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SoulNightmare · 09-16-2004, 04:36 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Nd Zodiac

Hi! My name is Andrea Baskin, I’m 22 years old, live in Subotica (Serbia & Montenegro), and of course I’m a great fan of Evanescense. Amy Lee is an inspiration to me, ‘cause her songs are like mine ( I mean of course hers are better, but we have the same style of writing). So I decided to write a song, and post it here hoping that maybe one wonderfull day Amy herself will read it, and maybe like it.
I hope to hear from you one day…
Best wishes…
Nd

EMPTINESS

The pain inside me, it seems growing day by day,
no matter what tomorrow brings, we’re all dying anyway.

There’s no future in this world, where everybody wants to
possess, more than the other,
but inside they realize there’s nothing more then emptiness.

CHORUS :
Emptiness, I see it in your…
Emptiness, I see it in your eyes,
Emptiness, I don’t believe your…
Emptiness, I don’t belive your lies.

Lying here alone, warm blood flowing down my body,
screaming without any voice, ‘cause I know there is
nobody.

Raindrops wash away the blood, time will take the pain
away,
but still deep inside my soul, the emptiness will stay.

CHORUS
Emptiness…

You told me that you never leave me, never leave me here
alone,
but now you’re gone, and my heart has turn to stone.

I never thought that you could be,
everything that lives in me,
but maybe I was wrong I guess,
than all you left is EMPTINESS!

CHORUS

WRITTEN BY:

ND ZODIAC

Dedicated to Amy Lee

"Workshop

"

wow i can so relate to this song. you have talent too

. and i agree that Amy would be proud to be your insperation.

Nd Zodiac · 09-16-2004, 05:05 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SoulNightmare

wow i can so relate to this song. you have talent too

. and i agree that Amy would be proud to be your insperation.

Thanx

,it's always nice to hear (or should I say read

) words like that

!

Nd Zodiac · 09-30-2004, 05:23 PM

Just wanted to thank everyone for the nice words.
Thanx guys, it's nice to know that people like what you do

!!!
Nd

Nd Zodiac · 10-01-2004, 07:18 AM

Ok here's one more,I wrote it just today

.

ANGEL IN CHAINS
Look at me,
Tell me what you see,
Can’t you see the chain,
And my eyes so full of pain?

My wings are broken,
No longer I can fly,
These chains don’t let me breathe,
I will never again reach the sky.

CHORUS:
Tell me God,
Can you see your soldier?
His raped soul,
Can you feel his torture?
His empty eyes,
Can you hear him screaming?
His powerless body,
Can you stop his bleeding?

Tears of blood,
Are flowing down my face,
Save me from this hell on earth,
Take me to another place.

Show me your mercy,
Free me from this chains,
The pain will slowly go away,
But the scar on the heart forever remains.

CHORUS 2x
"moon_watcher's" drawing inspired me to it,so I dedicate this song to her

!!!
Nd

morbid_faerie13 · 10-01-2004, 03:29 PM

that is awesome! you are seriously talented! i really like it, it sounds so.... amy. lol.

Nd Zodiac · 10-05-2004, 10:22 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by morbid_faerie13

that is awesome! you are seriously talented! i really like it, it sounds so.... amy. lol.

Thanx

! Here is one more,I tried a little different style

.

...

Empty...
Broken...
Too many words...
Unspoken...

Unspoken...
Forbidden...
Secret thoughts carefully...
Hidden...

Hidden...
Creeping...
Sitting alone in the dark...
Bleeding...

Bleeding...
Screaming...
Being alone,and finally...
Leaving...

Leaving...
Dissapearing...
Can't stand the endless...
Torture...

Torture...
Pain...
The scars will forever...
Remain...

Nd Zodiac · 10-21-2004, 04:29 PM

Ok, the newest

!

FREE
Loneliness cuts like a knife,
I can’t stand this painfull life,
Show me the way,
Lead me to the light,
Set my spirit free,
I’m dying here tonight.

Tomorrow,
I be forsaken,
My life cruely taken,
My soul,
Free from the chain,
My body,
Free from the pain.

The devil laughs into my face,
I know that I can’t win this race,
He opens his mouth and swallows my soul,
Everything’s getting outta control.

CHORUS:
Set me free,
Set me free, set me free, set me free,
Let me be,
Let me be, let me be, let me be.

The knife goes through my flesh like it is butter,
The red line on my shakeing hand, just leads to another,
Please do it for me, I’m not brave enough,
Don’t be gentle, just be rough.

