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Leanne · 10-01-2005, 05:03 AM

Okay I wrote this in a History class in bout 15 mins, have to change some things but I think som of it' okay.

Copyright © 2005 Leanne

Nightmare Dream

Verse 1
Jokes made in aim to feed off my low self esteem
Can't they see how much it hurts
To be treated so unlike a human being
It's not fair, I just wanna cry
It's not fair, I just wanna die

Chorus
My saviour, save me now
I'm waiting here don't let me down
My saviour, save me please
From this nightmare dream

Verse 2
They laugh and snigger, like pulling the trigger
On the gun of pain
The bullet shot deep inside of my heart
Nothing feels the same

Chorus
My saviour, save me now
I'm waiting here don't let me down
My saviour, save me please
Release me from this nightmare dream

Annnd I don't have anything after that....

Leanne · 10-01-2005, 05:27 AM

Copyright © 2005 Leanne

Untitled (and unfinished)

Asphyxia chokes
_____ blinds
Take my soul
Take my home
This body sacred
Is alone
Don't need to think
No need to breathe
The destruction of me
Will not cease

It's not like you could see
The pain carved deep inside of me
A cloak of lies I sold to you
Were bought so that you never new

Eager to go I feel all but alive
I used to pary that I'd survive
Dreams to sieze seem far away
Too far for me

Eli · 10-01-2005, 06:10 AM

hey Leanne! i love your stuff, esp. nightmare dream

Keep posting !

Leanne · 10-01-2005, 06:13 AM

Yay! Thanks Eli!! I'ma gonna post another in a in, thanks for the comment!!

Leanne · 10-01-2005, 06:17 AM

Copyright © 2005 Leanne

Dark Angel (another unfinished)

Deep underground lurking far away
A small young girl can be heard to say
"In this night, this sacred hour
Capture me, with your power
For I will serve, loyal and true
Excanged for guidance into heaven by you"

CH.
Why little girl, why did you act
The course of life should no be in doubt
You played with the Gods
You're on your way out

Chorus's a bit rubbish, but I got a lotta editing to do!
Cheers

p.s, wooo!! 400 posts!! yay

Willow. · 10-01-2005, 06:59 AM

Hey.
Those are amazing!
Did you really write Nightmare Dream in 15 mins? Wow.
Thats my favourite and i really like Dark angel too, they are alll amazing!

Poast some more!

-Willow.

Leanne · 10-01-2005, 07:53 AM

Thanks Willow! Yeah I wrote it in my history class near the end of the lesson. The people on my table, my friends, were whispering and writing notes and looking at me and I thought they were prob talking bout me. Thanks again!

Willow. · 10-02-2005, 09:56 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by little_goth

Thanks Willow! Yeah I wrote it in my history class near the end of the lesson. The people on my table, my friends, were whispering and writing notes and looking at me and I thought they were prob talking bout me. Thanks again!

Your welcome!

That happend alot last year and somebody put a really rude and offensive note in this girl's hair which was found by our head of year who made a surprise visit to us...it still goes on but people don't leave proof of it anymore...it did get kind of scary actually as people started to do silent phone calls on each other.
Anyway...i think you should ignore them, if they are being nasty then forget them. Its their loss if they can't see what a nice person you are!
However,it did help you to write an amazing song!

Keep writing!
-Willow.

SoundOfSilence · 10-02-2005, 01:11 PM

hey

i love your stuff, especially this verse:

Quote:

Originally Posted by little_goth

CH.
Why little girl, why did you act
The course of life should no be in doubt
You played with the Gods
You're on your way out[/color]

i really enjoyed reading your stuff, so keep it up and post more soon
nadine

Leanne · 10-03-2005, 10:06 AM

Hey thanks for the positive feedback guys! It means a lot, I'll try and get my drawings up finally some time this week. Thanks again!!

