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Nothing · 02-27-2006, 08:49 AM

Suggestions are okay.

I had some trouble with my English (I know it sucks).. So thanks

I'm ashamed

Violette · 02-27-2006, 03:00 PM

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Originally Posted by Nothing

Suggestions are okay.

I had some trouble with my English (I know it sucks).. So thanks

I'm ashamed

Please don't be ashamed. I was only trying to help. Your English is actually very good, but sometimes we all make little slip-ups when speaking/writing in foreign languages. I used to take courses in Spanish, and that happened to the students all the time.

I think you should be proud of how well you write in English, to be honest. Just think that learning from the little mistakes you make will help you speak and write the language better.

Nothing · 03-21-2006, 06:52 AM

Pain
March 13, 2006

The pain helps her
To bear this life
It helps her to forget
Everything that happened
Even though it's for a while

But afterwards,
She feels ashamed
She feels guilty
She feels stupid

She feels her wounds
But wounds will heal
She notice her scars
But scars will fade
Yet the scars are carved,
On her soul to stay forever

Nothing · 03-22-2006, 08:11 AM

I wrote this one yesterday. I love this poem. And I hope you like it too.

Never Heard
March 21, 2006

She watched you for hours
She looked into your eyes
But you never looked back
Never heard her silent goodbyes

She was silent for years
Even when she spoke
And you never listened
You didn't hear her choke

She tried to tell you,
Every single stupid word
But her voice remained quiet
The words were never heard

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02-27-2006, 08:49 AM	#31 (permalink)
Nothing Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: The Netherlands Age: 20 Posts: 27 Points: 152.81 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 152.81 Donate	Suggestions are okay. I had some trouble with my English (I know it sucks).. So thanks I'm ashamed

03-21-2006, 06:52 AM	#33 (permalink)
Nothing Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: The Netherlands Age: 20 Posts: 27 Points: 152.81 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 152.81 Donate	Pain March 13, 2006 The pain helps her To bear this life It helps her to forget Everything that happened Even though it's for a while But afterwards, She feels ashamed She feels guilty She feels stupid She feels her wounds But wounds will heal She notice her scars But scars will fade Yet the scars are carved, On her soul to stay forever

03-22-2006, 08:11 AM	#34 (permalink)
Nothing Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: The Netherlands Age: 20 Posts: 27 Points: 152.81 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 152.81 Donate	I wrote this one yesterday. I love this poem. And I hope you like it too. Never Heard March 21, 2006 She watched you for hours She looked into your eyes But you never looked back Never heard her silent goodbyes She was silent for years Even when she spoke And you never listened You didn't hear her choke She tried to tell you, Every single stupid word But her voice remained quiet The words were never heard

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