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Old 08-17-2005, 08:29 AM   #21 (permalink)
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Ømæn - Thank you! Yeah I've been looking back on a few and thought that too. I think that would fit pretty well, I don't wanna use it though cuz it'd be like copying! I'll dedicate the last line to you.

Frozen - Thanks! I'm glad you like it, I think I am getting a little better, I wanna get some of my drawings up though they're a bit lame. Thank you!!!!
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Old 08-17-2005, 06:47 PM   #22 (permalink)
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wow, very good poems, are very original, "Untitled" I like much, congratulations
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Old 08-19-2005, 05:18 AM   #23 (permalink)
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wow, very good poems, are very original, "Untitled" I like much, congratulations
Thanks!! Guess I need to put some more stuff up. I'm just too lazy... But I'm off to Wales anyways tomorrow so I'll leave it til after. Cheers!
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Old 09-15-2005, 10:06 AM   #24 (permalink)
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The angel laid scarred weeping over a grave
Mourning the life she had failed to save
She prays for their soul but keeps inside
The secret she had been sworn to hide

For this life she had captured
Held safe and sound
Away from the chaos
The hell he'd been bound
Forever a slave to humanity
She took him away
The boy had been freed

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Nothing comes for free
Why we hide
Things we don't want to see
Like why do we close our eyes at night
Never a thought to those in darjened light
Thank God for the angels
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Old 09-15-2005, 11:53 AM   #25 (permalink)
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Guardian Angels

The angel laid scarred weeping over a grave
Mourning the life she had failed to save
She prays for their soul but keeps inside
The secret she had been sworn to hide

For this life she had captured
Held safe and sound
Away from the chaos
The hell he'd been bound
Forever a slave to humanity
She took him away
The boy had been freed

In this life
Nothing comes for free
Why we hide
Things we don't want to see
Like why do we close our eyes at night
Never a thought to those in darjened light
Thank God for the angels
Those Guardian Angels

Taken in but unaware
Of what would happen now
The thing he feared more than anything
Turned to face him somehow

All alone, no one to save him
Crying for help, no one to release hinm
From the Devil's stare
That - especially first verse - reminds me of a picture that I see quite a lot around here of a grave in Rome. I've seen it on my school trip there in fact. Really good.
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Old 09-16-2005, 07:31 AM   #26 (permalink)
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Guardian Angels.. I really liked the title of that, and I loved how you worded everything. It was awesome.
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Old 09-16-2005, 09:33 AM   #27 (permalink)
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Im_Broken - Thanks Rach!! That's the on I'm most proud of, it was really easy it write too. Cheers.

detail.freak - cool, I can imagine what you mean. Thanks!
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Wow... NICE! *claps* I have a lot of your work to ctach up on reading there of (I hope that made sense to someone, it didn't to me, lol). Keep up the great work Leanne. I love the way you write things. It's just so unique to what I'm used to reading and even writing myself. Rock on!

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Cool, thanks Raz! Means a lot. I'll be putting up a drawing I did sometime on Friday. Cheers
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