I tried to comfort her
Only to realize I am ‘her’

It was me trying to hide my pain
Behind a palace of frozen rain
I waited for love ‘till the end
Then I will die with the dreams of living again

Sorry for the late reply on these.

Fool- is soo well written and I think that's my favorite. You did a very nice job with that.

She- is awesome too!

You do a nice job writing. I can't wait see read more.

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Fool is my favorite of all of yours. The other ones are good to. Keep it up.

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Clue to the invasion of the buttocks. All the victims in the picture sound and look similar to ET the extraterrestrial. Can you spot John Regan The abductor. Its A invasion of the buttocksEver Noticed the similarities between missing kids and ETMy Stuff

Thanks a lot for reading them and thanks for your comments . I'll try to post as much as i can!



BREAK

Said you need some time alone
You said “I have to go”
Take a break from this relationship
That we can’t go on like this

It was cool with me so I go
I gave you the freedom that you wanted
I don’t need to turn back to look
It’s time to move on…

C/O:
Baby I give you my trust
Baby I won’t rush
We need a break at times
To clear our minds
And we can start again afresh

You kept me waiting for six months
You gotta know this is so hard
To live alone by myself
But I know you still cared…

C/O:
Baby I give you my trust
Baby I won’t rush
We need a break at times
To clear our minds
And we can start again afresh

Baby I just love you too much
Baby I respect you
I honour you
I feel you
I need you
I really love you

And the times we spent together
Will be memories forever
Because we are here and now together
This is what we must treasure…

C/O:
Baby I give you my trust
Baby I won’t rush
We need a break at times
To clear our minds
And we can start again afresh