heres my first two photoshop pics! tell me what u think

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Well, thats just clear. nothing much in it. the only thing is to throw self in front of it when it falls. and to find out where and when if falls. by my experiences it falls also in darkness.
Wink

yeah...well heres another poem

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I dont wanna hurt anymore
I dont wanna be the reason why
I'll cry constantly forever
Each day I die a little more inside
And as I lay alone at night
My minds screaming that I'm still here
Killing me morbidly from inside out
Its tearing my heart to pieces,bleeding, counting my every tear
And I feel like I cant go on much longer
Each minute that passes feels like a year
Wanting to give up on living and breathing
For each breath I take is hurting me so deeply
I should not even try and give up completely
But alas, I fear death
I fear of what I'll become
A lifeless, rotting corpse in the cold, dark ground
I fear of what God will do with me
Will heaven shine its light down on me
Or shun me and leave me to suffer in the dark
Too many thoughts racing through my mind
Over and over again every single time
Its driving me insane at the thought of death
But wanting to die will change your life
I dont know who I am anymore
My clouded mind and shadowy soul
Has changed who I am and who I will be
I want the darkness to surround me
And keep me within
But God I want it to leave me
And just let me live

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hm. i have trouble with thinking you wrote it. but judging by your other poems it fits.
i think you got it rhymed for the most not losing the mening of what you want to say. thats impressive. think poem's not missing nothing nor it has something redundant.
as i can see you fear death as is mentioned throughout the poem. you fear what you'll become. it just remainds me of how i feared this and that and you know what it happend? it came true. damn predictions. i somehow knew where i'd be today. i knew it all along, trying to change it. nothing.nada. i knew i'd f* up and that'd feel like waste of time. living throuh it. i knew it'd feel like losing time and life. already back then.loooooong back then.like 5.haha.how's that possible??
everything you said in the poem. is. true.
everything you said in the poem. is. true.

I'd call it 'Doubt'

Wow, I havent been on in forever.
Here's a song I wrote. It reminds me of Otep for some reason.

VERSE 1
Just lie there alone.
You'll never know why.
It could be a disturbance,
or maybe its just me.
Flashing darkened memories overcoming my mind,
You all know who will die
On the last day

CHORUS
Pills...and...drills
Erase our memories!
Die...Tonight,
We cause this sick disease!

VERSE 2
Fighting for life
Suffering and strife
You are the cold statue
You suck at life
I feel alone
You feel nothing
Our icons in life control our minds
But no one knows that now

CHORUS
Pills...and...Drills
Erase our memories
Die...Tonight
We cause this sick disease

BRIDGE
I suffer for you!
(Why cant I see this)
Suffer for you!
(Please just forget me)
Suffer for you!
(You know the pain you cause)
The pain you've caused me
Drives me insane!

CHORUS

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