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**Oceantron** · 09-01-2005, 11:31 AM

i really loved it. it has a wonderful flow to it. i did understand the german part of it, but not the french. i love reading ur work so much Loneca!!!

Loneca · 10-27-2005, 07:10 PM

alright... this is an old poem I wrote. at least for me it has a deep meaning 'cause it describes one of the hardest moments of my life. it's really from within...

WELCOME TO HEAVEN

let me become one
with the ones who cry
now I must be one
with the ones who scream
let me find my place
'cause here's where I belong

This is not where I long to be
not the place I want to be
but it's the only place
I know I must stay
and somehow I know
it's the only place where I belong

let me follow you
let me close your eyes
hold your hand
let me tall you again
I love you, goodbye.

There's something else but I don't think it has much sense in english as I wrote it in spanish and about the content might not make that much sense 'cause of the difference of cultures as it's a relly, REALLY personal thing and also translation problems. So, hope you like it!

En un día como este - In a day like this
en que empiezo a pensar - I start thinking
cuantas horas nos esperan - how many hours are left
para poder despertar - for us to wake

Tal vez culpa de tu suerte - Maybe 'cause of luck
o tan solo un accidente - or just 'cause of an accident
en que dos vidas se encontraron - in which two lifes met
y desde ése día se amaron - and since that day they loved each other

pero, como vas a odiar - but, how will you hate
a quien siempre te cuidó - the one who took care of you
quien su mano te extendió - who's given you his hand
y te brindó de su calor - and gave you a warm home
pero, como vas a olvidar - but, how will you hate
esa sonrisa de vida - that smile of life
que acabó con tu mal día - that ended your rainy day
y alegró tu corazón - and made your heart so happy

Pero la vida siempre es dura - But life's always hard
donde no mucho perdura - nothing lasts too much
y los sueños que se juntan - and the dreams that get together
tan solo dirán adiós - will only say goodbye

Si todo esto fue una pesadilla - If it was all a nightmare
bien dejó lo que iluminaría tu vida - it left what would light your life
los frutos de la unión sagrada - the fruits of the holy union
que día a día alumbran tu morada - that day by day light your home
que traen ese aire de paz a tus días - that bring this air of peace to your days
y poco a poco son la razón de tu vida - and step by step are your life reason

Y me levanto - And I wake up
entonces pienso - then I wonder
en qué momento fue todo esto - when did all this happen
y me levanto - and I wake up
y me arrepiento - and I regret
de todo el daño - for all the pain
que sintió tu pecho - your chest felt

Y ahora tan sola - and now so lonely
quién va a velar - who will guard
por mis sueños en la oscuridad - my dreams in the dark
ahora tan sola - and now so lonely
quién va buscar - who will look for
la fe que había perdido días atrás - the faith had lost days ago
júrame ahora - swear now
que tu estarás - that you'll be
día a día conmigo y nada más - day by day with me and nothing else
júrame ahora - swear now
que auque te vas - that thought you're leaving
verás tu nombre en mis acciones por llegar - you'll see your name in my acts
Déjame pensar - Let me think
que no te has ido - that you haven't left
y vas conmigo hasta el final - and you go with me until the end

in the lovely memory of daddy. [9th January 2005]

twistedangel · 10-27-2005, 07:37 PM

from the deepest of sorrows come such entrancing and deppressing words.
trns: Its really really good. you should think of wrighting contests maybe. Also i'm sorry for you're lost even if it was a long time ago.

**Oceantron** · 10-27-2005, 07:54 PM

hey Loneca, i'm sorry about your dad

. it was a wonderful piece from beginning to the end so there's no favorite part to pick. thank you for sharing it with us *hugs*

<333333

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i think the piece you just told me about has now become my favorite out of all the ones i've seen posted by you. i can only imagine how it is in spanish since it's always a pain to translate things. but you still did that mastefully!! this is such a brilliant line

Quote:

the fruits of the holy union

. you rule Loneca, always did and always will!!!!

SoundOfSilence · 10-28-2005, 11:12 AM

i have read through your thread and i must say, i like your poems very much. the way you describe sth is awesome, you did a nice job. i love "i cant leave" and this words of your poem "caught into sorrow"

Quote:

Originally Posted by Loneca

nothingness, inside of her
left to realise that
nothing lasts forever
but the pain she feels inside
she gets home, alone
wishig her grief away
but no one's there
no one's waiting for her
and it's hard to believe it
but there's no way out
from this nightmare
which is real somehow

keep it up
<3333333, nadine

Loneca · 11-20-2005, 10:10 PM

hello everyone! I thought I'd post my work for the ev cd cover contest in the Evanescence chat forum... hope you guys like it. The followings were created in fireworks, it's the first time I do something like this and so they are pretty simple.

this one won the second round!

there's also another one but I'll post it later

RodWhispering · 03-23-2006, 06:20 PM

Those are awesome! I really like the one of Amy´s face

Svetlana-S.V.D. · 05-02-2006, 02:15 PM

You have amazing your stuff thread! Your poems are very touching!
Espesially I liked "I've heard"... it's very living...

Evanescence "beyond death" is awesome!

Ethereal · 05-03-2006, 11:25 AM

Wow, your stuff is really amazing!

