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Leanne · 08-06-2006, 07:08 AM

Ok, I decided to organise my stuff a lot more, and actually update things regularly. That means actually producing work too.

I just want to collect all my work that'd I've done, in one thread, so it's ewasier for me to find it too.

So I'll hope people will visit and all that stuff, lol. I'll post anything new in the first post, or with a link to it.

Thanks for looking.

Myself - 04/08/06

You Are My Light - 05/05/06

Gone - 06/04/06

Leanne · 08-06-2006, 07:13 AM

I wrote this the night before last (04/08/06)
It's the first I've written in a long while, and really this is just a big jumble, with little significant things in it in places. I could have gone on all night with this, but that would have just been stupid.

Myself

Stinging tears,
Streaming from black-rimmed eyes,
A black smudged pattern imprinted on skin,
The full-length mirror shimmers,
Wouldn’t let me in,
The fantasy land within,
Beckons,
Inviting,
Persuading,
Taking me in side the wonderland,
Looking back on the harsh cruel world,
Full of selfish,
Hateful creatures,
I once belonged,
Now torn and tattered,
Awaiting the well-deserved happiness,
Long overdue,
My mind worn and tired from endless
Imaginary
Battles,
No way out of the wilderness,
But the secret door found,
The sun here so bright,
Behind the mirror,
Blinded,
Cured,
Alive and well – happy,
not right,
But oh so good,
Glorious in the sunlight,
Shining on my face,
Embrace,
The evening breeze,
Free,
Calm,
Myself.

© Leanne Raine 2006

Leanne · 08-06-2006, 07:18 AM

Written on 05/05/06 quite late at night about someone, I wasn't feeling to happy at that time.

You Are My Light

Your picture as my light
I lay here, ungurded
Fighting back tears to stay strong
Trying to calm my breathing

Hand shaking remind me of you
Nervous
Like the other day with you
With you

Not able to look at your image
For fear this glass glaze will break
And everything will be lost
And I will lose control

I don't believe what I hear
It can't be true

© Leanne Raine 2006

Leanne · 08-06-2006, 07:22 AM

Written around 06/04/06, though I can't quite remember what had happened then, though I think I was feeling more positive.

Gone

My dear friend, oh where have you gone
That part of me
My dear friend, now that you've gone
You set me free
Once covered by a clock of fear
Held up whenever she was near
Now unmasked, uncovered
Two meant for each other
Nothing can stop them now
Nothing can stop them now

© Leanne Raine 2006

~river~ · 08-06-2006, 07:27 AM

your writting is really good, i have to say gone is my favourite there is just something about it.

Leanne · 08-06-2006, 10:16 AM

Thank you!
Tbh, that's one of my least favourites. But I'm glad you like it

OdeToTheMuse · 08-06-2006, 10:40 AM

I really love the first one!! keep up the great work!! <3

lol, welcome to the club of the "new thread makers"

-claudine

dodididodo · 08-06-2006, 10:47 AM

Myself is my favourite at the moment. I love the sort of mystery it carries. I'd like to read more.

Leanne · 08-06-2006, 02:11 PM

Claudine - Thank you, that's my favourite out of what I've done. =] I decided it was time to become more organised. Thanks again.

Dodididodo - Thank you, I'm going to be uploading the rest when I have time, and hopefulyy write some more. Cheers

Leanne · 08-17-2006, 03:37 PM

Should I stay here
Wait
Long
Want only what i can't have
Hope
Pray
Wish I'd have her back

Or should I move on
Be free
Happy
Comfortable with everything

Alone

It's not right
I can't live, breath, think properly
I'd do anything for another chance

But you can't change someone's feelings
Not truely
I should know that

You're stuck
With how things are now
Like it or lump it

But I hate it
Tough

Get over yourself
It's over
Move on
You'll be happier
Or will you
You've done it before
Now do it again

Just don't go and do the same
With someone else
Maybe you'll break for good then
If you can be fixed now
Can I?
Piece yourself back together
See if everythign fits
And we'll go on from there

© Leanne Raine 2006

08-06-2006, 07:08 AM	#1 (permalink)
Leanne Gay Monkey Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: England Age: 17 Posts: 2,064 Points: 5,573.96 Bank: 160,236.86 Total Points: 165,810.82 Donate	Leanne's Writings Ok, I decided to organise my stuff a lot more, and actually update things regularly. That means actually producing work too. I just want to collect all my work that'd I've done, in one thread, so it's ewasier for me to find it too. So I'll hope people will visit and all that stuff, lol. I'll post anything new in the first post, or with a link to it. Thanks for looking. Myself - 04/08/06 You Are My Light - 05/05/06 Gone - 06/04/06 __________________ Last edited by Leanne : 08-06-2006 at 07:24 AM.