Damned to live my broken dreams,
To hear in my mind this demonic screams,
In the mirror that’s not me,
End my life and set me free.

CHORUS: 2x

sweetwater · 10-22-2004, 01:27 PM

omg...that is awesome nd zodiac...the chorus is simple but soooo clear and powerful..whoa.

Nd Zodiac · 10-22-2004, 03:05 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sweetwater

omg...that is awesome nd zodiac...the chorus is simple but soooo clear and powerful..whoa.

Thanks

,it's good to hear so nice words for something that is very important too me

!

Nd Zodiac · 10-23-2004, 05:50 PM

POISON
You’re the poison in my veins,
You’ve got the key to my chains,
Your kiss is sweet,
Just like your lie,
But in the end,
I know I’ll die.

CHORUS:
Save me,
Feel me,
Betray me,
Kill me!

Blood is thicker then wine,
And I know I'll make you mine.

A drop of your poison,
Can kill all my pain,
Outside it is cold and dark,
It begins to rain.

The sky is crying,
‘cause it feels my sorrow,
I wish you could feel it,
But you are so hollow.

CHORUS

10-01-2004, 07:18 AM	#24 (permalink)
Nd Zodiac Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: In a world that I've created Age: 26 Posts: 230 Points: 143.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 143.00 Donate	Ok here's one more,I wrote it just today . ANGEL IN CHAINS Look at me, Tell me what you see, Can’t you see the chain, And my eyes so full of pain? My wings are broken, No longer I can fly, These chains don’t let me breathe, I will never again reach the sky. CHORUS: Tell me God, Can you see your soldier? His raped soul, Can you feel his torture? His empty eyes, Can you hear him screaming? His powerless body, Can you stop his bleeding? Tears of blood, Are flowing down my face, Save me from this hell on earth, Take me to another place. Show me your mercy, Free me from this chains, The pain will slowly go away, But the scar on the heart forever remains. CHORUS 2x "moon_watcher's" drawing inspired me to it,so I dedicate this song to her !!! Nd Last edited by Nd Zodiac : 10-08-2004 at 06:45 AM.

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09-30-2004, 05:23 PM	#23 (permalink)
Nd Zodiac Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: In a world that I've created Age: 26 Posts: 230 Points: 143.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 143.00 Donate	Just wanted to thank everyone for the nice words. Thanx guys, it's nice to know that people like what you do !!! Nd

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morbid_faerie13 Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Holland (Michigan, I'm NOT Dutch) Age: 17 Posts: 176 Points: 191.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 191.00 Donate	that is awesome! you are seriously talented! i really like it, it sounds so.... amy. lol.

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Nd Zodiac Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: In a world that I've created Age: 26 Posts: 230 Points: 143.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 143.00 Donate	Ok, the newest ! FREE Loneliness cuts like a knife, I can’t stand this painfull life, Show me the way, Lead me to the light, Set my spirit free, I’m dying here tonight. Tomorrow, I be forsaken, My life cruely taken, My soul, Free from the chain, My body, Free from the pain. The devil laughs into my face, I know that I can’t win this race, He opens his mouth and swallows my soul, Everything’s getting outta control. CHORUS: Set me free, Set me free, set me free, set me free, Let me be, Let me be, let me be, let me be. The knife goes through my flesh like it is butter, The red line on my shakeing hand, just leads to another, Please do it for me, I’m not brave enough, Don’t be gentle, just be rough. Damned to live my broken dreams, To hear in my mind this demonic screams, In the mirror that’s not me, End my life and set me free. CHORUS: 2x

10-22-2004, 01:27 PM	#28 (permalink)
sweetwater Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 862 Points: 142.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 142.00 Donate	omg...that is awesome nd zodiac...the chorus is simple but soooo clear and powerful..whoa.

10-23-2004, 05:50 PM	#30 (permalink)
Nd Zodiac Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: In a world that I've created Age: 26 Posts: 230 Points: 143.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 143.00 Donate	POISON You’re the poison in my veins, You’ve got the key to my chains, Your kiss is sweet, Just like your lie, But in the end, I know I’ll die. CHORUS: Save me, Feel me, Betray me, Kill me! Blood is thicker then wine, And I know I'll make you mine. A drop of your poison, Can kill all my pain, Outside it is cold and dark, It begins to rain. The sky is crying, ‘cause it feels my sorrow, I wish you could feel it, But you are so hollow. CHORUS

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