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Loneca · 12-12-2004, 03:09 PM

nobody is posting... *cries out loud*

Darko · 12-12-2004, 03:45 PM

If I saw your art work in a shop I'd buy it. Especially the angel ones on the last page. Those are so amazing.

Your songs and poems are great too.

Loneca · 12-13-2004, 02:09 PM

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If I saw your art work in a shop I'd buy it. Especially the angel ones on the last page. Those are so amazing.

Your songs and poems are great too.

thank you so much!!! that mada my day!!!
ok I drew this long ago and I didn't even remeber, but now that I did, I decided to post it here...

hope u like it!

axeslinger0u812 · 12-13-2004, 05:22 PM

wow...you are amazingly talented. I love the way you shade, and the eyes are beautiful.

Sephiroth (pt) · 12-13-2004, 05:32 PM

Hey, Loneca...it is always a rewarding experience to see your draws...I like very much the last fairy you posted...I love manga...and I love your draws!!!
Keep posting more.... (oh, by the way, i´ve posted more draws since the last time you posted in my thread...)

sweetwater · 12-13-2004, 08:33 PM

great drawing loneca...it's never easy to draw someone's face, and you've captured amy really well.

Loneca · 12-14-2004, 12:56 AM

thank you all so much for teh comment's!!! I'm so glad you liked my drawing!

well, I've started using Fireworks and I'm still learning. I tried to make some avatars
[they are available for your free use, just pm me]

anyways please tell me what you think about them!

~

orgo · 12-14-2004, 09:11 AM

Hey Loneca,

I really like the fairy drawing. I think you should have more contrast in the fairy body however. See how the wings are so bold and stand out so well? It's becuase they have nice dark passages. The body and esp. the face need similar treatment.

Btw, I recommend Adobe ImageReady for the avatar type work as opposed to Fireworks. The main reason to use ImageReady is the quick accessibilty to Phootoplop among other things...

Anyhow, nice job and please keep posting!

Loneca · 12-14-2004, 03:53 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by orgo

Hey Loneca,

I really like the fairy drawing. I think you should have more contrast in the fairy body however. See how the wings are so bold and stand out so well? It's becuase they have nice dark passages. The body and esp. the face need similar treatment.

Thank you, i also thought of that but I wanted the skin to a bit look different... like if shaded it, it may look too much like her clothes... ....but thank you so much for the advice!

Quote:

Originally Posted by orgo

Btw, I recommend Adobe ImageReady for the avatar type work as opposed to Fireworks. The main reason to use ImageReady is the quick accessibilty to Phootoplop among other things...

Anyhow, nice job and please keep posting!

lol, I don't have that program [Adobe ImageReady], I just installed Fireworks and was trying it... and now you make me wish I had it...
thank you for your comment Orgo, it's always nice to have you posting here

...............................

alright. right yesterday i wrote a song and I really put my heart into it. I thought that if it ever gets to be done with misic and everything, it would be a nice duet!

Shame

You are there
in a corner of the room
thoughtful and awake,
conscienly awake
and I know it,
i know it,
I know it 'cause I'm here too
sitting in this dark room
where we carelessly fell
I am here alone with you

And it's too shameful
for us to rise our eyes
let's not talk
let's not talk
let's keep this in the dark

I can see you there
alone with me
in this room where
we hide from shame
no windows to scape
no door to run away
we must face now
what's real
and there's only one reallity
you and I
you and I
hidding from shame
and I know it,
I know it
'cause I still see you through my tears

And it's too shameful
for us to rise our eyes
let's not talk
let's not talk
let's keep this in the dark

where it belongs
where it belongs
I have no words
and I will never have them
this is more than I can take
take me away
forever,
forever,
forever,
take me away

Lunar Sky · 12-14-2004, 08:40 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Loneca

Shame

You are there
in a corner of the room
thoughtful and awake,
conscienly awake
and I know it,
i know it,
I know it 'cause I'm here too
sitting in this dark room
where we carelessly fell
I am here alone with you

And it's too shameful
for us to rise our eyes
let's not talk
let's not talk
let's keep this in the dark

I can see you there
alone with me
in this room where
we hide from shame
no windows to scape
no door to run away
we must face now
what's real
and there's only one reallity
you and I
you and I
hidding from shame
and I know it,
I know it
'cause I still see you through my tears

And it's too shameful
for us to rise our eyes
let's not talk
let's not talk
let's keep this in the dark

where it belongs
where it belongs
I have no words
and I will never have them
this is more than I can take
take me away
forever,
forever,
forever,
take me away

That is an amazing piece! I love the repetition of some lines, it really makes the piece great! I also love the concept of it. It's kind of like mutual shame. Amazing job.

12-12-2004, 03:09 PM	#91 (permalink)
Loneca Thank God! Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Colombia Age: 20 Posts: 710 Points: 2,448.98 Bank: 2,703.72 Total Points: 5,152.70 Donate	nobody is posting... cries out loud __________________

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Darko Poetry Queen Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: England Age: 18 Posts: 1,124 Points: 8,234.83 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 8,234.83 Donate	If I saw your art work in a shop I'd buy it. Especially the angel ones on the last page. Those are so amazing. Your songs and poems are great too. __________________ .stretch it like it's a birth squeeze.

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Loneca Thank God! Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Colombia Age: 20 Posts: 710 Points: 2,448.98 Bank: 2,703.72 Total Points: 5,152.70 Donate	thank you all so much for teh comment's!!! I'm so glad you liked my drawing! well, I've started using Fireworks and I'm still learning. I tried to make some avatars [they are available for your free use, just pm me] anyways please tell me what you think about them! ~ ~ __________________ Last edited by Loneca : 12-14-2004 at 01:00 AM.

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12-13-2004, 05:22 PM	#94 (permalink)
axeslinger0u812 Fledgling Post Monkey Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Neither here, nor there Age: 24 Posts: 1,695 Points: 814.28 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 814.28 Donate	wow...you are amazingly talented. I love the way you shade, and the eyes are beautiful.

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Sephiroth (pt) n00blet Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Sintra (near Lisbon, Portugal) Age: 22 Posts: 10 Points: 113.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 113.00 Donate	Hey, Loneca...it is always a rewarding experience to see your draws...I like very much the last fairy you posted...I love manga...and I love your draws!!! Keep posting more.... (oh, by the way, i´ve posted more draws since the last time you posted in my thread...)

12-13-2004, 08:33 PM	#96 (permalink)
sweetwater Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 862 Points: 142.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 142.00 Donate	great drawing loneca...it's never easy to draw someone's face, and you've captured amy really well.

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orgo Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2003 Posts: 692 Points: 3,353.78 Bank: 27,971.01 Total Points: 31,324.79 Donate	Hey Loneca, I really like the fairy drawing. I think you should have more contrast in the fairy body however. See how the wings are so bold and stand out so well? It's becuase they have nice dark passages. The body and esp. the face need similar treatment. Btw, I recommend Adobe ImageReady for the avatar type work as opposed to Fireworks. The main reason to use ImageReady is the quick accessibilty to Phootoplop among other things... Anyhow, nice job and please keep posting!

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