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Old 03-13-2006, 07:02 PM   #11 (permalink)
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The poem is great. I love your work, hope you post more soon.
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Old 03-19-2006, 11:29 AM   #12 (permalink)
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Hey thanks again and I have yet another poem to put on here so here it is

*Untitled*

My blackened eyes
My darkened soul
Your painful cries are taking toll
My happiness gone,
My faith slowly declining,
You're killing me deep down,
I cant help but keep crying.
The church is now empty,
Not holy, but a tomb,
Mother Mary standing above me,
Baby Jesus in her womb.
I want to go with her,
but you're holding me back,
You're turning me to nothing,
You're fading me to black.
Now I'm left with nothing,
No one to hold or be around,
I beg for forgiveness,
I cry without a sound.
I'll try to live my life,
I'll try to hide my pain,
I dont know how long I can do this,
How much longer is this game?
I've thought of suicide,
I've hurt myself before,
I know the consequences of it,
I know whats in store.
Please forgive me God,
I dont mean to do these things,
I cant help but hurt myself,
and I know I'm not normal,
I know I'm not the same,
but please God, I'm begging you,
Just let me be ok.
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Old 03-20-2006, 04:28 PM   #13 (permalink)
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I really love your poems because I can identify with them so much. It's as if I had written them myself. I just hope you keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more.
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Old 03-24-2006, 06:57 PM   #14 (permalink)
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Thanks bandgeekwithADD, you rock! so yeah heres another one I wrote

*Untitled Yo*
I'll look into the mirror,
See what I've become,
I'm gonna miss what I used to be,
The old me which was,
The little girl who always smiled,
The happy child without scars,
The smooth wrists without cuts,
The one who people adored,
But as I look at myself now,
My smiles, they're mostly fake,
The scars on my arms, show my true heartache,
The cuts on my wrists, bleed more each day,
The people who love me, have now gone away,
So as I look into my mirror,
I stare at my reflection,
My life has completely changed,
I've become my own dark perfection.
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Old 03-30-2006, 11:17 AM   #15 (permalink)
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The last 2 poems are great. I really liked the last one, you put a lot of emotion in it. Good job with it.
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Old 04-09-2006, 02:41 PM   #16 (permalink)
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Thanks again for being so nice with commenting and all
heres a poem and a video I made of me singing Tourniquet

*Understanding*
Don't worry about me,
Its not your problem,not your burden.
You wouldn't understand,its not your life.
I know you know pain but you don't know this.
You don't know anything,
You're blind to me,Numb to my touch,
Dead to my pain. Go on and try,
You still won't understand.
No one will understand.
The pain of my life, the depression in my mind,
No one understands, No one understands, No one even cares.
Its not your problem, so dont even bother
You just won't get it, you wont understand.

Heres the video I made~Danielle Acting Like An Idiot,Tourniquet
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Old 04-11-2006, 07:27 PM   #17 (permalink)
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I'll just lay there and weep,
For hours, it seems
I'm so ashamed of what I've become,
You're taking over my life,invading my mind
All I think about now is you,
Your controlling my every forsaken move,
Everything I do, Everything I say,
Its all related to you,
Its becoming obvious to see,
That I am the one for you,
I am the one to love,
Don't you get it now,
I'm the one who loves you,
But you dont know
I'm not blaming you,
You can just go on and
Leave me to weep,
Cry until my eyes bleed,
I'll hurt myself for loving you,
Your becoming a whole new part of me.
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Wow, I like your poems and your style of writing.
The picture is awesome. Keep it up!
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Old 04-16-2006, 01:37 PM   #19 (permalink)
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Thank you RockQueen!! Your so nice Heres some poetry that I've been worknig on!



*Untitled*
You say you'll love me forever,
But do you really mean it?
You always say you'll be by my side,
But you're always far from it,
You say you'll never leave me,
And yet your never here,
I dont know what to do,
Your getting me confused,
Do you want me to love you or not?

*For You*
Now I know what really happened that night long ago,
The pain you endured,
The torture you went through.
I would steal your pain away,
Leave it as nothing, not even a memory,
But I just want you to know that I love you,
and I'm sorry for what he put you through,
I'm sorry I couldnt help you,
I'll tell no one if that is your will,
Act like it never happened,
Lets just hide our pain, hate, and guilt.
But I know you'll never forget,
and I'm sorry about that,
but you gotta move on,
Keep going each day,
Forget that evil man,
And all his evil ways.
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Oh my god, your poems rock!! And I think they rock even more in a picture like the one you posted before! just amazing!!
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