Hating.Burning.Weeping - EvBoard

proudindividual · 04-15-2006, 09:59 AM

i had my trusty pencil sharpened to a pinpoint in my hand i let all my feelings wash over me in a tidal wave... and this is what came out.

Hating.Burning.Weeping

Hating myself
Hating the world
Hating goodbyes...

Rampant pain
Haunting me
Is this what the angels send me
To tempt me to hang on?
Tears from an angel's face
Aren't going to tie me down.

Hating myself
Hating the world
Hating goodbyes...

Incandescent fate
Blinding my tortued eyes
Torrid flames sear and scorch my skin
Works ofd a pyromaniac god.

Hating myself
Hating the world
Hating goodbyes...

A hollow empty mannequin
Pawed and turned this way and that
A mere doll
But for the tears that soak flesh cheeks
And blood which drips
Warm and Crimson.

Hating myself
Hating the world
Hating goodbyes...

The trouble with a mannequin
Is that it's often made of wood;
Wood can burn.
It is a pile of ash before you can save it
And so, again, i am a mannequin
Turned to ash and scattered...

Hating myself
Hating the world
Hating goodbyes...

Madness and world-warping insanity
Stalk their prey;
They can sense i'm almost lost
They steal my ashes
And ressurrect them in a mold of agony
And confusion.

Hating myself
Hating the world
Hating goodbyes...

I lie in a timeless limbo
A shadow of myself
With a black hole at the centre
Slowly sucking in everything i have left
Unstoppable and deadly.

Hating myself
Hating the world
Hating goodbyes...

And the pain it holds me
Firm
In the flaming palm of it's putrid hand.
Watching the black hole drag me in
With laughing eyes.

Weeping for myself
Weeping for the world
Weeping my goodbyes...

19_Dracena_11 · 04-15-2006, 04:01 PM

Woah! This is blumin' great... the words are so powerful and the vocabulary is varied and... just wow.

proudindividual · 04-17-2006, 10:27 AM

im glad you liked this so much! this is kinda my emotion expressed raw.
love
pi

FelicityS · 04-18-2006, 08:13 AM

cool can't wait to see what the next tidal wave brings!

Roman_Dhampir22 · 04-18-2006, 09:40 AM

Amazing. Your words and brutal and honest. Can't wait for more of your words.

Ashlee · 04-18-2006, 09:43 AM

Amazing! Like Roman_Dhampir22 said, you are brutally honest but I can still feel a sence of vulnerability in your words, they're beautiful.

looking forward to reading more

CigaretteSpider · 04-20-2006, 11:46 AM

Wow. I was blown away. VERY powerful, very strong words. I could really relate to it, and it gave me a sense of feeling what you must have been feeling at that time. Very well written!

-Katt xx

04-15-2006, 09:59 AM	#1 (permalink)
proudindividual n00blet Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: England Posts: 21 Points: 105.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 105.00 Donate	Hating.Burning.Weeping i had my trusty pencil sharpened to a pinpoint in my hand i let all my feelings wash over me in a tidal wave... and this is what came out. Hating.Burning.Weeping Hating myself Hating the world Hating goodbyes... Rampant pain Haunting me Is this what the angels send me To tempt me to hang on? Tears from an angel's face Aren't going to tie me down. Hating myself Hating the world Hating goodbyes... Incandescent fate Blinding my tortued eyes Torrid flames sear and scorch my skin Works ofd a pyromaniac god. Hating myself Hating the world Hating goodbyes... A hollow empty mannequin Pawed and turned this way and that A mere doll But for the tears that soak flesh cheeks And blood which drips Warm and Crimson. Hating myself Hating the world Hating goodbyes... The trouble with a mannequin Is that it's often made of wood; Wood can burn. It is a pile of ash before you can save it And so, again, i am a mannequin Turned to ash and scattered... Hating myself Hating the world Hating goodbyes... Madness and world-warping insanity Stalk their prey; They can sense i'm almost lost They steal my ashes And ressurrect them in a mold of agony And confusion. Hating myself Hating the world Hating goodbyes... I lie in a timeless limbo A shadow of myself With a black hole at the centre Slowly sucking in everything i have left Unstoppable and deadly. Hating myself Hating the world Hating goodbyes... And the pain it holds me Firm In the flaming palm of it's putrid hand. Watching the black hole drag me in With laughing eyes. Weeping for myself Weeping for the world Weeping my goodbyes...

04-18-2006, 08:13 AM	#4 (permalink)
FelicityS Fledgling Post Monkey Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Sydney Posts: 1,403 Points: 700.64 Bank: 41.06 Total Points: 741.70 Donate	cool can't wait to see what the next tidal wave brings! __________________ My Space My Stuff

04-18-2006, 09:40 AM	#5 (permalink)
Roman_Dhampir22 Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Cleveland, OH BORING!!!!!!!!!!! Age: 25 Posts: 77 Points: 169.64 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 169.64 Donate	Amazing. Your words and brutal and honest. Can't wait for more of your words. __________________ The dead have no lord to answer too.

04-18-2006, 09:43 AM	#6 (permalink)
Ashlee THATSWHATSHESAID Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Edward's meadow Age: 19 Posts: 2,757 Points: 10,417.47 Bank: 18,565.29 Total Points: 28,982.76 Donate	Amazing! Like Roman_Dhampir22 said, you are brutally honest but I can still feel a sence of vulnerability in your words, they're beautiful. looking forward to reading more __________________ ♥ Last edited by Ashlee : 04-18-2006 at 09:50 AM.

04-20-2006, 11:46 AM	#7 (permalink)
CigaretteSpider n00blet Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Copenhagen, Denmark Age: 17 Posts: 13 Points: 128.85 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 128.85 Donate	Dood.. Wow. I was blown away. VERY powerful, very strong words. I could really relate to it, and it gave me a sense of feeling what you must have been feeling at that time. Very well written! -Katt xx

04-15-2006, 04:01 PM	#2 (permalink)
19_Dracena_11 n00blet Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: London. Posts: 6 Points: 100.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 100.00 Donate	Woah! This is blumin' great... the words are so powerful and the vocabulary is varied and... just wow.

04-17-2006, 10:27 AM	#3 (permalink)
proudindividual n00blet Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: England Posts: 21 Points: 105.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 105.00 Donate	im glad you liked this so much! this is kinda my emotion expressed raw. love pi

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