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sweetwater · 12-15-2004, 04:29 AM

likewiae loneca...beautiful song lunar sky.

I_Must_Be_Dreaming · 12-15-2004, 07:25 AM

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Originally Posted by Loneca

Thank you, i also thought of that but I wanted the skin to a bit look different... like if shaded it, it may look too much like her clothes... ....but thank you so much for the advice!

lol, I don't have that program [Adobe ImageReady], I just installed Fireworks and was trying it... and now you make me wish I had it...
thank you for your comment Orgo, it's always nice to have you posting here

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alright. right yesterday i wrote a song and I really put my heart into it. I thought that if it ever gets to be done with misic and everything, it would be a nice duet!

Shame

You are there
in a corner of the room
thoughtful and awake,
conscienly awake
and I know it,
i know it,
I know it 'cause I'm here too
sitting in this dark room
where we carelessly fell
I am here alone with you

And it's too shameful
for us to rise our eyes
let's not talk
let's not talk
let's keep this in the dark

I can see you there
alone with me
in this room where
we hide from shame
no windows to scape
no door to run away
we must face now
what's real
and there's only one reallity
you and I
you and I
hidding from shame
and I know it,
I know it
'cause I still see you through my tears

And it's too shameful
for us to rise our eyes
let's not talk
let's not talk
let's keep this in the dark

where it belongs
where it belongs
I have no words
and I will never have them
this is more than I can take
take me away
forever,
forever,
forever,
take me away

wow! Thats really awesome. You really have some incredible writing talent! good job

Loneca · 12-26-2004, 12:14 AM

thank you so much Lunar Sky, sweetwater and I_Must_Be_Dreaming!

this is something I wrote and it ma be a bit senseless :s, but here it goes anyways

Rotten

I claim for sanity
something I will never have
somehow I know it
I can see, I'm not blind
don't lie to me
bind me not to your eyes
smile and break me into pieces
break me into pieces

I can still try
but it'll be useless
as it's always been
'cause so it's been
but before I die
I know I can still try

fall unto you
numb and thoughtless
I'm sick of myself
sick of you as well
I'm sick of my rotten blood
and my putrid skin
after so many tears
I'm lost in nowhere

sweetwater · 12-26-2004, 02:55 AM

omg loneca...that is so good...`after so many tears, i'm lost in nowhere'...talk about an ending...

Loneca · 12-27-2004, 02:03 PM

thank you so much sweetwater!

ok, this comes from deep within me

Caught into Sorrow

she closes her eyes
wishing for someone
to wake her up
but she's not sleeping
this is not a dream
it's what we carelessly
call reality
it's hard to believe it
but there's no way out
from this nightmare
which is real somehow

caught into sorrow
no place to hide
no shoulder to cry
no reasons to smile

nothingness, inside of her
left to realise that
nothing lasts forever
but the pain she feels inside
she gets home, alone
wishig her grief away
but no one's there
no one's waiting for her
and it's hard to believe it
but there's no way out
from this nightmare
which is real somehow

caught into sorrow
no place to hide
no shoulder to cry
no reasons to smile

and it's hard to believe it
it's hard to realise
that this endless nightmare
is real somehow

Codger · 12-27-2004, 02:07 PM

I would love to hear this to music.

Quote:

caught into sorrow
no place to hide
no shoulder to cry
no reasons to smile

The chorus is amazing, well done

sweetwater · 12-28-2004, 02:11 AM

yeah, i love the chorus too...

**Oceantron** · 12-28-2004, 04:55 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Loneca

thank you so much!!! that mada my day!!!
ok I drew this long ago and I didn't even remeber, but now that I did, I decided to post it here...

hope u like it!

omg this drawing is gorgeous! i love the confident look on the face. great job Loneca!

Kittencat · 12-28-2004, 07:27 PM

Loneca Loneca Loneca......

YOU ROCK!!!!!!!!

haha Anyway, I wish I had your talent. I dont think anything except for Lunars could match that (had to say that so she wont kill me) lol. Well anyway, continue on with your writing, you could do so well, I can feel it

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Lunar Sky · 12-29-2004, 03:24 PM

Wow...I'm sorry this is so short, but I cannot think of ANY good words for it!! My compliments don't seem to do the song justice....

12-26-2004, 12:14 AM	#103 (permalink)
Loneca Thank God! Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Colombia Age: 20 Posts: 710 Points: 2,448.98 Bank: 2,703.72 Total Points: 5,152.70 Donate	thank you so much Lunar Sky, sweetwater and I_Must_Be_Dreaming! this is something I wrote and it ma be a bit senseless :s, but here it goes anyways Rotten I claim for sanity something I will never have somehow I know it I can see, I'm not blind don't lie to me bind me not to your eyes smile and break me into pieces break me into pieces I can still try but it'll be useless as it's always been 'cause so it's been but before I die I know I can still try fall unto you numb and thoughtless I'm sick of myself sick of you as well I'm sick of my rotten blood and my putrid skin after so many tears I'm lost in nowhere __________________ Last edited by Loneca : 12-26-2004 at 12:17 AM.

12-27-2004, 02:03 PM	#105 (permalink)
Loneca Thank God! Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Colombia Age: 20 Posts: 710 Points: 2,448.98 Bank: 2,703.72 Total Points: 5,152.70 Donate	thank you so much sweetwater! ok, this comes from deep within me Caught into Sorrow she closes her eyes wishing for someone to wake her up but she's not sleeping this is not a dream it's what we carelessly call reality it's hard to believe it but there's no way out from this nightmare which is real somehow caught into sorrow no place to hide no shoulder to cry no reasons to smile nothingness, inside of her left to realise that nothing lasts forever but the pain she feels inside she gets home, alone wishig her grief away but no one's there no one's waiting for her and it's hard to believe it but there's no way out from this nightmare which is real somehow caught into sorrow no place to hide no shoulder to cry no reasons to smile and it's hard to believe it it's hard to realise that this endless nightmare is real somehow __________________ Last edited by Loneca : 12-27-2004 at 02:06 PM.

12-28-2004, 07:27 PM	#109 (permalink)
Kittencat Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Age: 18 Posts: 333 Points: 4,850.19 Bank: 2,753.37 Total Points: 7,603.56 Donate	Loneca Loneca Loneca...... YOU ROCK!!!!!!!! haha Anyway, I wish I had your talent. I dont think anything except for Lunars could match that (had to say that so she wont kill me) lol. Well anyway, continue on with your writing, you could do so well, I can feel it . __________________ They know no other life but this, From the cradle they are claimed...

12-29-2004, 03:24 PM	#110 (permalink)
Lunar Sky Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Somewhere that only the truly inspired can appreciate Age: 22 Posts: 265 Points: 322.58 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 322.58 Donate	Wow...I'm sorry this is so short, but I cannot think of ANY good words for it!! My compliments don't seem to do the song justice.... __________________ They say it's my fault But I want her so much x3

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12-15-2004, 04:29 AM	#101 (permalink)
sweetwater Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 862 Points: 142.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 142.00 Donate	likewiae loneca...beautiful song lunar sky.

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sweetwater Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 862 Points: 142.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 142.00 Donate	omg loneca...that is so good...`after so many tears, i'm lost in nowhere'...talk about an ending...

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sweetwater Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 862 Points: 142.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 142.00 Donate	yeah, i love the chorus too...

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