Ømæn - Thank you! Yeah I've been looking back on a few and thought that too. I think that would fit pretty well, I don't wanna use it though cuz it'd be like copying! I'll dedicate the last line to you.

Frozen - Thanks! I'm glad you like it, I think I am getting a little better, I wanna get some of my drawings up though they're a bit lame. Thank you!!!!

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wow, very good poems, are very original, "Untitled" I like much, congratulations

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Y a pesar de todo Me pregunto qué no di, Y al vivir me oculto Mis defectos para poder dormir.

Thanks!! Guess I need to put some more stuff up. I'm just too lazy... But I'm off to Wales anyways tomorrow so I'll leave it til after. Cheers!

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Copyright © 2005 Leanne


Guardian Angels

The angel laid scarred weeping over a grave
Mourning the life she had failed to save
She prays for their soul but keeps inside
The secret she had been sworn to hide

For this life she had captured
Held safe and sound
Away from the chaos
The hell he'd been bound
Forever a slave to humanity
She took him away
The boy had been freed

In this life
Nothing comes for free
Why we hide
Things we don't want to see
Like why do we close our eyes at night
Never a thought to those in darjened light
Thank God for the angels
Those Guardian Angels

Taken in but unaware
Of what would happen now
The thing he feared more than anything
Turned to face him somehow

All alone, no one to save him
Crying for help, no one to release hinm
From the Devil's stare

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That - especially first verse - reminds me of a picture that I see quite a lot around here of a grave in Rome. I've seen it on my school trip there in fact. Really good.

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Guardian Angels.. I really liked the title of that, and I loved how you worded everything. It was awesome.

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Im_Broken - Thanks Rach!! That's the on I'm most proud of, it was really easy it write too. Cheers.

detail.freak - cool, I can imagine what you mean. Thanks!

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Copyright © Leanne 2005

These tears that fall are for you my love, tears of sorrow, regret, disappointment. Tears which can never be put back, shed forever they are immortal. Fallen so low the solution is drastic. Call me coward but I know what I want. Not to impose my misery upon others, not to watch the world around me be happy while I'm hurting so much inside. this life God made, is not worthy of His world.

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Wow... NICE! *claps* I have a lot of your work to ctach up on reading there of (I hope that made sense to someone, it didn't to me, lol). Keep up the great work Leanne. I love the way you write things. It's just so unique to what I'm used to reading and even writing myself. Rock on!

Raziel

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Cool, thanks Raz! Means a lot. I'll be putting up a drawing I did sometime on Friday. Cheers

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