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Ethereal · 09-19-2006, 04:01 PM

Crappy poems..

Heaven holds a sense of wonder

It was dark and cold.
It rained and I felt the raindrops on my skin.
I walked across the streets and enjoyed the silence around myself.
I laid on a wonderful hayfield and looked into the black sky.
It wasn't interesting but suddenly I saw a star like gold.
It was beautiful and I knew that you're 'here' at once.

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Scream In Pain

Why did you do this to me?
You have taken all that I ever constructed.
You ruined just all in my life but I loved you anyway.
I cried with pain.
I saw all with the obscurity.
You hurt me so much that I confided nobody anymore.
I already gave up myself but the painfully hate won.
I couldn't love someone that treated me like a plaything.
I hate you, I'm sorry, snotty bastard!

The first poem is about my dead brother, too.
And the second one is about my fucking last boyfriend. But it's 'long' ago.

**just an illusion** · 09-19-2006, 04:17 PM

Hey, they're not bad, they're nice. Much better than my yesterday's one.

Ethereal · 09-19-2006, 05:02 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by just an illusion

Hey, they're not bad, they're nice. Much better than my yesterday's one.

No, yours was nice, too!

Thanks anyway! <3

Ethereal · 02-16-2007, 09:10 AM

Hu, my thread died.

Here's a new drawing which I had to draw for art class.

I named the part of the town "Evanville"

It's a bit crestfallen, sorry. =/
Hope you like it. <3

~river~ · 09-04-2007, 05:04 AM

are you crazy they are great, far from crappy. i have never lost any one close to me but there is something in heaven holds a sense of wonder that just really speaks to me. hopefully i will be able to get my writting skills back a level half as good as your so called crappy poems which are as i said truly great

Sweet Tigger · 09-04-2007, 12:33 PM

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Originally Posted by Ethereal

Um that is my first stuff!Enjoy!

and the last one..

Most was in Italy

...

I think these pics are all absolutely Gorgeous!!! They are a breath taking view!! I love the last pic, I love pink, and it looks amazing!! I think its so peiceful, soothing, relazing, and I think this is all the pure beauty of life!! AWESOME PHOTO's!!!!!!

09-19-2006, 04:01 PM	#181 (permalink)
Ethereal Post Monkey Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Herne, Germany Age: 17 Posts: 2,427 Points: 26,801.51 Bank: 150,213.92 Total Points: 177,015.43 Donate	Crappy poems.. Heaven holds a sense of wonder It was dark and cold. It rained and I felt the raindrops on my skin. I walked across the streets and enjoyed the silence around myself. I laid on a wonderful hayfield and looked into the black sky. It wasn't interesting but suddenly I saw a star like gold. It was beautiful and I knew that you're 'here' at once. ________________________________ Scream In Pain Why did you do this to me? You have taken all that I ever constructed. You ruined just all in my life but I loved you anyway. I cried with pain. I saw all with the obscurity. You hurt me so much that I confided nobody anymore. I already gave up myself but the painfully hate won. I couldn't love someone that treated me like a plaything. I hate you, I'm sorry, snotty bastard! The first poem is about my dead brother, too. And the second one is about my fucking last boyfriend. But it's 'long' ago. __________________ I get a little warm in my heart when I think of winter! Last edited by Ethereal : 09-19-2006 at 04:16 PM.

09-19-2006, 04:17 PM	#182 (permalink)
just an illusion self-destruction Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Moscow, Russia Age: 20 Posts: 2,090 Points: 1,570.75 Bank: 449,030.28 Total Points: 450,601.03 Donate	Hey, they're not bad, they're nice. Much better than my yesterday's one. __________________ stranded here on planet earth it's not too much but it could be worse

02-16-2007, 09:10 AM	#184 (permalink)
Ethereal Post Monkey Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Herne, Germany Age: 17 Posts: 2,427 Points: 26,801.51 Bank: 150,213.92 Total Points: 177,015.43 Donate	Hu, my thread died. Here's a new drawing which I had to draw for art class. I named the part of the town "Evanville" It's a bit crestfallen, sorry. =/ Hope you like it. <3 __________________ I get a little warm in my heart when I think of winter! Last edited by Ethereal : 02-16-2007 at 06:11 PM.

09-04-2007, 05:04 AM	#185 (permalink)
~river~ Lips Like Morphine Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: at the heart of your darkest nightmares and deepest desires Age: 20 Posts: 2,006 Points: 740.49 Bank: 209,972.92 Total Points: 210,713.40 Donate	are you crazy they are great, far from crappy. i have never lost any one close to me but there is something in heaven holds a sense of wonder that just really speaks to me. hopefully i will be able to get my writting skills back a level half as good as your so called crappy poems which are as i said truly great __________________ Breathe for love tomorrow Cause there's no hope for today Breathe for love tomorrow Cause maybe there's another way

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