08-06-2006, 07:13 AM	#2 (permalink)
Leanne Gay Monkey Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: England Age: 17 Posts: 2,064 Points: 5,573.96 Bank: 160,236.86 Total Points: 165,810.82 Donate	I wrote this the night before last (04/08/06) It's the first I've written in a long while, and really this is just a big jumble, with little significant things in it in places. I could have gone on all night with this, but that would have just been stupid. Myself Stinging tears, Streaming from black-rimmed eyes, A black smudged pattern imprinted on skin, The full-length mirror shimmers, Wouldn’t let me in, The fantasy land within, Beckons, Inviting, Persuading, Taking me in side the wonderland, Looking back on the harsh cruel world, Full of selfish, Hateful creatures, I once belonged, Now torn and tattered, Awaiting the well-deserved happiness, Long overdue, My mind worn and tired from endless Imaginary Battles, No way out of the wilderness, But the secret door found, The sun here so bright, Behind the mirror, Blinded, Cured, Alive and well – happy, not right, But oh so good, Glorious in the sunlight, Shining on my face, Embrace, The evening breeze, Free, Calm, Myself. © Leanne Raine 2006 __________________ Last edited by Leanne : 08-06-2006 at 07:20 AM.

08-06-2006, 07:18 AM	#3 (permalink)
Leanne Gay Monkey Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: England Age: 17 Posts: 2,064 Points: 5,573.96 Bank: 160,236.86 Total Points: 165,810.82 Donate	Written on 05/05/06 quite late at night about someone, I wasn't feeling to happy at that time. You Are My Light Your picture as my light I lay here, ungurded Fighting back tears to stay strong Trying to calm my breathing Hand shaking remind me of you Nervous Like the other day with you With you Not able to look at your image For fear this glass glaze will break And everything will be lost And I will lose control I don't believe what I hear It can't be true © Leanne Raine 2006 __________________

08-06-2006, 07:22 AM	#4 (permalink)
Leanne Gay Monkey Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: England Age: 17 Posts: 2,064 Points: 5,573.96 Bank: 160,236.86 Total Points: 165,810.82 Donate	Written around 06/04/06, though I can't quite remember what had happened then, though I think I was feeling more positive. Gone My dear friend, oh where have you gone That part of me My dear friend, now that you've gone You set me free Once covered by a clock of fear Held up whenever she was near Now unmasked, uncovered Two meant for each other Nothing can stop them now Nothing can stop them now © Leanne Raine 2006 __________________

08-06-2006, 07:27 AM	#5 (permalink)
~river~ Lips Like Morphine Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: at the heart of your darkest nightmares and deepest desires Age: 20 Posts: 2,014 Points: 866.62 Bank: 209,972.92 Total Points: 210,839.53 Donate	your writting is really good, i have to say gone is my favourite there is just something about it. __________________ Breathe for love tomorrow Cause there's no hope for today Breathe for love tomorrow Cause maybe there's another way Today's the day when the dreaming ends...

08-06-2006, 10:16 AM	#6 (permalink)
Leanne Gay Monkey Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: England Age: 17 Posts: 2,064 Points: 5,573.96 Bank: 160,236.86 Total Points: 165,810.82 Donate	Thank you! Tbh, that's one of my least favourites. But I'm glad you like it __________________

08-06-2006, 10:40 AM	#7 (permalink)
OdeToTheMuse Senior Member Join Date: May 2004 Location: I am floatin' in serenity... Age: 18 Posts: 713 Points: 123.16 Bank: 1,210.48 Total Points: 1,333.63 Donate	I really love the first one!! keep up the great work!! <3 lol, welcome to the club of the "new thread makers" -claudine __________________ DeviantArt. FlickR. ArtThread.

08-06-2006, 10:47 AM	#8 (permalink)
dodididodo Fledgling Post Monkey Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Hertfordshire, UK Age: 18 Posts: 1,838 Points: 2,408.73 Bank: 557.92 Total Points: 2,966.65 Donate	Myself is my favourite at the moment. I love the sort of mystery it carries. I'd like to read more. __________________ Metal Marketing - Metal to the Masses!

08-06-2006, 02:11 PM	#9 (permalink)
Leanne Gay Monkey Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: England Age: 17 Posts: 2,064 Points: 5,573.96 Bank: 160,236.86 Total Points: 165,810.82 Donate	Claudine - Thank you, that's my favourite out of what I've done. =] I decided it was time to become more organised. Thanks again. Dodididodo - Thank you, I'm going to be uploading the rest when I have time, and hopefulyy write some more. Cheers __________________

08-17-2006, 03:37 PM	#10 (permalink)
Leanne Gay Monkey Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: England Age: 17 Posts: 2,064 Points: 5,573.96 Bank: 160,236.86 Total Points: 165,810.82 Donate	Should I stay here Wait Long Want only what i can't have Hope Pray Wish I'd have her back Or should I move on Be free Happy Comfortable with everything Alone It's not right I can't live, breath, think properly I'd do anything for another chance But you can't change someone's feelings Not truely I should know that You're stuck With how things are now Like it or lump it But I hate it Tough Get over yourself It's over Move on You'll be happier Or will you You've done it before Now do it again Just don't go and do the same With someone else Maybe you'll break for good then If you can be fixed now Can I? Piece yourself back together See if everythign fits And we'll go on from there © Leanne Raine 2006 __________________

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