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FelicityS · 03-21-2006, 07:11 PM

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Originally Posted by DarkRockGoddess

November Forests

So I've found another
One whose breath rises with mine
Hidden from beginnings eyes
After an era so snarled
There was the hope and hunger...
All had promised me
Amongst the oak and ancient elms
Let that month move w/ this embrace
Never once did shelter die so soon
Not a reason not a moment to spare
Our birth had only just begun
Where once arms relieved all misery
Now skin wakes bare... with nowhere to run
Where once his touch made my every cell melt
To a place never known by man
And every ache die a thousand deaths
Now I lay... in the very way i've always known
Only that month, now, fell without a trace
Into all that remains of nothing
Just to spite the power birthed in the days never seen
At the convenience of the promised.

Hey DarkRockGoddess i liked this poem the best out of all! I liked the imagery and flow of it! I also liked your "imaginary" painting!

DarkRockGoddess · 03-23-2006, 02:52 PM

Thanks Guys I'll have more stuff soon... i have a few paintings that are ready to be scanned so as soon as my mom gives me the internet back i'll post.

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DarkRockGoddess Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: I live in Union, NJ (one of the most boring towns in the world!) o joy... Age: 19 Posts: 96 Points: 271.32 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 271.32 Donate	Thanks Guys I'll have more stuff soon... i have a few paintings that are ready to be scanned so as soon as my mom gives me the internet back i'll post.

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