I wrote this today...feel free to tell me your opinion.

For My Best Friend

I'm trapped inside this body
Please get me a knife
I just can't live this way
So i'll just end my life
No one understands me
Not even I do
I'll take a few more pills
Then silently wait to die
This lie is almost over
And I let out one last sigh

I never told you everything
I doubt you'd want to know
But every night inside my eyes
I'd always see this show
It lasted for and hour
And i was the only star
A secret killer followed me
And ripped out my heart

Little did I ever know
You'd see the same thing too
I didn't ever want to think
This could happen to you

But one small difference
Made me feel
that this could not be true
the killer ripping out my heart...
well, it was you






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I've seen an angel
it's watching me
wishing for my soul
to become free
i cannot hear it
but i can tell
i feel my eyes
begin to swell
the angels motions
for me to come
i give in to them
my life is done

Wow... that's really deep. Write more.

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she thought it was bull sh**
that it was a lie,
i wouldn't take the knife,
or wish myself to die
nor did she believe that i'd do that to her
but when she denied it,
i knew i was sure
and when i reached bone
i could only hear HER screams
and i knew that forever
i'd haunt all of her dreams