Hey, I'm Froz€n Ang€l, and this is my new thread for my poems. I used to have it together with my art thread, but not anymore, now there are sub-forums. Any moderator, feel free to lock my thread in the mixed forum
These poems are about my feelings and my fantasies. They're whatever I have felt. Whenever I'm in the mood to write, I will write. Even when I'm doing homework

That one day (old version)

Every day I dream about you
the way you look
the way you are
I can't wait until the day
that I find you
that I look in your eyes
that I read your soul
I cannot wait, until that day,
that one day,
that will change my life

That one day (new version)

Every day I dream about you
who you would be
I cannot wait until the day
when I find you,
look into you eyes
and read your soul
I cannot wait, until that day
that one day,
wich will change my life...

The kiss

I met you,
on the happiest day of my life
I saw you, you saw me
we walked towards each other
until I stood in front of you
I looked deep into your eyes
inside me, a flame of passion awoke
I looked into your eyes, so deeply
and then it came,
the kiss....

Updates (1-15-2006)
I also updated 'That one day'!!!

I miss you

How long ago,
were the last words I told you?
When was the last time,
I could look into your eyes?
It seems like an eternity,
since I heard your voice
I could not see that you'd be gone
after such a sudden goodbye
I miss you,
my dear friend,
I miss you

The Loneliness

I love you
Every time when I look at you,
I get a warm feeling
But deep inside I know,
you won't love an ugly creature like me
Every time when I look at you
I get a warm feeling,
a warm feeling, wich will be destroyed
by the cold feeling of loneliness
I'm sorry,
I love you

Updates (1-20-2006):

Thank you

Thank you,
for being there for me when it was needed
you took away all the tears I cried,
and gave me a smile instead
a smile, filled with happiness
Thank you,
for helping me find the true me,
who was pushed away deeply,
so deeply,
I would not have found her by myself
Thank you all,
for the great things you have done for me
I'm grateful for you being there
Thank you

Hidden emotions

You think I don't care,
when I'm alone
I hide my true emotions
behind a mask, my face
I smile, and say that it's true
You know all about me,
there are no secrets,
except for my hidden emotions

Painful memories

You won't remember me,
as the one who helped you every time,
when you needed it
Nor would you remember me
as the one who you threw away,
after every time she helped you
I remember you as the one
who destroyed me from within
You are the one,
who threw me away like trash
The very one, who I can't forget

Update (1-26-2006):

My passionate love

I feel your warm touch
on my cold skin
I look into your eyes,
I feel the warmth in me,
and tell you I love you
You hold me in your arms,
you smile, and kiss me passionately
Our love will be like this kiss,
beautiful, passionate and heavenly sweet,
and I'd wish it would never end

Update (1-29-2006):

Please care...

You are too blind for my feelings
you don't seem to understand them
Please, open your eyes
and see my sadness,
my pain, my anger
Please listen,
try to hear the words I wanted to tell you
and say you care about me

Update (1-31-2006):

I'm so strange...

Leave me,
for I am too strange for you
There is no one,
who knows what I mean
We look at each other in the mirror
You think we're different from each other
but we're not
I'm just as strange as you

Update (2-4-2006):

Untitled Feelings

I don't belong here with you
You don't seem to care,
when I feel alone
I'm losing myself,
I don't seem to know
my own mind anymore
You won't help me
I'm mourning, begging you
to hear my cries
But you don't,
you abandoned me,
you forgot about me,
but I will always remember you,
and how you didn't try to help me

Update (2-11-2006):

Our world, 'our love'

I can feel my heart beat faster,
desiring for your love
I can hear my mind,
telling me that you're the one for me
I see you coming closer,
you hold my cold hands,
and take me away,
to a place,
where we are alone together
A loving atmosphere surrounding us,
taking away the old pain of loneliness
and taking away my fear of a broken heart
Here I will give my love to you,
the love you deserve,
for letting me be with you
in our special world,
called 'our love'

(Updated: 4-8-2006)

