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Shivercide · 06-08-2008, 01:53 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ~river~

^settle down im only pulling your leg

Dang, I thought you were serious.

~river~ · 06-08-2008, 01:54 AM

you know me better than that!!! *evil face*

Raskull · 06-08-2008, 09:28 PM

*so honored* Thank you

Therefore the topic is

PASSION

Got from now to June 22.

Good luck and I can wait to see what you write!

Sweet Tigger · 06-08-2008, 10:12 PM

Alright Shannon, and Steph.....I was just having a bad day, and everyone
has those days.

I am sorry Shannon, I know you better then that, and you are always sweet!
I sometimes take things the wrong way, I do that in real life alot too.

I love the new title, very nice pick!!

* Starts thinking of what to write for a poem *

~river~ · 06-09-2008, 12:52 AM

i actaully believe i will have trouble with passion

~river~ · 06-16-2008, 04:25 AM

double posting but... you get that at times

raskull yours was violent but brillant. who knew your mind was so dark and twisted

. i honestly liked it, slightly choppy but that choppyness worked with the telling. just very very good

Raskull · 06-16-2008, 11:27 AM

Yeah, I had trouble with this as well.

But you wrote a beautiful poem. It seemed as if you had no trouble at all. I've read it twice and both times it gave me this *uhf* feeling. If that makes any sense.

The stlye and formatting really helped it come alive. Hell, you're just an awesome writer.

Sweet Tigger · 06-19-2008, 03:26 AM

Wow, its just a few of us, that have entered our poems.
I love all of you're guys poems, they are amazing.
I can honestly say, I had to really think about this one.
It took alot of thinking, and searching right in my heart and soul.
But I am really glad I entered, weather its good or not, it all
comes from deep within, and thats what matters.

Astounding job Guys!!!

~river~ · 06-19-2008, 04:49 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Raskull

Yeah, I had trouble with this as well.

But you wrote a beautiful poem. It seemed as if you had no trouble at all. I've read it twice and both times it gave me this *uhf* feeling. If that makes any sense.

The stlye and formatting really helped it come alive. Hell, you're just an awesome writer.

*blushes* thanks, that means alot. steph as usual yours is flawless. *insert my normal gushing and praise here*

06-08-2008, 01:54 AM	#412 (permalink)
~river~ Likes Stilts! Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: at the heart of your darkest nightmares and deepest desires Age: 20 Posts: 1,785 Points: 860.85 Bank: 113,665.59 Total Points: 114,526.44 Donate	you know me better than that!!! evil face __________________ There's no aphrodisiac like loneliness, truth, beauty and a picture of you. Words are flying out like endless rain into a paper cup They slither while they pass They slip away across the universe Pools of sorrow waves of Joy are drifting thorough my open mind

06-08-2008, 09:28 PM	#413 (permalink)
Raskull So Tired Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Where? Age: 17 Posts: 478 Points: 5,322.52 Bank: 4,108.78 Total Points: 9,431.30 Donate	so honored Thank you Therefore the topic is PASSION Got from now to June 22. Good luck and I can wait to see what you write! __________________ Anger. The emotion of change. Kill for me.

06-08-2008, 10:12 PM	#414 (permalink)
Sweet Tigger Pure Hearted Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Over The Rainbow Age: 31 Posts: 2,573 Points: 2,702.37 Bank: 93,648.97 Total Points: 96,351.34 Donate $PIE. \m/ Heh, you're awesome. :D - CrownlessAgain$	Alright Shannon, and Steph.....I was just having a bad day, and everyone has those days. I am sorry Shannon, I know you better then that, and you are always sweet! I sometimes take things the wrong way, I do that in real life alot too. I love the new title, very nice pick!! * Starts thinking of what to write for a poem * __________________ Always Believe In Your Self!!!

06-09-2008, 12:52 AM	#415 (permalink)
~river~ Likes Stilts! Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: at the heart of your darkest nightmares and deepest desires Age: 20 Posts: 1,785 Points: 860.85 Bank: 113,665.59 Total Points: 114,526.44 Donate	i actaully believe i will have trouble with passion __________________ There's no aphrodisiac like loneliness, truth, beauty and a picture of you. Words are flying out like endless rain into a paper cup They slither while they pass They slip away across the universe Pools of sorrow waves of Joy are drifting thorough my open mind

06-16-2008, 04:25 AM	#416 (permalink)
~river~ Likes Stilts! Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: at the heart of your darkest nightmares and deepest desires Age: 20 Posts: 1,785 Points: 860.85 Bank: 113,665.59 Total Points: 114,526.44 Donate	double posting but... you get that at times raskull yours was violent but brillant. who knew your mind was so dark and twisted. i honestly liked it, slightly choppy but that choppyness worked with the telling. just very very good __________________ There's no aphrodisiac like loneliness, truth, beauty and a picture of you. Words are flying out like endless rain into a paper cup They slither while they pass They slip away across the universe Pools of sorrow waves of Joy are drifting thorough my open mind

06-16-2008, 11:27 AM	#417 (permalink)
Raskull So Tired Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Where? Age: 17 Posts: 478 Points: 5,322.52 Bank: 4,108.78 Total Points: 9,431.30 Donate	Yeah, I had trouble with this as well. But you wrote a beautiful poem. It seemed as if you had no trouble at all. I've read it twice and both times it gave me this uhf feeling. If that makes any sense. The stlye and formatting really helped it come alive. Hell, you're just an awesome writer. __________________ Anger. The emotion of change. Kill for me.

06-19-2008, 03:26 AM	#418 (permalink)
Sweet Tigger Pure Hearted Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Over The Rainbow Age: 31 Posts: 2,573 Points: 2,702.37 Bank: 93,648.97 Total Points: 96,351.34 Donate $PIE. \m/ Heh, you're awesome. :D - CrownlessAgain$	Wow, its just a few of us, that have entered our poems. I love all of you're guys poems, they are amazing. I can honestly say, I had to really think about this one. It took alot of thinking, and searching right in my heart and soul. But I am really glad I entered, weather its good or not, it all comes from deep within, and thats what matters. Astounding job Guys!!! __________________ Always Believe In Your Self!!!

06-20-2008, 12:42 AM	#420 (permalink)
Shivercide Is too sweet Join Date: Jul 2003 Age: 24 Posts: 3,139 Points: 30,304.03 Bank: 3,948,856.11 Total Points: 3,979,160.14 Donate