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01-16-2005, 12:35 PM
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Thank God!
 Join Date: Apr 2004
Location: Colombia
Age: 20
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thank you so much sweetwater, Codger, Oceanic, Kittencat and Lunar Sky!! *cries*
I've been offline for so long and i wish i had something good to show this time (now that I'm back). this is all i have, but I promise something good will come. it's gone way up high where you took me once the place we found is not there anymore. the field we sewed with dreams and tears where we used to breathe is not there anymore. but where is it now? when i need to lay down where is it now? when i must breathe it's not there anymore.
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07-31-2005, 01:14 PM
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Thank God!
Join Date: Apr 2004
Location: Colombia
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_____________________ Ok, I noticed most of my work is lost (maybe 'cause of the recent 'shut down' or however it's called), eight of my songs/poems are missing, but the sad thing here is that I don't have them all written somewhere else so I really lost them. So today I'm just posting the ones I could save somehow or at least I can remember. I've heard So I've heard you went so far away from this land wishing never to come back again looking for what you never lost and so you went away I've heard nothing's been the same since that day you got what you asked for you got even more but deep inside you know what you wanted all along wasn't there at all I've heard you went so far away from this land wishing never to come back home again and somehow you forgot what you are, where you're from you're not even yourself anymore was that what you asked for? I have heard all of your failures all of your lonely days while being so far away I've heard they've seen you wishing you could come back home wishing you never left Décadence How glorious how worthless no one could ever see it's been kept locked inside, long lost meaningless prophecy Fear what he says but enjoy what he offers close your eyes now lose it all without knowing So face it, feel it, bleed it, trying to make it disappear and now fear it, cry it, wash it, just to know it won't fade away senselesss risk carelessly taken and you know you're into this so face what is coming feel what it brings bleed as it grows you know you're into this where did you fall? what have you done? how could this be? are you aware of what you've done? So face it, feel it, bleed it, trying to make it disappear and now fear it, cry it, wash it, just to know it won't fade away You took what he said you enjoyed his offer and now you lost it all without knowing Not Tonight Tonight you lock the door and not even a kiss goodnight no, not tonight. Tonight there's only you, you and no one else, no one else but you. and I'm left outside alone with not even a kiss goodnight, no, not tonight. Eternal at night silence screaming blinded at night silence by every thought by every word stare at you eyes beyond the dark I still belong to you my love stare at you eyes look for some more and I'm yours my eternal love True in you lies is what I find I still belong to you my love stare at you eyes look for some more and I'm yours my eternal love silently keeping away from your arms looking for another warm place to hide no place seems to be the one that I want is in you eyes where I'll find all I need to survive ____ there are still many missing ones, so I'll keep on searching.
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07-31-2005, 04:14 PM
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Apocalypse Please
  Join Date: Jul 2003
Age: 22
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i really hope that you will find them Loneca, it would be a shame if they were lost. what sucks is that it happened to me, a lot of the ones i had up in my thread were lost with the crash since i had not written them in a journal or anything
 . anyways, i definitely remembered I've Heard when I read it. i really love all four pieces you posted!!! there's nothing to criticize, they are all excellent!! my favorite though was Decadence ^_^. <3 |
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07-31-2005, 08:00 PM
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Join Date: Aug 2004
Location: Somewhere that only the truly inspired can appreciate
Age: 22
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Amazing poems Loneca, I can definately see the growth from your first poem and your current ones. I also lost a lot of poems that I had not written down in the crash. I, unfortunately, cannot remember any lines from them, so I'm stuck. I like your vocabulary in these pieces. You give good details, but you do not linger on them; you go straight to the point. Continue to write, for the good of evboard!
<3
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08-29-2005, 12:48 PM
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Thank God!
Join Date: Apr 2004
Location: Colombia
Age: 20
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Thank you soooooo much oceanic, lunar and gracias martin
 finally an pudate! this little song/poem isn't really done yet but I love it's point so I decided to post it. well hope you guys like it! EDIT## It's decided! I'll post an a capella sample for that which will exclude the french and german parts. Nasciturus The end of your creation in death association [pas si facile mais je voudrais, pas si facile mais vous voulez] Should I admire your determination or fear this extermenination [Verzeihen, schreie ich Gnade, schreie ich] I cry for your hand as I see how ends what's been with 'love' conceived and I cry and scream but you just don't seem to be listening Thought I've heard you I've heard you everynight you've told me how cruel's the world outside, beyond the one I know your sweet warm core and I'm not sure why but I long to be there I've felt every tear I know everything I am insde, open your heart hear me as I cry: I long to be alive
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08-31-2005, 01:20 PM
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Koroleva
Join Date: Oct 2003
Location: Buenos Aires
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Can't wait to listen to it!
Nice work  What do the french and german parts mean anyway?
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