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FelicityS · 08-21-2006, 06:44 PM

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Originally Posted by fallacy1901

Untitled

Father, why have you forsaken me?
Left me nothing and now you see,
The failure I was meant to be,
You killed me inside, Left me to bleed,
Why did I choose those lies to believe?
Forgetting you is the only key.
I'll change my ways now bow down to me,
Satan's new little fallen wing.,
I've given up, I'm with the evil king,
The tortured cry from my painful screams,
My body's finally breaking, tearing at each seam,
A river I've created, from little blood streams,
I cry for help, but the Father's forgotten me,
The failure I am, this is my destiny.

Well written i love this!

fallacy1901 · 08-22-2006, 01:15 PM

thanks

my mom took this pic of me, i thought it was pretty cool.

Med · 08-22-2006, 01:47 PM

*We'll Meet Again*
Nice title. and the poem is kind a 'heartbreaking'. You've done it again. really some fellings there. and kind a funny. cuz its all like 'hey listen, listen,..but listen..and listen'

..yeah, once again. some true fellings there.

-nice pic. kind a repent or something..
.. i think you're full of fellings.

really.

fallacy1901 · 08-22-2006, 04:17 PM

thank u again! this is my first song, so yeah.

*It Was Meant To Be*

I remember a time that we used to be so happy with eachother
Until your lie I finally figured out.
It ate me away and left me dead.

*chorus*
Now why did you go,
And do this me?
Was it fun for you,was it fun to see?
Now why did you go,
And do this to me?
Was it fun for you, to see them killing me?

I never knew that you
Would turn on me like this.
How could you hate me
For the truth I've only seen.

*chorus*

I never knew that you,
that you would do this. x6

*chorus* x2

I guess it was always meant to be.
It was always meant to be. x7

It was meant for me...

Med · 08-23-2006, 02:43 PM

*It Was Meant To Be*
shit..it was great song!

i can actually hear it. so ju must play some instrument i guess.
I think it would be great for the song, to have it with nodes. guitars, and maybe saxofon

haha, and piano playing.. very light beat or very hard/massive beat.

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Originally Posted by falacy1901

I never knew that you,
that you would do this. x6

that rocks! 6 times!

Quote:

Originally Posted by falacy1901

I guess it was always meant to be.
It was always meant to be. x7

that rocks too! and specially the words. and 7 times 'it was always meant to be'. that line is really great. i agree with that. thats like an answer to all bunch of questions.(haha)..yeah, i must agree, what ever happen for one person in life, the conclousion is always the same 'ITS.MEANT.TO.BE' (got that!!-talking to air)

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Originally Posted by falacy1901

It was meant for me...

And then the last line with the 'for me' is just.great.

All in all, the poem/song that would be worth make.

fallacy1901 · 08-27-2006, 12:14 PM

thanks!

heres a pic I drew of a chao! thats pronounced chow. i think their cute.

Med · 08-27-2006, 02:07 PM

hej nice drowings of chao! i like it.
small little gremlins, one of them little angry, the other one happy, the 2 others funny. and some eggs. and big momma. though it reminds me of the Alien movie. cuz there are a big egglayer, eggs, and little small aliens, though they're all motherf*. thats way i like the picture, i guess, cuz its nice!

fallacy1901 · 08-27-2006, 03:05 PM

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Originally Posted by MOLPtStW

hej nice drowings of chao! i like it.
small little gremlins, one of them little angry, the other one happy, the 2 others funny. and some eggs. and big momma. though it reminds me of the Alien movie. cuz there are a big egglayer, eggs, and little small aliens, though they're all motherf*. thats way i like the picture, i guess, cuz its nice!

thanks!!

I like that Alien movie, although its a little weird

maria1691 · 08-27-2006, 03:19 PM

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Originally Posted by fallacy1901

Hey thanks you guys. Well heres another poem its really short but here it is.

*Untitled*
My suicide, your homicide, you drove me into this, I'm taking me out. Goodbye, I'm sorry for what you've done but I must leave you now, for I'm dying I'm crying, read my tear stained suicide note in my white room splattered with my beautiful blood, its all for you my friend cause its my world and your lie, you made me attempt the suicide...

Once again you may tell me if I need to work on something in it or if its good.

i love that!! You are a great poet! I love dark poetry, it may not be as peaceful, but it is as meaningful as "nice" poems

fallacy1901 · 09-02-2006, 08:28 PM

thanks maria. i try, lol.

well heres a cool little saying i just made up. i dont kno if it makes since but what do u guys think?

"Faith will never fall on those who forsake it"

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fallacy1901 Member Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: under a shoe Age: 16 Posts: 351 Points: 2,871.74 Bank: 0.87 Total Points: 2,872.61 Donate	thanks my mom took this pic of me, i thought it was pretty cool. __________________ ~The Guitar Hero Nerd~ Last edited by fallacy1901 : 08-22-2006 at 03:34 PM.

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fallacy1901 Member Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: under a shoe Age: 16 Posts: 351 Points: 2,871.74 Bank: 0.87 Total Points: 2,872.61 Donate	thank u again! this is my first song, so yeah. It Was Meant To Be I remember a time that we used to be so happy with eachother Until your lie I finally figured out. It ate me away and left me dead. chorus Now why did you go, And do this me? Was it fun for you,was it fun to see? Now why did you go, And do this to me? Was it fun for you, to see them killing me? I never knew that you Would turn on me like this. How could you hate me For the truth I've only seen. chorus I never knew that you, that you would do this. x6 chorus x2 I guess it was always meant to be. It was always meant to be. x7 It was meant for me... __________________ ~The Guitar Hero Nerd~

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fallacy1901 Member Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: under a shoe Age: 16 Posts: 351 Points: 2,871.74 Bank: 0.87 Total Points: 2,872.61 Donate	thanks! heres a pic I drew of a chao! thats pronounced chow. i think their cute. __________________ ~The Guitar Hero Nerd~ Last edited by fallacy1901 : 08-27-2006 at 03:40 PM.

09-02-2006, 08:28 PM	#40 (permalink)
fallacy1901 Member Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: under a shoe Age: 16 Posts: 351 Points: 2,871.74 Bank: 0.87 Total Points: 2,872.61 Donate	thanks maria. i try, lol. well heres a cool little saying i just made up. i dont kno if it makes since but what do u guys think? "Faith will never fall on those who forsake it" __________________ ~The Guitar Hero Nerd~

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08-22-2006, 01:47 PM	#33 (permalink)
Med Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 244 Points: 5,689.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 5,689.00 Donate	We'll Meet Again Nice title. and the poem is kind a 'heartbreaking'. You've done it again. really some fellings there. and kind a funny. cuz its all like 'hey listen, listen,..but listen..and listen' ..yeah, once again. some true fellings there. -nice pic. kind a repent or something.. .. i think you're full of fellings. really.

08-27-2006, 02:07 PM	#37 (permalink)
Med Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 244 Points: 5,689.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 5,689.00 Donate	hej nice drowings of chao! i like it. small little gremlins, one of them little angry, the other one happy, the 2 others funny. and some eggs. and big momma. though it reminds me of the Alien movie. cuz there are a big egglayer, eggs, and little small aliens, though they're all motherf*. thats way i like the picture, i guess, cuz its nice!

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