Hi! My name is Andrea Baskin, I’m 22 years old, live in Subotica (Serbia & Montenegro), and of course I’m a great fan of Evanescense. Amy Lee is an inspiration to me, ‘cause her songs are like mine ( I mean of course hers are better, but we have the same style of writing). So I decided to write a song, and post it here hoping that maybe one wonderfull day Amy herself will read it, and maybe like it.
I hope to hear from you one day…
Best wishes…
Nd

I decided to put all my stuff together so you can read it easier ,enjoy!

EMPTINESS

The pain inside me, it seems growing day by day,
no matter what tomorrow brings, we’re all dying anyway.

There’s no future in this world, where everybody wants to
possess, more than the other,
but inside they realize there’s nothing more then emptiness.

CHORUS :
Emptiness, I see it in your…
Emptiness, I see it in your eyes,
Emptiness, I don’t believe your…
Emptiness, I don’t belive your lies.

Lying here alone, warm blood flowing down my body,
screaming without any voice, ‘cause I know there is
nobody.

Raindrops wash away the blood, time will take the pain
away,
but still deep inside my soul, the emptiness will stay.

CHORUS
Emptiness…

You told me that you never leave me, never leave me here
alone,
but now you’re gone, and my heart has turn to stone.

I never thought that you could be,
everything that lives in me,
but maybe I was wrong I guess,
than all you left is EMPTINESS!

CHORUS

Dedicated to Amy Lee

"Workshop "



Somebody told that there are not many love songs/poems around here so I decided to write one,and to open a thread for me and other romantic people .

SOMETIMES I WISH…

Sometimes I wish to be a tear,
to flow down your cheek, touch your lips,
die on your bosom,
and just disapear.

Sometimes I wish to be your shadow,
so you never walk alone,
if you ever want to be a king,
I will be your throne.

Sometimes I wish to be the wind,
to courage you with my voice,
no matter what the others say,
you always have a choice.

So if you are wondering,
what I want to say,
it’s a simple “I LOVE YOU”,
but in a little different way.


WRITTEN BY:

ND ZODIAC

Now it's your turn,I want you honest thoughts about it .Be free to post your stuff too !!!!
Greets
Nd


WHEN HE SMILES

He rises his little hands,
Wanted me to hold him,
I’m watching him when he sleeps,
Wondering what he may dream.

When he puts his head on my chest,
I can feel him breathing,
In that moment I don’t care,
What the next day will bring.

When I’m looking,
In his big black eyes,
I know that he is unable,
To tell any kind of lies.

I prey to God,
May he just protect him,
That he grows to a proud man,
With many luck and self esteem.

When he smiles,
The sun’s becoming jealous,
We all listen carefully,
What he’s trying to tell us.

Dedicated to my nephew Alex (He’s now 8 months old ,and I love him!)

"workshop" be free to criticise it !



PAY DAY
You can kick me, spit on me,
Still I won’t be under you control,
You can brake my body in pieces,
But you’ll never brake my soul.

I will swallow all the pain,
The laugh won’t leave my face,
At the end it all will be,
Just your own disgrace.

Chorus:
Soon will come the day,
When you have to pay,
For all the thing you’ve done,
Better hide your face and run.


What you give is what you get,
You’ve picked the hard way to learn that,
What you give is what you get,
They’re some things that I won’t forget.

You can’t hide in a place,
That nobody can find,
You’ll wish you never knew me,
Try to erase me from your mind.


Chorus

You never say sorry,
But you will wish you had,
That will be too late,
Then soon you will be dead.

Chorus



LIVING ON THE EDGE
Is it reallity,
Or just another dream?
Every night,
I wake up and scream.


I wish to disapear,
But immpossible it seems,
Night after night,
I’m dying in my dreams.


Living on the edge,
There’s no way out,
A little voice inside of me,
Makes me wanna shout.


I can’t stop,
The voices in my head,
That’s the reason why it seems,
That I’m always sad.


