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11-27-2005, 07:39 AM
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Join Date: Sep 2005
Location: near Kaiserslautern, Germany
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Josi's stuff
Hi everyone!^^
Now here's a thread for my stuff. First a text I wrote a long time before. It helped me and I hope some of you, too. As I wrote it, the text was in German, now I wrote it again in english. I hope you understand it.  Wake up! I’m sitting here in my own shadow. Crying for help. Why no one hears me? Are they deaf? I’m searching the exit for weeks. Desperate, lonely and almost dumb. But still crying for help to escape from myself. Sure no one hears me, I can’t still hear me anymore. My voice is shaking and I’m hoarse… Sure nobody wants to hear me! I a discouraged, lonely one. What am I?! No this can’t get any further! I have to go out of my shadow! I have to take the world like it is. I’m going now. Good bye shadow, good bye loneliness, good bye my nightmare! My true home is waiting for me! Going to the light in front of my eyes I see them, the people who were hearing my shouts for help. All of them standing there giving me their hands to help me out of here. I’m coming reality, I will accept you, no matter how hard or easy you will be! I woke up! By J.S.
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11-27-2005, 08:16 AM
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Join Date: Jun 2005
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nice poem (?) you have written, josi. it sounds very powerful and angry. i can imagine that it helped you
 it would be nice when you post the text in german, too.<33 - nadine
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11-27-2005, 08:22 AM
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Thank you nadine!^^
Well, I think it's not a poem, it's a text with much feelings of me... Here's the German text: Erwache!!! Ich sitze hier in meinem eigenen Schatten. Um Hilfe schreiend. Warum hört mich denn niemand? Sind sie taub? Wochenlang suche ich schon nach dem Ausgang. Verzweifelt, allein und schon fast stumm. Aber immer noch nach Hilfe schreiend, um vor mir selbst zu fliehen. Natürlich hört mich niemand, ich kann mich ja selbst kaum noch hören. Meine Stimme ist zittrig und heiser… Natürlich will mich niemand hören!!! Mich, ein mutloses, einsames etwas. Was bin ich?! Nein, so kann das nicht weitergehen. Ich muss aus meinem Schatten springen Und die Welt nehmen, wie sie ist. Ich gehe jetzt! Leb wohl Schatten, leb wohl Einsamkeit und lebe wohl Alptraum! Mein wahres Zuhause wartet auf mich! Immer auf das Licht zugehend sehe ich sie nun, die Menschen, die meinen Hilferuf gehört haben, alle stehen sie da und strecken mir ihre Hände zu um mich hier herauszuholen. Ich komme Realität, ich werde dich jetzt akzeptieren, egal wie hart, wie simpel, du auch sein magst, ich bin jetzt erwacht! By J.S.
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11-27-2005, 08:33 AM
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11-27-2005, 04:01 PM
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Here's a song I wrote today: You've sure gone too far Text 1: Rain falls down, I hear the sound, remind me of you. Broken hearts, near to me, remind me of you. The night began I see the darkness, Remind me of you. Can your hear the song? Going on when you're starting to go around. Refrain: You made the grade you tricked all in your area. You've broken things you don't have, you've sure gone too far! Text 2: The left rooms, so hollow, remind me of you. The cold air, I'm feeling now, remind me of you. The caught mouse in the cave behind me, remind me of you. Want you to get out of here? It's the last thing I can do for you. You made the grade you tricked all in your area. You've broken things you don't have, you've sure gone too far! C-Teil All I can do for you is to bring you far away! But if you want to stay, we all will leave, anyway! Was that what you wanted to be left and all alone? Say me if you just wanted to be on your own? You made the grade you tricked all in your area. You've broken things you don't have, you've sure gone too far! by J.S.
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03-06-2006, 01:22 PM
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http://img365.imageshack.us/img365/7581/amyhand14dq.jpg
http://img365.imageshack.us/img365/8...nachair1tr.jpg http://img365.imageshack.us/img365/4...ndwhite0dw.jpg Here are some pics, the first and the second is Amy(I think you all know where they come from) The third is the relationship from Good to Bad.
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