I like the "covers" ..They look great.
Keep it up! *reps ya*

<33 Kathy

OdeToTheMuse · 05-03-2006, 11:50 AM

Omg, the last pictures are awesome!!!

and your poems are soo beautiful and profound, I love em.
can't wait to see more

*reps*

-claudine

10-27-2005, 07:10 PM	#122 (permalink)
Loneca Thank God! Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Colombia Age: 20 Posts: 710 Points: 2,448.98 Bank: 2,703.72 Total Points: 5,152.70 Donate	alright... this is an old poem I wrote. at least for me it has a deep meaning 'cause it describes one of the hardest moments of my life. it's really from within... WELCOME TO HEAVEN let me become one with the ones who cry now I must be one with the ones who scream let me find my place 'cause here's where I belong This is not where I long to be not the place I want to be but it's the only place I know I must stay and somehow I know it's the only place where I belong let me follow you let me close your eyes hold your hand let me tall you again I love you, goodbye. There's something else but I don't think it has much sense in english as I wrote it in spanish and about the content might not make that much sense 'cause of the difference of cultures as it's a relly, REALLY personal thing and also translation problems. So, hope you like it! En un día como este - In a day like this en que empiezo a pensar - I start thinking cuantas horas nos esperan - how many hours are left para poder despertar - for us to wake Tal vez culpa de tu suerte - Maybe 'cause of luck o tan solo un accidente - or just 'cause of an accident en que dos vidas se encontraron - in which two lifes met y desde ése día se amaron - and since that day they loved each other pero, como vas a odiar - but, how will you hate a quien siempre te cuidó - the one who took care of you quien su mano te extendió - who's given you his hand y te brindó de su calor - and gave you a warm home pero, como vas a olvidar - but, how will you hate esa sonrisa de vida - that smile of life que acabó con tu mal día - that ended your rainy day y alegró tu corazón - and made your heart so happy Pero la vida siempre es dura - But life's always hard donde no mucho perdura - nothing lasts too much y los sueños que se juntan - and the dreams that get together tan solo dirán adiós - will only say goodbye Si todo esto fue una pesadilla - If it was all a nightmare bien dejó lo que iluminaría tu vida - it left what would light your life los frutos de la unión sagrada - the fruits of the holy union que día a día alumbran tu morada - that day by day light your home que traen ese aire de paz a tus días - that bring this air of peace to your days y poco a poco son la razón de tu vida - and step by step are your life reason Y me levanto - And I wake up entonces pienso - then I wonder en qué momento fue todo esto - when did all this happen y me levanto - and I wake up y me arrepiento - and I regret de todo el daño - for all the pain que sintió tu pecho - your chest felt Y ahora tan sola - and now so lonely quién va a velar - who will guard por mis sueños en la oscuridad - my dreams in the dark ahora tan sola - and now so lonely quién va buscar - who will look for la fe que había perdido días atrás - the faith had lost days ago júrame ahora - swear now que tu estarás - that you'll be día a día conmigo y nada más - day by day with me and nothing else júrame ahora - swear now que auque te vas - that thought you're leaving verás tu nombre en mis acciones por llegar - you'll see your name in my acts Déjame pensar - Let me think que no te has ido - that you haven't left y vas conmigo hasta el final - and you go with me until the end in the lovely memory of daddy. [9th January 2005] Last edited by Loneca : 10-27-2005 at 08:07 PM.

11-20-2005, 10:10 PM	#126 (permalink)
Loneca Thank God! Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Colombia Age: 20 Posts: 710 Points: 2,448.98 Bank: 2,703.72 Total Points: 5,152.70 Donate	hello everyone! I thought I'd post my work for the ev cd cover contest in the Evanescence chat forum... hope you guys like it. The followings were created in fireworks, it's the first time I do something like this and so they are pretty simple. this one won the second round! there's also another one but I'll post it later __________________ Last edited by Loneca : 11-20-2005 at 10:16 PM.

05-02-2006, 02:15 PM	#128 (permalink)
Svetlana-S.V.D. Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Ukraine Age: 24 Posts: 147 Points: 2,109.56 Bank: 607.13 Total Points: 2,716.69 Donate	You have amazing your stuff thread! Your poems are very touching! Espesially I liked "I've heard"... it's very living... Evanescence "beyond death" is awesome! __________________ My stuff ... My band... My land ...the children of chernobyl... Last edited by Svetlana-S.V.D. : 05-02-2006 at 02:18 PM.

05-03-2006, 11:25 AM	#129 (permalink)
Ethereal Post Monkey Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Herne, Germany Age: 17 Posts: 2,427 Points: 26,801.51 Bank: 150,213.92 Total Points: 177,015.43 Donate	Wow, your stuff is really amazing! I like the "covers" ..They look great. Keep it up! reps ya <33 Kathy __________________ I get a little warm in my heart when I think of winter!

05-03-2006, 11:50 AM	#130 (permalink)
OdeToTheMuse Senior Member Join Date: May 2004 Location: I am floatin' in serenity... Age: 18 Posts: 713 Points: 123.16 Bank: 1,210.48 Total Points: 1,333.63 Donate	Omg, the last pictures are awesome!!! and your poems are soo beautiful and profound, I love em. can't wait to see more reps -claudine __________________ DeviantArt. FlickR. ArtThread.

09-01-2005, 11:31 AM	#121 (permalink)
Oceantron Apocalypse Please Join Date: Jul 2003 Age: 22 Posts: 2,308 Points: 1,078.88 Bank: 259,992.66 Total Points: 261,071.54 Donate	i really loved it. it has a wonderful flow to it. i did understand the german part of it, but not the french. i love reading ur work so much Loneca!!!

10-27-2005, 07:37 PM	#123 (permalink)
twistedangel Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2005 Age: 18 Posts: 145 Points: 40.98 Bank: 165.26 Total Points: 206.24 Donate	from the deepest of sorrows come such entrancing and deppressing words. trns: Its really really good. you should think of wrighting contests maybe. Also i'm sorry for you're lost even if it was a long time ago.

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RodWhispering Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: In a place where I fall and all is lost Age: 17 Posts: 486 Points: 528.63 Bank: 486.67 Total Points: 1,015.30 Donate	Those are awesome! I really like the one of Amy´s face

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