Deep in my heart,
The pain kills my illusion,
All what’s left,
Is only fear and confusion.


Stop it! Stop it!
I’m sick of everything,
Is this all,
What this stupid life can bring?



WRITTEN BY:
ND ZODIAC


ANGEL IN CHAINS
Look at me,
Tell me what you see,
Can’t you see the chain,
And my eyes so full of pain?

My wings are broken,
No longer I can fly,
These chains don’t let me breathe,
I will never again reach the sky.

CHORUS:
Tell me God,
Can you see your soldier?
His raped soul,
Can you feel his torture?
His empty eyes,
Can you hear him screaming?
His powerless body,
Can you stop his bleeding?


Tears of blood,
Are flowing down my face,
Save me from this hell on earth,
Take me to another place.

Show me your mercy,
Free me from this chains,
The pain will slowly go away,
But the scar on the heart forever remains.

CHORUS 2x

"moon_watcher's" drawing inspired me to it,so I dedicate this song to her !!!
Nd



...

Empty...
Broken...
Too many words...
Unspoken...

Unspoken...
Forbidden...
Secret thoughts carefully...
Hidden...

Hidden...
Creeping...
Sitting alone in the dark...
Bleeding...

Bleeding...
Screaming...
Being alone,and finally...
Leaving...

Leaving...
Dissapearing...
Can't stand the endless...
Torture...

Torture...
Pain...
The scars will forever...
Remain...



FREE
Loneliness cuts like a knife,
I can’t stand this painfull life,
Show me the way,
Lead me to the light,
Set my spirit free,
I’m dying here tonight.


Tomorrow,
I be forsaken,
My life cruely taken,
My soul,
Free from the chain,
My body,
Free from the pain.

The devil laughs into my face,
I know that I can’t win this race,
He opens his mouth and swallows my soul,
Everything’s getting outta control.

CHORUS:
Set me free,
Set me free, set me free, set me free,
Let me be,
Let me be, let me be, let me be.


The knife goes through my flesh like it is butter,
The red line on my shakeing hand, just leads to another,
Please do it for me, I’m not brave enough,
Don’t be gentle, just be rough.

Damned to live my broken dreams,
To hear in my mind this demonic screams,
In the mirror that’s not me,
End my life and set me free.

CHORUS: 2x

That is amazing.. Amy Lee should be proud that she inspires great talents like yours

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April 24th 2007...

another amy lee in the making me thinks...great stuff.

powerful and great...i reckon amy would love that.

Thanks for the compliment,I'am becoming red right now )))!It's just my third song in english,but I write poems 'till I was 7...
Thank you one more time, it's great to hear so nice words !

I don't know how to thank you for your words ,but I wil just say THANK YOU,THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!!
Nd

This was a great song.

This was my favorite line- "no matter what tomorrow brings, we’re all dying anyway." That line especially is brilliant.

Thanks a lot !!!I think your stuff is better then mine,but I'm wondering how it comes that you are so young but so full of pain?

Ok now here's a poem,I wrote it today


WHEN HE SMILES


He rises his little hands,
Wanted me to hold him,
I’m watching him when he sleeps,
Wondering what he may dream.



When he puts his head on my chest,
I can feel him breathing,
In that moment I don’t care,
What the next day will bring.



When I’m looking,
In his big black eyes,
I know that he is unable,
To tell any kind of lies.



I prey to God,
May he just protect him,
That he grows to a proud man,
With many luck and self esteem.



When he smiles,
The sun’s becoming jealous,
We all listen carefully,
What he’s trying to tell us.







Dedicated to my nephew Alex (He’s now 8 months old ,and I love him!)


"workshop" be free to criticise it !

The song's chorus was good, though maybe you should have found a better
thing to separate the lines with other than "....", because that made it a little
harder to read. But the poem was EXCELLENT, and I think you did perfectly on
it in every respect. Two thumbs up for both overall.