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**littleleena** · 06-04-2004, 08:30 AM

Well this is called " Only a Whisper"

Only A Whisper

Death reared it's ugly head
And it took you away from me
I never saw your eyes close for the last time
I never saw your last breath escape

I know I'll never See you agian
I know I'll never see your smile
I know we'll never laugh together
And I know a photo will not suffice
And deep inside I know
You're Only A Whisper away

Everytime I close my eyes,
Your face appears and teardorps sting,
Escaping my eyes
Streaming down my already tearstained face

I know I'll never See you agian
I know I'll never see your smile
I know We'll never laugh together
And I know a photo will not suffice
And deep inside I know
You're only a whisper away

All I do is think of you
In all that pain,
And you just being So Damn brave,
And then I just can't stop crying

I know I'll never see you agian
I know I'll never see your smile
I know We'll never laugh together
And I know a photo will not suffice
And deep inside I know
You're only a whisper away

Only A whisper away
All my hope inside I know
We'll meet again someday
But for now I Know
You're Only Whisper Away
Only a Whisper Away

Tell Me What U Think?? Plz All comments welcome

uv_fallen_angel · 06-04-2004, 08:33 AM

I like it... it sounds like it could be a really moving song, with the right music... you should try and compose a tune and record it as a song, then post it on here - that would be cool

Sarineh x

Dave is Me · 06-04-2004, 09:13 AM

This is some really good stuff, When i get more onto the guitar I would love to co-write with somebody off the board, you coukld be a contender.

evanescence9289 · 06-04-2004, 09:32 AM

i really like that song, as i can really relate to it, especially this line:

Quote:

I never saw your eyes close for the last time

good work.

**Brendan** · 06-04-2004, 10:55 AM

hey jussie this is good ^_^ its sad and beautiful all together great *gives you hug*

Loneca · 06-05-2004, 03:12 PM

oh wow! that was so cool!!!!!!!!!!! I really enjoyed it, it's much like Evanescence style (as i see it) really nice... just wanted to say something, you may not agree but... shouldn't it be called 'A breath away' instead of 'Only a Breath'? I just mean... it would be more (lets say...) "about" the song like that... well, just an opinion but as i said before... that's really cool
keep the good work

**littleleena** · 06-06-2004, 06:54 AM

Wow thanks , All of you

Loneca The song is actually Called "Only a Whisper", I thought Of Calling It "A Whisper Away" But then I changed it coz i thought it sounded To much like an Ev Song Which Would be a bad Thing Huh? Well Thanks

Will Post more Soon Jussie!!

**littleleena** · 06-23-2004, 08:03 AM

This one is called What We Can't Have!!!

What We Can't Have

Time can do nothing to numb my pain
And I wish it could, take it away
And set me free.
I'll never forget your face
Your eyes your touch .
I need you
I know I can't have you
We always want what we can't have

We can never be together
Not now Not ever
And it can't be true that
Now that I've found you
I can't have you

Without you I can't breathe
I can't sleep
I long for your arms around me
Your Hands in mine
Guilt eats away at my heart
Deep inside I know it can't be

We can never be together
Not now Not ever
And it can't be true that
Now that I've found you
I can't have you

You're my friend my saviour
My one true companion
With you in my world
I have everything

But we can never be together
Not now Not ever
And it can't be true (Baby)
Now that I've found you
I can't have you

Not Now Not Ever
We can never be together
Not Now Not Ever

Coz we always want what we can't have

**littleleena** · 07-25-2004, 06:54 AM

This is Only half done Comments for it so far would be good:

Fallen Tears do not erase the pain
It hides away deep inside of me
Waiting to break free, waiting to scream
Lost inside my nightmare
Trapped inside myself
Calling your name to Come and save me

Emotions run freely
Why I don't let them go when i'm awake I do not know?

Trapped behind the wall I made for myself
These memories will never fade
I smile brightly on the outside
And inside i'm screaming to myself
Longing to die, free of pain

Frightining Images
Painful memories trapped inside me
Darkness waiting for the light
Fighting to be free, Defining memories
This is my life can it really be?

Please honest comments only Thanks ^Jus^

Carly · 07-25-2004, 07:24 AM

wow that was really good!!! i would like to see more of your writing!!! thanks for posting :P:P:P

06-04-2004, 08:30 AM	#1 (permalink)
littleleena is gonna rockout @ EV Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Aussie Land Age: 23 Posts: 680 Points: 21,961.69 Bank: 195,962.48 Total Points: 217,924.17 Donate	littleleena's stuff Well this is called " Only a Whisper" Only A Whisper Death reared it's ugly head And it took you away from me I never saw your eyes close for the last time I never saw your last breath escape I know I'll never See you agian I know I'll never see your smile I know we'll never laugh together And I know a photo will not suffice And deep inside I know You're Only A Whisper away Everytime I close my eyes, Your face appears and teardorps sting, Escaping my eyes Streaming down my already tearstained face I know I'll never See you agian I know I'll never see your smile I know We'll never laugh together And I know a photo will not suffice And deep inside I know You're only a whisper away All I do is think of you In all that pain, And you just being So Damn brave, And then I just can't stop crying I know I'll never see you agian I know I'll never see your smile I know We'll never laugh together And I know a photo will not suffice And deep inside I know You're only a whisper away Only A whisper away All my hope inside I know We'll meet again someday But for now I Know You're Only Whisper Away Only a Whisper Away Tell Me What U Think?? Plz All comments welcome Last edited by littleleena : 10-07-2005 at 02:15 AM. Reason: Changed Thread name