The ignored tears of a broken soul

Can you not see,
that I am unhappy?
Are my cries to few,
for you to hear me?
You will not see the pain,
stabbing my heart
I do not mind it at all,
I do not want to hurt you
I will go on, alone,
until we meet again
Some day,
I will show you the scars,
wich have been burnt in my skin
for eternity, never to leave
That's when you will see,
and realize,
what you have done to me

The trust of a true friend

Tell me your story
don't be afraid, I won't tell a soul
Let go of your tears,
and show me your true emotions
I will help you to get through this
I will do anything,
to keep this promise to you
Don't be afraid,
trust me,
for you are a true friend
and I will be here,
to break your fall

Update (4-20-2006):

In this poem, I'm talking to myself. Writing it helped me a lot, so I recommend writing this kind of thing to any other person with self esteem problems and who can write: it really helps!

A tied-up lover

You say that you're happy
though all I can see in your eyes,
is pain and sadness
You blame yourself for everything,
you reward yourself with the needle,
to release yourself from the pain
for a while
Trapped inside yourself,
you're trying to get out,
yet you don't succeed
You say you will never love yourself,
the way the rest does
You say everything good feels like a lie
I will never lie to you
and I just want to tell you,
that true happiness is deep inside you
Under the many layers of sadness,
pain, anger and self-hatred,
beats a true lover's heart
and I love it

Update: 5-10-2006

Silent words spoken to the shadow

I could never use the right words,
able to explain my behaviour
It is a difficult task,
I'm sorry, I cannot speak them to you
These words will remain hidden
in the darkness of my shadow,
locked up in eternal silence,
and never to be set free
For these words have been made by me,
meaning to hurt you,
and to destroy our friendship

Update: 5-15-2006

I just had a bright idea to write something cheesy

Ode to the mushroom

The mushroom,
one of the strangest kinds of vegetables,
though it's my very favorite one
I'm fond of it's flavour,
something wich is hard to describe
Feeling it's juicyness,
between my teeth when I chew,
makes the mushroom a heaven's delight
Boiled, baked or in a sauce,
I don't care,
just the thought of it is enough,
to make me drool in a second

Update (6-6-2006 ):
It's again about myself. It's about how I'm insulting myself all the time, actually, how the other side of me is insulting the 'real' me...know what I'm saying? It's a long one this time.

Pain caused to me by myself

Standing in front of the mirror,
she saw nothing but a monster
She held a needle between her fingers,
and waited until it could release her,
from the breaking pain in her heart
Drops of sweat falling off her fore head,
landing on the shadowed floor
Tears touching her ruined skin,
giving her a physical sting,
and a mental relief
She looked in the mirror once more,
again, only seeing a monster,
though giving me a second chance,
she threw the needle away,
and kept me alive,
me,
the monster inside her,
living by her mercy,
the beast, only seen by herself,
but an angel, seen by others
I'm the angelic side of her,
the side that should not be killed
by a simple needle
The side of her, that should live
for eternity

Update (7-26-2006):

War inside a mind

There she stands,
the girl, her mind containing a struggle for life,
a fight between two sides of her,
love against hate
A fight, creating frustration
It is poisoning her mind,
destroying all sanity left inside her
This war destroys everything it touches,
punishing her for all bad things,
she had done to others
She goes through life
with an insane mind,
pushing all help away from her,
she will stand alone in this fight,
no one will come to help,
no one will pray for her,
no, she stands alone in this fight

An unneeded decision

I see her,
staring at the ocean under her
Not forgiving herself,
she is holding a needle,
ready to kill her own soul
She is the only one she hates,
for she made too many mistakes
in her life
She still hesitates
and smells the air,
it would be her last time

Wanting to love others,
she had sacrificed herself for them,
by making the anger and pain dissapear,
in insane ways
While destroying her own,
she saved other people's lives
Many said they loved her,
she thanked but never believed,
hid and destroyed herself,
in order to love the ones
who she thought never cared

The girl had disappeared,
there lies a clean needle in the grass
A message is carved in the rock:
"Mercy keeps one alive"
I see the girl walk away,
I feel relieved,
and a smile appears on my face

