Awesome stuff that you posted recently. I liked reading them. Hope you post more soon.

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ok i know this next one is like uber long but oh well. i wrote it when i was feeling all nestalgic about my ex good stress ball... critique please? if there's too many cliche's please point them out.

we could've had it all... no distractions no need to tell anyone... they'd only hold us down... we were so close babe... came so close to the end... when we'd finally breathe without her... you never needed anyone other than me... I lived it all for you, darling... we had all the time inthe world... there was no need to rush... you knew who you were... where did you go?... i know you're not there... i can hear it in your voice... god, when you said my name... there's no sound i'd rather die for... i look in the mirror and all i see is you... we had the world at our feet... days by the shore... afternoons in the rain... nights behind the trees... but i'll not bother you again... and i won't cry anymore... i know what we had was real... though you pride may contradict our dream... i know you'll come back to me, love... i'll never forget all that you taught me... or the days we spent growing in love... the way i lived through you... i can't forget, run away with me and don't believe what they've said... i'm begging you, babe, stay with me... i'll give you everything... i'll be anything... if only i canhave another chance... their cynicism can only kill what's good for you... please, just hold me... don't leave me now... i'm not grasping at nothing... just admit you love me... convince me i'm sick... i know you'll heal me... if you come with me don't dare look back... she'll pull you back when it suits her... please don't let me die... oh god, stop the tears... walking away i see you turn... don't tell yourself she's real... only i am... can't you see... she doesn't know what we have... she'll never understand... love wields no obsession... she won't give it up for you... so why are you giving up what i knew?... please my beloved don't go... i know i left you... i see the face you put on for her... and she stands back and lets you... she says she can fix you?... not like i can... where will you go then?... when she cuts the chain... and leaves you wandering once again... wait... please don't move... let me hold you again, let me love you again... just take me, darling, and don't release me... hide me in love, the love you know we shared... you haven't found anything better... none of it's real... only i was... i want all of you and i'll never give up... i won't go away... i can't let you leave again... i'm sorry... I'M SORRY... you've belonged to me for far too long... you still do... you can't be that naive... to see that you're dying... soon i won't be able to bring you back... please let me save you... the way you saved me... dear god just break me with all that you do... my undying devotion will never stray... she makes you laugh?... i'll make you laugh, i'll make you cry, i'll drive you wild... but i'll when you set you free... you're not ready yet... she's still breathing... it isn't safe dear... some say i'm crazy... but my loving arms will always be there... all you need to do is come running... and when you're home... mold me, hold me... do what you will... just don't ever walk away again...just guide me and i'll obey... she has him to kill... what have you left me with?... oh those summer days you held my hand... i knew you loved me then... i look into your eyes and all i have is pride... i love your mind, i love your heart, i love your soul,i love your body, ilove your spirit, i love your lips, i love your hands, god, i love all of you... even at your worst i'll never give you my exodus... only my word... that i'll never stray again... i refuse to let you leave me here alone... just promise me you'll hold me forever... promise you'll never stop living in me... promise me our love will live forever... even in death... promise to let me mangle her... can you do that love? can you promise that when she'd lifeless... you'll be back to love again? E.A.R. IV & L.A.W. July 27th 2004... "i'll die... but real love is forever"... February 2nd 2005... you can't deny what really was... or is

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ok so let's try this again now that i've put my stuff on photobucket lol. here's a painting i did based on Imaginary

here's another one i did for something in my fashion design class for a "nature study"


here's two photoshop things i did of my ex-bf holding hands at my big birthday party thing last year.


Here's another thing i had to do for a fashion design class. We had to make up a letterhead design for our company's initials (Malice In Wonderland )



and here's just a doodle i did after watching Invader Zim and Angry Beavers


Hope you like . Comments please?

Okey-tay here's new stuff hope you like

STILL
These burns are breathing
They've figured out the angels on the ceiling
Their broken wings can fly me to you still
Now you say not a word
It will rise again... I know
And raise me to the night I saw us fall
And back to when i made you wild
And higher still to when you knew truth
Yes, I see... see that you can feel, the passion still
It surges through another
Descending you to why i saw us fall
Still naked and unknown
Is the story we have never told
I've figured out the writing on my wall
Unfinished thoughts painted by a girl with no name
And ashes spread across her chest at night
Ashes from the words washed from her hands
We say we've figured out the sands of the hourglass
They keep this final chapter locked away
I know i found religion
These ashes, yes, they remember you still
They guide the days we had, so long since dead
I'm passing by our corner
And the field you hushed away that night
Hold on, when another's been handed to sin
They say it will rise again... i know that it will

Comments please?

Hey. I was quite taken by your paintings, they are really unique looking. I enjoyed reading your writing as well. good stuff

Alana

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November Forests

So I've found another
One whose breath rises with mine
Hidden from beginnings eyes
After an era so snarled
There was the hope and hunger...
All had promised me
Amongst the oak and ancient elms
Let that month move w/ this embrace
Never once did shelter die so soon
Not a reason not a moment to spare
Our birth had only just begun
Where once arms relieved all misery
Now skin wakes bare... with nowhere to run
Where once his touch made my every cell melt
To a place never known by man
And every ache die a thousand deaths
Now I lay... in the very way i've always known
Only that month, now, fell without a trace
Into all that remains of nothing
Just to spite the power birthed in the days never seen
At the convenience of the promised.

Awesome paintings that you have here. Your new writings that you posted are great too. Keep up the awesome work.

This piece isn't quiet finished but i couldn't wait to post to comments please? i'll post the edited version later.


Safe, Frost bitten days of rain wash away the past
Stones cast by thy hand thus pave my path
Born of thine spirit's belly I yearn for the chord
Fate led towards nature's sanctuary, my repentance you've ignored
In me reside the powers of the underground
Amongst the birch and ancient oak religious eloquence i've found
Wisdom beyond 16 years thou hast failed to heed
The pace of the earth by which does live my breed

i wrote this piece yesterday when i couldn't sleep. i've been taking a slightly different approach to me writing lately i hope it works. enjoy! comments and constructive critique would be much appreciated.

DO THEY KNOW? (my steady arms)

However did you manage to mangle me so?
You said you loved me
Yeah, they've heard it before
Your love seems to run as deep as my tears
Neither could drown me the way i wanted
Don't you dare, pretend to care
your misshapen charms pulled me out of unknowing
Don't you dare walk away from me
Do they know how you held me?
Do they know all you told me?
I'll play it back for you
To shadow your pathetic excuses
And darling when the world is sick of your bullshit
And yours is sick too
My steady arms you'll never see
Born of your pride those silent days
Of disgusted utterance dug deep
THere you go again
So stubborn you'll face
Your self imposed hell hounds to keep out the ones you love
You've got the wrong girl
That nasty dream you cling to for dear life
Has birthed the very core of why
YOu get just what you don't deserve
Or do you now?... soon
Oh, but darling... rabid wolves couldn't cause me to waver...

i dont know but i really like those words. awesome work, i love your poems and songs

<333

- nadine

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