06-04-2004, 10:55 AM	#5 (permalink)
Brendan ~Cold In The Ground~ Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Australia Age: 23 Posts: 918 Points: 13,615.65 Bank: 328.83 Total Points: 13,944.48 Donate	hey jussie this is good ^_^ its sad and beautiful all together great gives you hug __________________

06-05-2004, 03:12 PM	#6 (permalink)
Loneca Thank God! Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Colombia Age: 20 Posts: 710 Points: 2,198.98 Bank: 2,650.71 Total Points: 4,849.69 Donate	oh wow! that was so cool!!!!!!!!!!! I really enjoyed it, it's much like Evanescence style (as i see it) really nice... just wanted to say something, you may not agree but... shouldn't it be called 'A breath away' instead of 'Only a Breath'? I just mean... it would be more (lets say...) "about" the song like that... well, just an opinion but as i said before... that's really cool keep the good work __________________

06-23-2004, 08:03 AM	#8 (permalink)
littleleena is gonna rockout @ EV Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Aussie Land Age: 23 Posts: 680 Points: 21,961.69 Bank: 195,962.48 Total Points: 217,924.17 Donate	Another Song This one is called What We Can't Have!!! What We Can't Have Time can do nothing to numb my pain And I wish it could, take it away And set me free. I'll never forget your face Your eyes your touch . I need you I know I can't have you We always want what we can't have We can never be together Not now Not ever And it can't be true that Now that I've found you I can't have you Without you I can't breathe I can't sleep I long for your arms around me Your Hands in mine Guilt eats away at my heart Deep inside I know it can't be We can never be together Not now Not ever And it can't be true that Now that I've found you I can't have you You're my friend my saviour My one true companion With you in my world I have everything But we can never be together Not now Not ever And it can't be true (Baby) Now that I've found you I can't have you Not Now Not Ever We can never be together Not Now Not Ever Coz we always want what we can't have Last edited by littleleena : 10-07-2005 at 02:19 AM.

07-25-2004, 06:54 AM	#9 (permalink)
littleleena is gonna rockout @ EV Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Aussie Land Age: 23 Posts: 680 Points: 21,961.69 Bank: 195,962.48 Total Points: 217,924.17 Donate	New Song This is Only half done Comments for it so far would be good: Fallen Tears do not erase the pain It hides away deep inside of me Waiting to break free, waiting to scream Lost inside my nightmare Trapped inside myself Calling your name to Come and save me Emotions run freely Why I don't let them go when i'm awake I do not know? Trapped behind the wall I made for myself These memories will never fade I smile brightly on the outside And inside i'm screaming to myself Longing to die, free of pain Frightining Images Painful memories trapped inside me Darkness waiting for the light Fighting to be free, Defining memories This is my life can it really be? Please honest comments only Thanks ^Jus^ Last edited by littleleena : 10-07-2005 at 02:21 AM.

06-04-2004, 08:33 AM	#2 (permalink)
uv_fallen_angel Member of the Banned PERMA BANNED Join Date: May 2004 Location: London, England Age: 24 Posts: 406 Points: 1,111.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 1,111.00 Donate	I like it... it sounds like it could be a really moving song, with the right music... you should try and compose a tune and record it as a song, then post it on here - that would be cool Sarineh x

06-04-2004, 09:13 AM	#3 (permalink)
Dave is Me Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Kettering, England Age: 23 Posts: 65 Points: 223.33 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 223.33 Donate	This is some really good stuff, When i get more onto the guitar I would love to co-write with somebody off the board, you coukld be a contender.

06-06-2004, 06:54 AM	#7 (permalink)
littleleena is gonna rockout @ EV Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Aussie Land Age: 23 Posts: 680 Points: 21,961.69 Bank: 195,962.48 Total Points: 217,924.17 Donate	Wow thanks , All of you Loneca The song is actually Called "Only a Whisper", I thought Of Calling It "A Whisper Away" But then I changed it coz i thought it sounded To much like an Ev Song Which Would be a bad Thing Huh? Well Thanks Will Post more Soon Jussie!!

07-25-2004, 07:24 AM	#10 (permalink)
Carly Save Me!! Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: AUSSIE~! Posts: 111 Points: 250.00 Bank: 138.76 Total Points: 388.76 Donate	wow that was really good!!! i would like to see more of your writing!!! thanks for posting :P:P:P

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