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Raskull · 06-04-2008, 09:26 PM

Yay finally some action in this place! Thank you both for your comments. You are far too kind.

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Originally Posted by Shivercide

Shannon, I love your choice of words and the way each short line gives a choked-up feeling, which definitely fits the content.

I completly agree with Shiver. It played well on the cold feeling one gets when they want someone who wont/isnt there.

Shivercide your poem made me miss someone.

Very sad and sweet and short but strongly worded. It didnt need a word more.

Shivercide · 06-05-2008, 10:21 AM

Silver Wing, yours is quite amazing. 0_o I've never been good with writing story-like poems myself, but you seem to be great at it! I love the style and the content, it really stops to make one think.

Sweet Tigger · 06-05-2008, 10:58 AM

I am just loving all of everyones words.
They are all simply just amazing, very touching, and
I can really feel every word that has been written in every one.
You are all very talented, and very creative as well speak right from your
hearts.
They are all simply beautiful! <3

~river~ · 06-05-2008, 06:42 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shivercide

Silver Wing, yours is quite amazing. 0_o I've never been good with writing story-like poems myself, but you seem to be great at it! I love the style and the content, it really stops to make one think.

complete agreeance with steph, silver wing your story/poem flowed from each stage, keep a continuity and well was thought provoking. A++

Silver Wing · 06-05-2008, 08:49 PM

Thanks guys, I appreciate it. It was actually a lot longer, so I had to pare it down so as not to get ridiculous. I wasn't sure how I felt about it when I was done, so I'm glad to hear you all liked it.

I'm really enjoying this writers group stuff. And there is so much talent here, it's amazing. You guys are excellent.

Sweet Tigger · 06-05-2008, 09:23 PM

You all did such amazing work!
I almost feel like deletig mine, it could have been alot better,
but I figuared I would try to use words that would just sum everything
up in a smaller poem.
* Shakes head at herself *

~river~ · 06-06-2008, 02:11 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Silver Wing

Thanks guys, I appreciate it. It was actually a lot longer, so I had to pare it down so as not to get ridiculous. I wasn't sure how I felt about it when I was done, so I'm glad to hear you all liked it.

I'm really enjoying this writers group stuff. And there is so much talent here, it's amazing. You guys are excellent.

im enjoying it as well it gives a bit more a challenge to writing, focus and helps develop writing skills

i have to say im interested in the extended non edited version.

trina don't go looking for compliments honestly- saying you would delete it you put it up for a reason becuase you wrote something to express your feelings.

~river~ · 06-07-2008, 06:43 PM

ok the deadline has passed
Raskull being as you were so eager and the first to post something by a number of days the honour of deciding is all yours

Sweet Tigger · 06-07-2008, 06:58 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ~river~

trina don't go looking for compliments honestly- saying you would delete it you put it up for a reason becuase you wrote something to express your feelings.

This is really the last thing, I would be going and looking for.
I was only trying to express, all the others are really great, and
mine doesn't compare to them, I was only saying that from a personal
point of view.
That was just IMO.

06-05-2008, 10:58 AM	#403 (permalink)
Sweet Tigger Pure Hearted Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Over The Rainbow Age: 31 Posts: 2,764 Points: 5,432.48 Bank: 131,131.17 Total Points: 136,563.66 Donate $PIE. \m/ Heh, you're awesome. :D - CrownlessAgain$	I am just loving all of everyones words. They are all simply just amazing, very touching, and I can really feel every word that has been written in every one. You are all very talented, and very creative as well speak right from your hearts. They are all simply beautiful! <3 __________________

06-05-2008, 09:23 PM	#406 (permalink)
Sweet Tigger Pure Hearted Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Over The Rainbow Age: 31 Posts: 2,764 Points: 5,432.48 Bank: 131,131.17 Total Points: 136,563.66 Donate $PIE. \m/ Heh, you're awesome. :D - CrownlessAgain$	You all did such amazing work! I almost feel like deletig mine, it could have been alot better, but I figuared I would try to use words that would just sum everything up in a smaller poem. * Shakes head at herself * __________________

06-07-2008, 06:43 PM	#408 (permalink)
~river~ Likes Stilts! Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: at the heart of your darkest nightmares and deepest desires Age: 20 Posts: 1,834 Points: 196.16 Bank: 141,224.84 Total Points: 141,421.00 Donate	ok the deadline has passed Raskull being as you were so eager and the first to post something by a number of days the honour of deciding is all yours __________________ There's no aphrodisiac like loneliness, truth, beauty and a picture of you. Blackbird singing in the dead of night, Take these broken wings and learn to fly All your life You were only waiting for this moment to arise Fly, Blackbird, fly Into the light of the dark black night.

06-05-2008, 08:49 PM	#405 (permalink)
Silver Wing -.-.- Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 445 Points: 2,176.51 Bank: 50,883.14 Total Points: 53,059.65 Donate	Thanks guys, I appreciate it. It was actually a lot longer, so I had to pare it down so as not to get ridiculous. I wasn't sure how I felt about it when I was done, so I'm glad to hear you all liked it. I'm really enjoying this writers group stuff. And there is so much talent here, it's amazing. You guys are excellent.

06-08-2008, 01:15 AM	#410 (permalink)
~river~ Likes Stilts! Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: at the heart of your darkest nightmares and deepest desires Age: 20 Posts: 1,834 Points: 196.16 Bank: 141,224.84 Total Points: 141,421.00 Donate