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RodWhispering · 08-04-2006, 06:56 PM

Those poems are awesome

I can relate to Dying Patience I think you're a superb writer. Keep on the good work.

AmberLynn07 · 08-04-2006, 07:10 PM

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Painful memories

You won't remember me,
as the one who helped you every time,
when you needed it
Nor would you remember me
as the one who you threw away,
after every time she helped you
I remember you as the one
who destroyed me from within
You are the one,
who threw me away like trash
The very one, who I can't forget

OMG!!!!! I'm feeling this EXACTLY right now with my best friend. It's like you took the words right out of my mouth. You're a great writer but I think this is my favorite. I guess cause I'm relating SO much to it. Just curious, did you write this from experience?

Froz€n Ang€l · 08-05-2006, 05:32 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by AmberLynn07

OMG!!!!! I'm feeling this EXACTLY right now with my best friend. It's like you took the words right out of my mouth. You're a great writer but I think this is my favorite. I guess cause I'm relating SO much to it. Just curious, did you write this from experience?

It is from experience, yes. It's about someone who really bullied me and used me for dumb reasons etc. I really dislike her. I think that girl is the person who I dislike the most in my life.

Froz€n Ang€l · 09-11-2006, 11:09 AM

Hey there!

I wrote a new poem today. I wrote it for a friend of mine. It's called "Reach in the dark", I hope you guys like it

<3 Shari

Edit: For all blonde people (someone special

), it is in my first post

dodididodo · 09-11-2006, 11:11 AM

Post it?

Froz€n Ang€l · 09-11-2006, 11:16 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by dodididodo

Post it?

See first page, Doos

FelicityS · 09-11-2006, 07:28 PM

OMG i love Ode to the mushroom lolz <3 Yummy!

I really relate to Dying Patience... one of my favs <3 Well Written!

Apryl · 09-15-2006, 02:41 AM

Quote:

While barriers broke in the south

Nice metaphor, lol.
Painful.

Froz€n Ang€l · 09-16-2006, 11:40 AM

Apryl: Yeah, well...I like metaphores

And thank you, I have another reason why NOT to check this thread anymore in school when sitting next to my friend, LOL...

Anyways, I wrote a new poem...I wrote it in a few minutes and I don't think I should add/change anything. Check first post for it

Edit: It's called "Hidden Identity". Knew I forgot something again

<3 Shari

UPDATE!!!
For cultural education, I have to create something artistic, made by myself. I decided to put some of these poems in some kind of book. I may be writing more, and put it all in that book and put some of my own artwork with it. I hope it works, and wish me good luck!!

SlowlyEyeFade · 09-20-2006, 04:25 AM

I like your poems a lot! I like how you have a old version and a newer version of some of your poems. Keep up the great writing!

<3
- Nina

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RodWhispering Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: In a place where I fall and all is lost Age: 17 Posts: 486 Points: 528.63 Bank: 486.67 Total Points: 1,015.30 Donate	Those poems are awesome I can relate to Dying Patience I think you're a superb writer. Keep on the good work. __________________ My Stuff Updated!

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Froz€n Ang€l Captiondork Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Limburg feels proud of it Erm..dutchieland? Age: 18 Posts: 1,866 Points: 4,202.26 Bank: 15,321.04 Total Points: 19,523.30 Donate	Hey there! I wrote a new poem today. I wrote it for a friend of mine. It's called "Reach in the dark", I hope you guys like it <3 Shari Edit: For all blonde people (someone special ), it is in my first post __________________ "I should ignore the words you say, for they can hurt but won't kill me" - Racoon Last edited by Froz€n Ang€l : 09-11-2006 at 11:22 AM.

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FelicityS Fledgling Post Monkey Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Sydney Posts: 1,403 Points: 700.64 Bank: 41.06 Total Points: 741.70 Donate	OMG i love Ode to the mushroom lolz <3 Yummy! I really relate to Dying Patience... one of my favs <3 Well Written! __________________ My Space My Stuff

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Froz€n Ang€l Captiondork Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Limburg feels proud of it Erm..dutchieland? Age: 18 Posts: 1,866 Points: 4,202.26 Bank: 15,321.04 Total Points: 19,523.30 Donate	Apryl: Yeah, well...I like metaphores And thank you, I have another reason why NOT to check this thread anymore in school when sitting next to my friend, LOL... Anyways, I wrote a new poem...I wrote it in a few minutes and I don't think I should add/change anything. Check first post for it Edit: It's called "Hidden Identity". Knew I forgot something again <3 Shari UPDATE!!! For cultural education, I have to create something artistic, made by myself. I decided to put some of these poems in some kind of book. I may be writing more, and put it all in that book and put some of my own artwork with it. I hope it works, and wish me good luck!! __________________ "I should ignore the words you say, for they can hurt but won't kill me" - Racoon Last edited by Froz€n Ang€l : 09-21-2006 at 01:53 PM.

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SlowlyEyeFade Member Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Dublin, Ireland Age: 21 Posts: 295 Points: 2,387.75 Bank: 906.35 Total Points: 3,294.10 Donate	I like your poems a lot! I like how you have a old version and a newer version of some of your poems. Keep up the great writing! <3 - Nina __________________ Kiss and tell, baby we're bleeding well.

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