This is short and basic, and quiet bad, not my best :-/

Acid Tears

Sliding down her cheek bone,
A path of destruction being left behind
As her emotions spin wildly out of control,
The long held drought broken by the pain of acid tears,

Darkness follows her traces,
As so many thought swirl her mind,
Causing her to scream with frustration and cry for desire,

Acid tears burn their way,
Breaking the dam holding the drought,
Responding to complicated thoughts, from complicating moments,
Proving them selves to be true,

Run, run with her,
Run away to paradise,
Follow her heart,
Search her desire,
Save her from the world.

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I really don't feel all that good today :-/ So i wont post the other one... english really need to get more intersting


Love filled dreams

In love filled dreams, hope and excitement are fed,
In reality everything crumbles,
Under my hope, under my excitement,
Everything crumbles.

I’m growing up to find my life broken,
To realise my happiness is an illusion,
And to find my love is foolish

Love filled dreams keep me awake in the land of the temporary dead,
My eyes gleam with happiness,
And my heart bleeds love,
But it’s all not real,
It’s made up images by my insane mind,

Nothing is outside my eyes,
I’ve tried so hard,
But dreams are just thoughts,
Dreams are made up to feed me lies,

I’m growing up to find;
My life broken,
My happiness an illusion,
And my love to be foolish.

I walk around in empty space
Silence,
Echoing foot steps,
I really am alone
outside my love filled dreams.

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OMG Alicia!!!This one,love filled dreams,is perfect!!I <3 it!
It drives me to imaginary fields!!Its just perfect!!!

Triggering Desire

I’m trapped, imprisoned,
There’s no way out,
No way of escaping,
Each move is cutting deep into me,

I’ve turned into a puppet,
Speaking what I am told to,
Moving when they want me too,
I’m controlled by another mind,

The world is my enemy,
My threat,
My desire

I need to escape,
This place will be my grave.
With every thought going through my mind,
I’m not going to survive

I’m trapped in this one place,
With each move cutting deeper into me,
And each shadow sending me into deeper despair,
A figure is pressing threatening like against my trigger,
I feel another day the trigger will not last,
My desire more desperate than yesterday,
Tomorrow I shall fly


This has offencive language in it... just to warn you
And its not finished, i think it needs some editing still


Under the waxing moon

I liked it when you made me feel significant,
I loved how I always felt unique,
And I miss the way you made out you needed me so bad,

Fuck you!
That night meant so much to me,
Got to hell,
For making it so perfect,
And Screw you,
For what you made me believe.

Fuck it!
It was all fake,
Your full of shit,
My heart is set on fire

Under the waxing moon,
I feel into a trance,
Under a spell,
I feel in love with you,

Fuck it!
It was all fake,
Fuck you!
Your full of lies,
My heart is on fire,

Return me under the waxing moon,
To where I can re-live that illusion
And escape this burning pain,
The lie felt better than this reality.

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Wow. I love it. Absolutely love it. I love the very first one in the very first post. I love the picture it painted.

Wow. You are awesome.

I found this one, its old and was in the old thread, bit it has a short of inspiring finish i think so worth posting again.


The Autumn Leaf

The roads are pulling me,
Two different ways I can not go,
Ho do I choose from what I know nothing?
The flowers may tempt me,
The walls may keep screaming,
But I still feel as if I am in transit,

Love may create blindness,
But I feel not love,
People may keep laughing,
But I refuse to let it rain,
Keep teasing me with path ways,
Knowing my undeceive ways,
I will not let the rain clouds purvey,

Keep watching
I want to see the face
When I become that doubted
Jumping their hurdle, their trick,
Not being the entertainment for their amusement,

Friends may be friends,
Enemies are enemies,
But one can not be both,
Patronizing me may be their crime
For I will not bleed,
I will not be a leaf in autumn
For I will follow the road I create

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I liked the Love-Filled Dreams one...I could relate. But I thought it was, like, TOO specific. Be more subtle with the emotions and imagery, instead of coming right out and TELLING us what you're seeing and feeling.

Triggering Desire was good too...could also relate.

Really liked the waxing moon one...very angry, it's good to just vent like that. But it was well done as well. Again, I could relate.

Those were the only ones I read...I'll get around to the others soon.

With this one, i am not entirely happy in how it turned out. The last stanza, its not perfect i have to work with that a bit, but i hope you guys like it anyway, but you don't have to, you can totally hate it and think its the worst thing ever written



Voices


The voices inside my head get excited at my trembling crys

In the sun my soul burns,
In the shade my heart turns to ice,
Nothing satisfies,
And thew the voices cry

The demons processing me show curage and strength,
Everything I want,
But then the voices sent them away,
They send them away,
To show my weakness once again

Numbness is all I crave,
Its wrong,
But it stops the tears,
Stops the crying,
The voices go away,
They go away!

To bleed, is that too much to ask?
To bleed, to wash away the voices,
To make them leave,
But they find their way back,
They always find their way,
They always come back!

Numbness is all I crave,
Its wrong,
But it stops the tears,
Stops the crying,
The voices go away,
They go away!

My hand shakes, and I can’t cut straight,
This far down the road I have never been before,
The voices laugh at my pathetic ways,
And I have found that I have turned to them,
To the demons I have turned,
I’m desperate,
too desperate,
And they grinned with satisfaction as they take possession of me.

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omg, Alicia, i love your poems. they're really beautiful.
keep posting