Jen's poem - EvBoard

ChinaDoll06 · 09-20-2007, 01:04 PM

Ok, I've just thought of it in my head. I usually write it down first, but I don't have time. I'm in college. This poem has nothing to do with me. I'm feeling really creative.

Febuary
Everything I known was gone. Why all the pain to eat my heart away? The lies separted my once joyful peace. Bitter venmon tastes in my mouth as I'm screaming for help. The world now is a dark evil that wants to take everyones smile. Tears can't express how tormented I feel as I'm losing myself. I don't know who I am. Please tell me who I am. The lonely feeling is cold as the Febuary winter.

He was my everything. None of the tears I bring can led him back to me. Oh how wish to be free; to get in my resting place. I'll close my eyes, and dream alittle dream. It is my only sweet release to exit the hurt. Rain is falling from the sky. I ask why he had to die. Please, lover, return in my arms, and say you'll stay! It never rained so hard as it did today.

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ChinaDoll06 Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Wonder Land Age: 21 Posts: 144 Points: 2,652.45 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 2,652.45 Donate	Jen's poem Ok, I've just thought of it in my head. I usually write it down first, but I don't have time. I'm in college. This poem has nothing to do with me. I'm feeling really creative. Febuary Everything I known was gone. Why all the pain to eat my heart away? The lies separted my once joyful peace. Bitter venmon tastes in my mouth as I'm screaming for help. The world now is a dark evil that wants to take everyones smile. Tears can't express how tormented I feel as I'm losing myself. I don't know who I am. Please tell me who I am. The lonely feeling is cold as the Febuary winter. He was my everything. None of the tears I bring can led him back to me. Oh how wish to be free; to get in my resting place. I'll close my eyes, and dream alittle dream. It is my only sweet release to exit the hurt. Rain is falling from the sky. I ask why he had to die. Please, lover, return in my arms, and say you'll stay! It never rained so hard as it did today. Last edited by ChinaDoll06 : 09-20-2007 at 01:16 PM.

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