10-01-2005, 05:03 AM	#31 (permalink)
Leanne Gay Monkey Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: England Age: 17 Posts: 2,064 Points: 4,573.96 Bank: 154,014.67 Total Points: 158,588.63 Donate	Okay I wrote this in a History class in bout 15 mins, have to change some things but I think som of it' okay. Copyright © 2005 Leanne Nightmare Dream Verse 1 Jokes made in aim to feed off my low self esteem Can't they see how much it hurts To be treated so unlike a human being It's not fair, I just wanna cry It's not fair, I just wanna die Chorus My saviour, save me now I'm waiting here don't let me down My saviour, save me please From this nightmare dream Verse 2 They laugh and snigger, like pulling the trigger On the gun of pain The bullet shot deep inside of my heart Nothing feels the same Chorus My saviour, save me now I'm waiting here don't let me down My saviour, save me please Release me from this nightmare dream Annnd I don't have anything after that.... __________________

10-01-2005, 05:27 AM	#32 (permalink)
Leanne Gay Monkey Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: England Age: 17 Posts: 2,064 Points: 4,573.96 Bank: 154,014.67 Total Points: 158,588.63 Donate	Copyright © 2005 Leanne Untitled (and unfinished) Asphyxia chokes _____ blinds Take my soul Take my home This body sacred Is alone Don't need to think No need to breathe The destruction of me Will not cease It's not like you could see The pain carved deep inside of me A cloak of lies I sold to you Were bought so that you never new Eager to go I feel all but alive I used to pary that I'd survive Dreams to sieze seem far away Too far for me __________________

10-01-2005, 06:13 AM	#34 (permalink)
Leanne Gay Monkey Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: England Age: 17 Posts: 2,064 Points: 4,573.96 Bank: 154,014.67 Total Points: 158,588.63 Donate	Yay! Thanks Eli!! I'ma gonna post another in a in, thanks for the comment!! __________________

10-01-2005, 06:17 AM	#35 (permalink)
Leanne Gay Monkey Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: England Age: 17 Posts: 2,064 Points: 4,573.96 Bank: 154,014.67 Total Points: 158,588.63 Donate	Copyright © 2005 Leanne Dark Angel (another unfinished) Deep underground lurking far away A small young girl can be heard to say "In this night, this sacred hour Capture me, with your power For I will serve, loyal and true Excanged for guidance into heaven by you" CH. Why little girl, why did you act The course of life should no be in doubt You played with the Gods You're on your way out Chorus's a bit rubbish, but I got a lotta editing to do! Cheers p.s, wooo!! 400 posts!! yay __________________

10-01-2005, 07:53 AM	#37 (permalink)
Leanne Gay Monkey Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: England Age: 17 Posts: 2,064 Points: 4,573.96 Bank: 154,014.67 Total Points: 158,588.63 Donate	Thanks Willow! Yeah I wrote it in my history class near the end of the lesson. The people on my table, my friends, were whispering and writing notes and looking at me and I thought they were prob talking bout me. Thanks again! __________________

10-01-2005, 06:10 AM	#33 (permalink)
Eli Fledgling Post Monkey Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Barcelona, Spain Age: 16 Posts: 1,195 Points: 1,388.68 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 1,388.68 Donate	hey Leanne! i love your stuff, esp. nightmare dream Keep posting !

10-01-2005, 06:59 AM	#36 (permalink)
Willow. Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: London,UK Age: 16 Posts: 226 Points: 2,310.59 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 2,310.59 Donate	Hey. Those are amazing! Did you really write Nightmare Dream in 15 mins? Wow. Thats my favourite and i really like Dark angel too, they are alll amazing! Poast some more! -Willow.

10-03-2005, 10:06 AM	#40 (permalink)
Leanne Gay Monkey Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: England Age: 17 Posts: 2,064 Points: 4,573.96 Bank: 154,014.67 Total Points: 158,588.63 Donate	Hey thanks for the positive feedback guys! It means a lot, I'll try and get my drawings up finally some time this week. Thanks again!! __________________

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