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01-26-2006, 07:45 AM
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n00blet
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: Somewhere of nowhere.....
Age: 19
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Bleeding and breathing hardly for hours.... I can�t find what keeps me here Haunted by your face... My sweet dear � Can you touch me in the dark? My soul is empty My body burning My neck cries for your bite my dear My grave awaiting me ... cold.... fear�. Catch as I fall God in Heaven !! I gave my soul to the evil Hiding myself Killin� the truth Building hate ... Can you see me now? Can you love me so ? I can�t breathe.... But I can feel...still The crawls of the Devil The scars of the Death ... I�m tired� stoned Dead ... Welcome Home... .... PS: Frantic....I guess..... Out of touch but....maybe i should writte someting better ..Who cares?.... Bites, M D |
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01-27-2006, 11:03 PM
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Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: Medellin, Colombia
Age: 18
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hey... nicely done poem, I liked the images you used, kinda dark and creepy, but with a tinge of religion in there. Nicely done. A bit of Ev. in there too, I see.
 Hope to see more soon, I like your style very much.
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