Update (7-28-2006):

Dying patience

Every time we meet I'm happy,
but so often disappointment comes along
Many tears have I cried for you,
I gave you my trust,
and all you can return for my energy
are insults, arrogance and insanity
I don't even recognize you anymore,
all I remember is meeting you in school,
the sweet, smart and cool girl,
a friend who I saw so much as a sister
You don't remember us, your friends,
all waiting for you to come back
You destroyed all the chances of returning,
and my trust in you had broken
My patience is dying,
one day you will remember this,
and notice how lonely you feel

Update (8-3-2006):

I wrote this one as a masterpiece. I hope the subject and this poem are appreciated on the board. If not, then tell me.

A night to remember

It was a night to remember,
the moon, high up in the sky,
its silver light, shining so bright, romance could not fail
Venus looked down upon us with a smile,
and left my love and I alone...
He kissed me, while treating me like a tender flower
Feeling nothing but sheer passion,
I surrendered and gave myself to him
His lips, blessing my bare body,
started a fire within
I could not resist it,
nor could I stop kissing him
While barriers broke in the south,
and emotions met in the north,
our bodies touched constantly
and his love flowed
Feeling something unknown,
this pure romance, so beautiful,
I felt my love for him go
He held me in his arms,
while keeping my head on his chest
Together, we fell asleep,
and dreamt away...

Update (9-11-2006):

Reach in the dark

Your tears falling into the darkness,
unseen, but noticed,
leave stains on your cheeks
You smile, trying to cover your pain,
still knowing where your path will lead
Day after day,
it leads to the same old threat,
wich is the source of your misery
While facing it,
you can't get out
You reach out in the dark,
with only little hope,
and expecting a void
Instead, you're holding our hands,
and you know,
that you're not alone

Update (9-15-2006):

Hidden identity
Sweet boy,
your attempt to tell me,
had reached its goal
All I need to know now,
is your name and face
Be not afraid,
I won't hurt you,
come to me
It may be the start
of something beautiful...

Update (9-28-2006):

Exhaustion
Left alone in a crowded room,
filled with misunderstanding
A burden rests on my shoulders,
and in my mind
The world turns into a blur
and moving seems impossible
Control is out of my reach,
yelling commands me to move
All of me wants to obey,
except for my body
The burden gets heavier,
the yelling gets louder,
my body shuts down,
and all is gone...

These are my poems. Feedback is always welcome, of course. Thank you for your time

<3 Shari

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"I should ignore the words you say, for they can hurt but won't kill me" - Racoon

Whaddya know? first post... XD

Very good work on the two new ones, Shari. Sad stories in both, but I liked how the second was also hopeful. I sensed a fair ammount of anger in the first, and I think it's great that you can convery such powerful feelings in a short space. You're definetely one of the most talented people I've seen when it comes to short poems. they flow nicely, and nothing looks forced. Keep writing, even if you pull off my personal "techinique" and blow off an entire night's work to write one poem. (Yeah, I know... I'm a lazy bum. So sue me. ) Anyways, take care girl, and hang in there. *hugs*

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they rock!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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amo-te para sempre carla
http://www.evboard.com/showthread.php?t=31607 please check my art

Wow, I love your poems! They're really emotional.
Keep it up!
<3 kathy

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I get a little warm in my heart
when I think of winter!

cool poems, i like there simple depth!! (simple meaning structure, depth meaning emotion they paint!)

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My Space My Stuff

New poem, people! 'A tied-up lover'. Yeh. And I wrote it in....5 minutes or so?

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"I should ignore the words you say, for they can hurt but won't kill me" - Racoon

tied up lover is awesome!!!!!

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amo-te para sempre carla
http://www.evboard.com/showthread.php?t=31607 please check my art

Nicely done, Shari.

Tied up lover was a great piece. Honest, sincere, and I can tell there's far more to it than meets the eye. I especially liked it because it's just the thing I'd say... great write, and I'm glad things are going better for you... just hang in there. *hugs* later!

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